Douluo's Heavenly Crystal Beast! Transform!

Some people have written about this. Some people wrote that the Five Spirit King doesn't want to be cute. It has the same combat effectiveness as Luo Sanpao🐷It's quite interesting to suddenly transform 😁

It's a bit late to catch up. The Divine Weapon Tianjing can actually refer to the settings in Divine Weapon Xuanqi. The eight attributes plus a martial soul avatar, and the nine soul rings are all there. There is no need to design additional soul skills at all.

This book was originally written just for myself, because I thought the Divine Weapon Beast would be fun and powerful as a martial spirit, but no one wrote it. When I wrote this book, I didn't like the characters in Douluo Dalu to be thoughtless and stupid. I didn't like the content of bitter hatred, deep hatred, and strong anger. This may be related to my personality, or it may be related to the first online novel I read. The first novel I read was a novel by blue-collar Xiao Xiaosheng. His novel is like a travelogue. The protagonist does not fight for anything, and his character is completely different from the protagonists of other online novels. I also hope to write a funny protagonist who only pretends to be cool at critical moments, but my writing style is not good and I can't write well. I humbly accept criticism from readers about poor writing, because I really am not good at writing.

After Chapter 26, Shennong could no longer bear it.

Fuck, two days ago I was writing a Douluo fanfic about the Sky Crystal Beast Spirit. I had already thought of the character. My mother is the blue electric Tyrannosaurus Zong Yuyan, and she has a martial soul purification bracelet. My own martial soul is a mutation of the blue electric Tyrannosaurus. The non-possessed beast's martial soul can transform into a divine weapon. As a result, this book was recommended to me today. Is it really outrageous?

Is this pornography? The young magician is the power of justice, courage, etc. This thing is written about the power of evil.

It is both a weapon spirit and a beast spirit. Isn't it similar to Snake Spear Douluo?

You don't think Tang Hao will give up revenge, do you? Living in seclusion is just a helpless move. He still has to heal his injuries. As a strong man, do you think he doesn't know how to take precautions before they happen? In a world where the strong are respected, if you think too much of others, you are leaving your life in the hands of others! How can he ensure that his son will not have a powerful enemy in the future? The fact that he is born with full soul power is enough to prove the protagonist's natural beauty. Doesn't he make plans for the future?

I feel that the writing style suddenly became stiff, the author also started to let himself go, and the protagonist became more and more promiscuous.

The lyrics are so awkwardly copied (•́ω•̀ ٥) I can't help but sing

Let me try the poison on everyone. It doesn't look good if you don't reply.

This idea is quite good, and I can still persist in the occasional toxic points in the early stage. But it feels like the author has to speed up the pace starting from chapter 50 or so. There are many places that have no description and just go through it. It feels like reading a running account. The other thing is the harem story, the speed of the car is a bit low, maybe it's a new driver, and he doesn't know how to avoid pitfalls in terms of description 🙂 Looking forward to the next chapters, good luck to the author

The twin martial souls were exposed at the beginning and they agreed to join the martial soul hall. Maybe they were not afraid of death. After all, Tang Hao was in the same village.

Is it a single heroine?

The writing style is a bit stiff and a little bit poisonous, but the creativity is okay. I hope I can finish it.

Forget it, I saw that the author was poisoned in Chapter 7. The author's writing is not just bad, it's very bad. It doesn't matter that the Titled Douluo misjudged the type and age of the soul beast. You have to create a second creation to say that the external soul bone can be robbed, and then give the protagonist an external soul bone to force the protagonist not to use it. The first soul skill obtained can even heal the hidden wounds of Titled Douluo. If it can be easily healed, it is not called hidden wounds.

This picture by the author is very nice. Where did you find it?

Suddenly I discovered that the Zhuge Divine Crossbow had advanced Dou Yi As a result, even the five gods could not hide

As long as you beat Tang San, we will be good friends

No one writes about Xiao Taixu? Isn't that a yo-yo? What's wrong with HuoShunWang that he has forgotten how to fight? Wouldn't it be nice for him to just play yo-yo and become a leisurely Dharma King?

After reading it quickly, it's a real hammer, Xiao Huang's article

As you write, you suddenly start crying like ghosts and wolves howling. Who told you about your writing technique?

It's okay in the early stage, but not so good in the later stage.

@Author, the current atmosphere is quite good. I always feel that you want to write Liu Erlong as one of the female protagonists, which I feel is very unreasonable. Also, when I look at it, why do I always feel that there is a big reversal later on? Or is it the kind of reversal that I can't accept? I hope the author can surprise people and not scare people .

I hope you can update to between 500 and 600.

I'll give you a monthly pass and update it carefully.

It feels like Douluo is almost over. Has the author thought about what to write next? Should I finish the book directly or prepare to write Zhutianliu?