Ming Dynasty Yin Yang Official

I didn't see anything related to Onmyoji, but I saw a scene about licking a widow in the early stage, dozens of pictures about him messing with the princess, and dozens of pictures about a robber.

It looked good at first, but when I saw that Qingyunzi used some psychedelic smoke to ask about the identity of the protagonist, the protagonist claimed to be Taiqing Moral Heavenly Lord, and then even deceived Qingyunzi, I suddenly lost interest. Do you think Qingyunzi is a fool? You are treating readers as fools...

There are many problems, here are just a few: 1. The wording and sentence making are too ridiculous, talking about farmer uncles, hard-working farmers, etc. 2. The author has not grasped the focus of his novel at all. People who will come in to read it are most likely interested in feng shui, fortune telling, ancient weather forecasts and other plots. Everyone is probably looking forward to the protagonist using the power of weather satellites to pretend to be gods and ghosts in ancient times, and at the same time bring changes to that era. But the author bangs his hammer here and there, flirting with widows, improving looms, improving papermaking, inventing toilet paper and soap, and starting a business. I want to say, author, have you ever thought that maybe your focus is wrong... 3. The setting is very confusing. The weather satellite is already a big golden finger, and he also engages in Feng Shui formations. It seems to have a fantasy potential, and it feels like it may be different later.

The psychological quality of the space workers has not been shown at all. Instead, they are like elementary school students, babbling and having a strong desire to express themselves.

It feels like the protagonist has no IQ and is showing off his IQ everywhere.

Anyway, I felt that he was beaten by his grandmother for no reason, and even said that he wanted to sever the relationship. I couldn't understand it and couldn't agree with it.

The main character is too dancey and not my cup of tea.

I know how to calculate horoscopes and have done some research. If any interested book friends can provide me with birth dates, I will do the calculations 😏😏

The pig's feet are so awesome, I'm afraid others won't know that they are traveling through time and space to show off their presence! This invention, that invention! If pig's feet and pig's feet are originally for research, forget it. The problem is that a fortune teller comes up with all kinds of modern styles! Do others have low IQs?

😆Is the Yin Yang official an intersex person?

It's a little bit toxic. If you like to see the protagonist doing all kinds of things and read books without thinking, you can read it.

It's not too late for Jiajing and Wanli Daming, the sun and the moon are all shining in the Han Dynasty

Bet against God and win half the battle. Who could have known that I have a satellite in the sky!

Suggestion: Keep the rhythm and improve your writing skills. The protagonist has a limited start, which is borrowed from the limitations of history. The story unfolds slowly in the later stages. While completing his own purpose, it will inevitably bring unexpected effects. For example, the atomic bomb is both a technology and a murderous weapon. As a time traveler, I can better understand this sense of propriety. If it is yin and yang, it is yin and yang. If it is destiny, there will be destiny. How do we modern people view the humiliating history of the past: Playing with princes with beacon fire? . Burning books and trapping Confucians? The difficulty of Jingkang? The Tumu Fort Incident? The Opium War? It's not possible that someone can really travel through the past and change these things! But there should always be some expectations. If there is history, it is history. If you have expectations, they will eventually be written down. Looking forward to how we can join hands with Jiajing to achieve Ming Dynasty in the future.

This is the first time I've made so much money investing in a new book 😭

"The Yin and Yang Officials of the Ming Dynasty" suggestion floor!

I want to write about Yin and Yang, but I dare to pretend to be Taiqing and commit suicide.

It's too dancey, and it feels a bit like filming a costume idol drama, such as opening a store, or a robber kidnapping a princess. If you think about it carefully, it doesn't make sense. Not only do you provide others with so many ways to make money, but you yourself are incapable of doing business, so in the end, how can you not be the one who has the final say? They are the robbers who carry the crime of rebelling and destroying the nine tribes. There are only a few of them. People who hijack the government? I'm afraid that no one will know that there are robbers here, and I'm afraid that the court won't send troops to encircle and suppress him. Moreover, a princess travels far away without being accompanied by twenty or thirty guards? There are not many of them with this identity.

The idea is quite good. I've read a few chapters and the writing is okay. But the plot is too weak. Please write an outline.