Striker and Dashing Brother

Come on! Come on! Come on!

As of Chapter 28, I'm not happy if I don't vomit. I don't really mind the slow pace of the novel. Some are fast, some are refreshing, some are slow, some are slow. The problem is that it's too slow for you! First of all, the protagonist has not been described as scoring a goal yet. He is a center, and it feels like he is described as a midfielder. In fact, this is nothing. If you don't score, you won't score. The main reason is that you can't see the progress of the protagonist, whether it is technical ability or mentality. Most of the novels on the market have protagonists with rough skills and strong bodies. With outstanding awareness, they can gain a foothold with one move and then improve their skills later. This book is about a protagonist with outstanding skills and a weak body. I thought it was a good perspective at first, but I didn't expect the author to really not give you any pleasure at all. Skills are limited by physical fitness. His dribbling skills above 80 are directly cut in half, and his shooting skills above 60 have not been used once. Why should he play a center with such a low desire to shoot? In the end, in the eyes of the coach, the protagonist felt it was a pity to abandon him. He even refused the invitation of another excellent coach when he was not sure whether he could enter the first team. The reason turned out to be because I didn't know how long I could play under you. Brother, is it a question of how long you can play? It is a question of whether you can play. Besides, don't your golden fingers just need games to improve yourself? Even if the old man's knees can only last for one season, he still has to play as the main player in the Premier League for one season. What a huge improvement. Doesn't the author arrange this just to let the protagonist encounter a miracle?

I've read Chapter 40 so far, and I'd like to briefly share my thoughts. This football novel gives people the feeling of deliberately torturing the author. The author exhausts the readers' patience step by step on what he considers to be a reasonable path! Moreover, the pace is very slow, which makes it a bit uncomfortable in the early stages. Anyway, I can't hold on 🥺

The biggest flaw of this book is that the football skills need to be cooled down, and then the protagonist, a player who came off the bench 6 times and got 3 assists, does not have a formal contract, so he cannot survive without a part-time job.

I'm going back now, so I'll leave first as a courtesy. I really can't accept such a frustrating plot. I wish the author will write better and better. I'm very satisfied with everything above 😅

The transfer to Bayern was poisoned, and the price is 80 million. Transfers are usually higher than this. The transfer to Bayern is 37 million. Although there are fluctuations, the total is 60 million. Isn't this nonsense? The author is a Bayern fan and cannot write like this.

It's great to be able to write the protagonist as well as the supporting characters. I just want to ask, is there any difference if there is a protagonist? Fox City was originally the Premier League champion in the 15th season. With an additional protagonist, can they increase the goal difference or win the championship early? The early writing is very good, but the rest is like shit. It's a waste of my entire subscription.

Personally, I feel that the plot of this book is frustrating for a secondary reason. The main reason is that the protagonist is unable to establish himself, has a dull personality, and does not work hard enough. He wears a plug-in and acts like a dog licker. The villains are all coquettish, and the protagonist is low-key and restrained. Then there is a running account of the game, which makes people sleepy! Brother, if I ask you to delete a little of the plot except for the protagonist, then make the protagonist more fleshed out.

Why do you have to go for the Leicester City Miracle? ... Historically, the Miracle of the Blue Fox is the same with or without you. Once the protagonist is added, it is said that this miracle is indispensable without him. He takes up the role of the Polo King and Vardy, which is really a loss. Since there is a Miracle of the Blue Fox in the Premier League, why can't there be a Miracle of Hartford? Farmer Miracle? Little bee miracle? Wolf King Miracle? Seagull miracle? Maybe these may not necessarily succeed, maybe the outcome is destined to fail under the impact of big6, but the courage to try and the young ambition of daring to show off the sword are more charming than these clumsy protagonists Draw each teammate to life, and sort out the abilities and personalities a little bit. Wouldn't it be better to let this bunch of imperfect players, even those who couldn't make a splash in football history before, grow under the cooperation of the team than simply upgrading and changing maps? Maybe the team will end like Super Depor fireworks in the future, maybe the players will run to all walks of life to start a new life that has nothing to do with football, and maybe there will still be people who stick to it, but the love for football they carry in their hearts will be eternal. Only in this way can it touch people from the heart.

The author only reads the highlights, right? I don't know the slightest bit about the salary in the English Championship. You still need to work to support yourself. Is this just relying on the author's imagination? If you don't understand, you just look up the information. If you don't understand, you have to write it down and pretend it. You don't even bother to check the information?

