
After Passing Through the Book, I Became a Heroine Seeking Death and Desperately Trying to Survive.
穿书后我成了作死女配疯狂求生
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- Completed
- Length
- 211k Words
- Genre
- Romantic Youth
- Audience
- Female
- Subgenre
- Pure Youth Romance
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It looked like a woman seeking death and breeding like crazy. . . . I made myself laugh silly
The writing is very delicate, and the plot and characterization are also good. It can be seen that the author is very careful. The subject matter is of a very potential kind. If it is written well, it will definitely be successful. I would like to make some small suggestions. First, it is best to avoid one sentence or one line of words in each paragraph, which is easy for visual fatigue. One paragraph of four lines is the most comfortable for readers. Second point, the number of words in each chapter can be slightly larger. Normally it can be 2,000 or 3,000 words. Some chapters can be merged appropriately. If it is too short, it may feel a little watery (@, @), and the title of each chapter is best to be prefixed with "Chapter 1 xxx", the effect will be better. The third point is that the inner drama of the protagonist can be reduced, with more action and scene descriptions. The interactions between the characters should not be too deliberate and should be more natural, which can remind readers of a more vivid campus life. Well, although the suggestions I gave may not be very constructive, haha, I hope the author can keep writing, come on^0^~