The Reckless Man Who Started from Tianchi

Before writing, let me review the TV series. Firstly, Shenhou did not practice the magical power of Vajra Indestructibility. Secondly, Gu Santong said that he lied to Shenhou and said that a person other than a boy could not practice Vajra Indestructibility. Then why did the secret book say that non-boys practiced it? My guess is that Gu Santong discovered the secret book a long time ago and then added it to play with others.

The most taboo thing when writing about Zhu Tianwen is to make emotional evaluations of the original characters, whether they are villains or heroes.

I went to work as a dog licker for Shuang Long in The Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty again. Although they are the two protagonists, they don't need you. I rushed to be the master of Double Dragons and gave them a martial arts gift package. I have read many novels of the same type. Whenever I come to the world of The Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, I like to teach Shuang Long well

Hey guys, the main character is a eunuch. I finished saying goodbye

I couldn't stand it until I saw the second chapter. It's so fucked up.

It's just the author's obscenity. Have you read the original work?

The most taboo thing about writing about Zhu Tianwen is the inability to grasp the character traits of the characters in the original text, the writing style is not good, and the plot development cannot withstand scrutiny. The film and television and the novel feel like they are not the same person, which is particularly inconsistent, so it is still a joke.

When writing martial arts novels, remember to look at the background clearly. The indestructible power of King Kong does not require a child body.

The psychological description at the beginning is a bit retarded. There is a method called silence and observation.

I suggest you find a job in an electronics factory.

The protagonist is a fighter in Our Lady. If you like Our Lady, you can check it out.

If you don't like writing novels, you always talk about the ways of heaven and heaven

Gu Santong first came to Tianchi and deceived many people who were looking for the secret book. Later, he met Zhu Wuwu who was looking for the secret book together (or he found the secret book first and added the boy body to the secret book of the Vajra Indestructible Magic Skill to practice it and can only transform 5 times (deceiving Zhu Wuwu)).

A small suggestion, I hope the author will revise the second chapter. I don't know if it will affect others, but at least it will persuade me to quit.

The review is well written, please stop writing it.

The writing is so perfunctory, going here and there, and I don't know what the protagonist wants to do.

Forget it, it's not for writing books