Filming Hong Kong Movies at Hong Kong Variety World

Filming Chen Haonan's fight with his pheasant girlfriend

The subject matter is very good, but unfortunately the writing style is a bit poor and the logic is a bit off. I suggest the author revise it.

Come on, what are you writing? Are you writing a script? A sentence of dialogue, followed by parentheses and modal particles.

The logic writing is a bit poor and it gives me a headache to read.

There are too many slang words, can there be less? I am more imaginative and my writing style should be improved.

Filming Hong Kong movies in the world of Hong Kong dramas? The police in the Hong Kong comprehensive world thank you very much haha!

The writing is a bit erratic and the logic is too messy and complex.

Is this the struggle history of Wang Jing in another time and space?

Wouldn't it be better to become the richest man after being an entertainment tycoon? If you directly add the superpower in this way, the middle and later stages of the plot will be difficult to write. It's better to specialize in one line

This is the first novel that allowed me to brainstorm the plot of a novel based on the plot of a Hong Kong movie.

After reading the first chapter, I didn't want to read anymore.

To describe it in one sentence, it's a mess.

The subject matter is really good, but the writing is so bad that I can't even read it and I don't know what to do.

The subject matter is very good, but if the main character doesn't play with n people and lets a few supporting characters play all the time, without a sense of immersion, then the book will be useless.

Very well written and very funny hahahaha 😄

It feels a bit like an early starting point, but the writing and logic are lacking. Much better than foot wraps

Too watery. The subject matter is pretty good.

The introduction is too Homo, give me Shixue! Three times, three times!

Why can I only read four pictures? Isn't there more than twenty chapters?

I quite like reading it, just stick to your own way of writing.

Why are you writing so slowly? Do you want to take a knife?

What are you writing about? Was it written about sleepwalking?

The subject matter is good, but the writing is a bit poor