Ji Ning's Evil Brother in the Wilderness Chronicles

After reading the previous point, it is true that the author has downplayed the combat power of this wild era. In addition to the expressiveness of each realm, the description of the combat power is weak. To be honest, the combat power of the innate-level combat power of Makurasaki actually surpasses Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, but the Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba written by the author is completely Sage-level combat power, but I just want to say, fuck.

What did you write? It's such a mess, I'm tired of looking at it

The talent of the original protagonist is not considered top-notch in this world, not even top-notch. He rose to prominence because he experienced various difficulties and opportunities later on, which can also be called the halo of the protagonist. Let alone being more talented than the protagonist, even if it is 10,000 times stronger, it is impossible to reach the realm of the protagonist at the end.

The title of this book makes me feel like it was written by a high school or junior high school student!

Why does it look a bit awkward? There aren't any major issues written in the previous chapters, but this one is very awkward.

Tomato's novels have very good protagonists, and many of the protagonists in his novels end up in danger of annihilation. As a time traveler, if you don't have a particularly awesome cheat, it's best not to get in trouble with the original protagonist. After all, if you don't have a particularly awesome cheat, you can guarantee that you can reach his realm, and finally defeat the big devil to save the world. If you have a particularly awesome cheat, are you a little speechless thinking about the original protagonist's possession of this thing? Moreover, Tomato's world view spans a very long timeline. Wouldn't it be more reasonable and better to just create other opportunities?

Both practice swordsmanship? Who finally understands the ultimate supreme swordsmanship?

What is super-top understanding! The author has no feeling at all when writing. The first few chapters are not good.

Fighting monsters and upgrading along the way, there are various fights at every step. The funny thing is that the enemy comes out of nowhere and for no reason.

This is also called super-top understanding. You can't feel it at all. From the beginning to the end, I think that even if it is not as good as another disciple of Patriarch Bodhi who realized a small path in one day, it should be about the same.

It was so uncomfortable to read. I didn't have any writing skills at all. I persisted for a few chapters and really couldn't read anymore. I really don't know how the author wrote so many words.

I'm not asking you to write about grudges and grudges. But the book seems to be a fairy tale novel. I hope to cultivate immortality and Taoism. It's cool and is the main style.

When I look at the introduction, it looks like an old licking dog article.

A lot of verbal chatter, it feels like a newbie

If you call it Ji Ba, more people may see it.

Why do fanfics like the original protagonist of Pengci? When you create a new plot and time period, you can simply apply the settings. The setting of the world view is the most difficult thing in a novel. I have been unable to write my own story about the protagonist in the original Pengci.

Author: The protagonist's early villain seems to be Shaoyan!

Isn't a time traveler who doesn't seize opportunities a good time traveler?

Come on, come on, come on, support the author

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More updates? I seem to be dying?

The world view is grand and the fighting is exciting. I have mastered the writing method of genius style. Please go and collect it.

Change your name or change your direction. Don't get too involved with the original protagonist. Write your own thing. Only by stepping out of your comfort zone can your writing improve. You won't want to click on it after seeing this name.