The Recovery of Spiritual Energy Does Not Affect My Love at All

The emotional line is good, but it's too fast. The revival of spiritual energy is not shown much, and the protagonist's strength is relatively slow to improve. However, the author said that the protagonist will awaken a special ability, so there is some expectation. I hope the author will write better and better as he writes, come on! Well, the writing is actually a bit sloppy, but it's pretty good.

This is a love story about rebirth through rebirth. Other types of rebirth are acceptable. After all, it is not about love. But I really can't accept a love story about rebirth through rebirth. So I'm going to leave first and post a post to let people who can't accept it avoid the lightning.

Damn it, I just read two more chapters. How could an aunt have so many things? She's so bad. To be honest, it's a bit of an NT plot.

How should I put it? The character setting of the protagonist in the early stage is really not good. It is a bit weak. He relies too much on interacting with the heroine. The spiritual power value given by the system is really bad.

How to say it? Personally, I still like this sweet love style. However, in this context, strength is particularly important. To put it simply, the strength feels like it is improving too slowly (promotion is too slow). Based on the way the author writes it, it is estimated that one year of college life will take a thousand chapters, which means that from campus life to fighting monsters, it will take at least a thousand chapters. The name and system of this novel seem to be mainly about two people falling in love, which I understand. But the background of the novel you wrote, coupled with the protagonist's increasing strength, is also the reason. I don't think it's possible, since everyone is gone, what kind of love is there, a sunset love? (The quick-draw type) So I think the author should also take into account the background of this era. In this era, the strength really improves too slowly!

Why does it feel like the heroine is written like some green tea who doesn't accept the last step and enjoys the pursuit of boys all the time. The female protagonists in the book are all like this, and in the end the male protagonists are killed by the minotaur.

After chasing after it, I found that the author's update situation was a bit bad. Is this going to happen?

All I can say is that it's not too toxic, but the author didn't write from the reader's perspective (he only thought about what he thought and didn't care about the reader's feelings), so the reader felt very uncomfortable.

The initial love line and plot development are different from normal love stories from recognition to familiarity to falling in love because of the setting. Since it is my first time to write a romance novel, the initial development is not described smoothly enough, but the setting is definitely not confusing. I have briefly explained some particularly prominent problems in this chapter. If you find it acceptable, you may wish to continue reading. It will be much better later. The previous ones cannot be significantly changed due to the main plot setting. If you cannot accept the presence of the show, just leave quietly.

Where is the cool spot? I didn't see it.

It's hard to agree with everyone. Authors are human beings and have their own opinions. I don't have that much time to argue with many readers with different tastes. There are good and bad comments in the comments. I don't delete all the bad comments. It's just that some people's comments really affect the mentality and will also affect the readers who click on this book. The story originally originated from life and is higher than life. What you think is unreasonable may not really be me writing it. Some people question whether I have been in love. Not only have I been in love, I have also been married. Peace is that my wife does not accept refutation. Readers who really feel that they can't stand it can leave quietly. There is no need to be so violent. I need readers' support and guidance when writing a book, but I am not here to be criticized. In many places, I have adopted readers' opinions and changed them without affecting the outline. Readers who think this is unreasonable or unreasonable do not need to add trouble to me or themselves. Be gentle to the world, and the world will be gentle back to you.

WC, your introduction is so fascinating.

The three views are upright and not pretentious. The female protagonist has a healthy mind. Although the male protagonist makes some mistakes, they are mistakes that normal people can make. Even the supporting characters have a complete storyline. {"TopicId":"772905819476983808","TopicName":"Share the plot of the novel above"}

When I first started to feel something about it, a system suddenly came on. The main reason was that it hadn't appeared in the first chapter yet. The foreshadowing was pretty good, so when I felt a little bit, the system suddenly came on in chapter seven. It felt like shit was put into your mouth and forced to eat. It changed the taste in an instant. You wanted the system to come in the first chapter, and it wouldn't be so uncomfortable. I don't know where this wind came from. I was simply speechless.

Readers who don't like daily life came to the book because of the title Reiki Resurrection, but found that the book Reiki Resurrection, which is already 150,000 words long, has not been officially launched yet. It is true that the pace I arranged is a bit slow, mainly because some setting reasons require a burst point, and this burst point is also fast. Well, originally I wrote this book because I find daily writing boring, so I wanted to try to make a fusion. The relaxed and relaxed look should be better than simple daily writing. Now there are more daily writings, but in the future the rhythm will gradually become the main line interspersed with daily writing. In fact, when I was preparing this book, I struggled with whether to write about daily life or about spiritual recovery. I finally decided to combine them and write them. I need to keep trying to coordinate the progress of the two. Some people think that the emotional line is a bit fast, but in fact it is not fast. The male and female protagonists have not yet been officially determined. Relationships, after graduating from college, you will get married and have children. Each stage of the relationship is slightly different, and the story will be different. There is a lot to write, don't worry about the story not being long, plus the setting of spiritual recovery, the two will grow up together in the future. The story will be longer.

Update🙂

If your family members can join the group, hurry up and join the group.

If you don't understand, just ask. The starting point is, the earlier the book is put on the shelf, the better? The author will update soon. I went to school. I hope I can see it during the next holiday 😍

The writing was very good, but unfortunately the exposure was not enough and the results were not satisfactory, and it was ended hastily. The first such a good-looking fantasy fantasy with a single female protagonist is still a martial arts master.

I thought it was well written, but when I subscribed I realized why there were so few votes?

I haven't finished reading it yet, so I would like to ask, has the male protagonist become a transcendent or an awakened person? Could anyone who has read the latest chapter have time to help me clear up my confusion?

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Although it ended hastily in the end, let's still spread some flowers.

It's too fragmented. The male protagonists before and after the system are too fragmented. I quite like the male protagonist who is relaxed and relaxed at the beginning, but the gap is here. I don't reject the system. I am an enlightenment novel about the system, but it is too greasy, right? ? ? The male protagonist's series of actions are really true. Will anyone like this? ? ? I can't imagine how the heroine will fall in love with him in the end. It's too far-fetched, especially the way he handles it. Alas, I thought a lot and expected a lot. When I saw the introduction, I thought it was a love relationship with squinting eyes on the heroine, a double-powerful relationship. When I went in and saw the engagement, I was a little disappointed, but it's not impossible. Let's start. In the end, the two people were self-deprecating when they rejected the engagement. They relied on "fate" to get together. Then when I saw the system, I was disgusted. It's still the kind of "love system" that clearly puts a price on relationships and takes getting along as a task. It's quite thoughtful. I know how to use AI, even here! I still have expectations, in case of a reversal, I can't decide the ending at the beginning, so I read it with this mentality, but I was still disappointed. I read the first few pictures with a smile. Although the hero saves the beauty is cliché, it is indeed a good point. My aunt laughed and got up, but the more she looked at it, the more she frowned, maybe it was a bit too greasy. . . The uncle got up as soon as he felt the sensation, ugh