Comprehensive Level: Immortal Martial Arts Starts from the Tomb of the Divine Eagle

What the hell are you writing? There are two points of poison. ① I went to a brothel and picked up a woman who was not a prostitute. I chatted, chatted, touched and seduced her. Then the protagonist asked her how much it would cost to redeem her body. When she learned that it was 5,000 taels, she was so scared that she ran away. Even when the woman was willing to give the 500 taels she had saved over the years to the protagonist, the protagonist said, "It's not that I don't want to redeem you, but that I really don't have the ability." The protagonist's martial arts skills are only 4,500 taels, which is nothing. This woman knows that "professing one's art but not one's body" is nonsense, but there are no officials or rich people with enough weight to come, so she says she will give her first time to the protagonist, and the protagonist "you will meet a man you like in the future, so I won't touch you." Are you making me laugh? Is this in a brothel? This place is highly toxic. Author, are you sure you don't want to change it? ② Hong Lingbo's first time was given to the protagonist in the woods.

I feel like the protagonist doesn't behave like a thirty-four-year-old person. I'm curious, why do so many authors have to find trouble to add a past life background when they can obviously give the protagonist a simple past life background, and it also conflicts with the subsequent description.

Also, your writing of Zhao Zhijing is very inconsistent with the original work. Does that mean Zhao Zhijing is ambitious? ? ? That's called a villain... Guo Jing beat him up when he entered the Quanzhen Sect, so he took out his anger on Yang Guo... This paragraph was explained in the original work at the Heroes Conference...

There is a problem, Xiao Longnu is no longer a master, why are you still called Master Li?

I have an idea. As of now, your randomly triggered gold finger is not worthy of the term "maximum understanding". I think you can add a hidden setting. The deeper the protagonist's knowledge, the more powerful the effect will be when the full level understanding is triggered. This can explain why after the full level understanding is triggered, even the middle martial arts cannot be reached. If it continues like this, let alone the immortal martial arts, even the divine eagle will have a hard time transcending!

You are too entangled in your writing, thinking about three wives and four concubines and also missing your wife in your previous life??? What do you want to express? . .

Author Da Da: It proves that the protagonist Yang Guo has taken over Huang Rong. Want to see 👀

When I saw the second picture, you are so... Yang Guo has changed from a smart person to a fool and a waste. I want to know how many years the protagonist can live without the golden finger...

After the appraisal is completed, I am writing a romance novel. The protagonist Yang Guo has been planting vegetables and other things next to the ancient tomb, and talking about love stories.

Why! This book is suitable for beginners! Old readers, please don't come and join in the fun.

The author said: Don't talk nonsense about Cao's spirit, but our five good young people in the new era must display the spirit of Wei and Wu. Carry forward the spirit of Wei Wu to all heavens and all realms.

I feel that the biggest shortcoming of this book is the harem. There are multiple heroines, but they all meet one after another. I can't count how many there are, and you can't write them down. Generally, controlling 3 or 4 multiple lines is overwhelming, and especially when changing maps, you can't bring them with you, and you can't bring them without. If you plan to change the map, it's too simple to include so many in the first map. It's just a burden if you don't have the ability. It's better to just have fun.

Why do you still use your old name when you have traveled through time and become Yang Guo?😅

He is really a water king, so good at water😂, I think you are good at writing love dramas!

After traveling through time as Yang Guo, he must sever ties with Guo Jing. After all, in troubled times, kill the Holy Mother first. You must stay away from the person who keeps telling you to be generous, otherwise he will be struck by lightning and it will harm you.

The protagonist of the Condor is really fascinated by his fighting power, and the whole world suppresses the kick of returning food. It can't crush an army, and it can't kill an army by coming and going freely. The most stingy fighting force in history

Furthermore, it is simply unwise for Zhao Zhijing to be adamant. Isn't it really a bad idea to make some conspiracy and quit the whole party openly?

Just one heroine is enough, don't have too many! ! !

I want to see a single female lead. To change the female lead, at least Xiao Longnu must die.

Can the author accept Li Mochou? I want to see 😍

The author should use less cooking skills to count the words

What happened to Ma Yu in The Legend of the Condor Heroes? Didn't Ma Yu die right after the shooting of the eagle, and the divine eagle never appeared? Wasn't it Hao Datong who beat Grandma Sun to death?

The author's description is good. The characters are vivid and vivid, and they are no longer a cookie-cutter template.