Disgusting readers know how to use it. In Chapter 28, they began to continuously release poisons and identified them as poisonous weeds.

The main substitute of the British Championship winning team, continuous assists, a forward in the Premier League first team, a 20-year-old English household register, and just throw away the 450 weekly salary? ? ? This is still equivalent to a free agent without a professional contract.

It's only in Chapter 40 that the protagonist scores his first goal in the main match, which is amazing, and then he also makes videos on a daily basis, which is so cool.

The three assists in the first 6 games were just a backdrop. After a fight, he was unfairly dealt with and was sent to the Frontier. After being persuaded by the coach of another team, he accepted it with peace of mind. Wouldn't it be more fun to just transfer and play for the old team? Reading a novel makes you feel offended.

Five books, level lv1, let's find a small account to write them in. This account is considered useless. Don't you even read the first thirty chapters of this book?

I gave up after seeing that I would continue to return to Leicester City after the loan. A good horse will never turn back.

I don't know much about football, so I won't comment on the author's content, but after reading Chapter 31, I have a question. Can the team loan this player out without signing a contract, let other teams pay the salary to train the player for you, and then take the player back after the loan period is over? I hope someone who understands can help me understand.

Let me ask, did the protagonist return to the Blue Fox after being loaned? I won't watch it when I get back, it just saves money

The reason why I'm chasing you till now is because the protagonist is at Bayern, but you give me a Real Madrid win!

I think the writing is pretty good. Football players are human beings, and leisure and entertainment are normal.

Fm2022 My team was promoted to the Premier League in the first year, and qualified for the Champions League in fourth place in the second year. I was 12 points behind third place, and won the Champions League in the third year. Second in the league, 15 points behind Liverpool. At the beginning of the fourth year, we have four world-class players in our team. The first ten results of this season: Lost to Liverpool 2-3 in the Community Shield, Defeat the relegation team Nottingham Forest 2-1 at home in the league, Losed to Blue Moon in the European Super Cup 2-3, Losed to Azerbaijan 0-1 in the league away game Senna, lost to Manchester City 1-2 in the league away, beat newly promoted Burnley 4-1 at home, lost to Monchengladbach 1-2 at home, swept Crystal Palace 6-0 at home, beat Liverpool 1-0 at home, lost to Waterworks 1-2 in the League Cup away. Do you know what I want to express? I am already four world-class players, but the wealthy clubs are making improvements every year. Do you see my bumpy results? I'm still the last Champions League champion! Can your little Leicester easily win against a wealthy club? What an international joke!

You dropped 40 million to go to Bayern. How much do you like Bayern?

When I saw a foreigner comforting the protagonist with the promise of a great mission, I finally couldn't help but retreat. . . I have never seen such a frustrating football article. The protagonist's card turned out to be a pseudo-disposable. After dozens of chapters, the protagonist is still in a dusty state (it's no wonder that the protagonist is dusty with such a golden finger), which leads to a scornful and contemptuous scene that is rarely seen in football articles. There are countless layers of low-level dramas about being slapped in the face, but it's nowhere in sight, and judging from the shabby appearance of the protagonist Goldfinger, it feels like it's really far away (he's been drugged away before we even see it, here's a guess)... Some football articles about Goldfinger are small, but they focus on describing the training and growth of the protagonist, but your Goldfinger is set to look like this. In dozens of chapters, the protagonist has been unable to exercise and improve because he has to work part-time to make a living without a contract. The focus is on the protagonist being looked down upon by others and then being slapped in the face. Who can bear this? . . I don't know if the author listened to the persuasion or not. (Anyway, many people have pointed out the poisonous points in this part I just read.) If the writing at the back is okay, I suggest the author come back and change the front. Anyway, this beginning is full of poisonous points and is written with persuasion to quit. It is simply asking the readers to see which one you can endure before being poisoned 😅

I feel relieved when I see so many people scolding me.

After reading hundreds of chapters, the protagonist is British. There's no reason why the British national team doesn't recruit him.

I've read more than a dozen of them, and I haven't even had a small climax. Author, how can you retain readers like this 😅

The author emphasizes several times that the protagonist runs 1 kilometer in half time and 22 meters in one minute... 🙂 Yes, great mathematician

The writing is so rubbish

There is no desire to read this book.

The protagonist signed a gambling agreement, whether he won or lost?