Private Investigation

Not bad, not bad. I usually read the short stories in Qidian as scripts. The last person who gave me this feeling was the Cafe Detective

Not bad, very well written 😁😁😁

I read too many online articles, and suddenly I felt like I was reading a physical book. It was really good.

At first I thought it was a suspense drama, but later I realized it was an urban emotional drama, but the writing is really good.

The flavor of traditional literature has the old flavor of reading magazines and storytelling sessions.

I didn't expect that love is really ridiculous.

If you read it carefully, you will find that it is actually quite wonderfully written and worth reading with a different taste.

It's really good, and the writing is very delicate. I haven't felt like this for a long time.

It felt boring at first, even a bit ridiculous, but I started to feel it later.

I quite like this kind of story, and the ending is not bad.

The rhythm is quite good. If there are too many words, this kind of writing will be dull, but if there are too few words, it won't express emotions. Please support it.

How should I put it, it feels like an old story.

It's still the same, but next time I'll change the style and give it a little surprise, it's pretty good.

The new book is not long, so keep looking forward to it.

I feel like the psychological portrayal is really great! When I read more than half of it, I really felt like I was suffocating. This should be a reading experience that most online articles cannot bring! It's just that the design of some plots is indeed a bit poor, and some bosses pointed it out in the comment area, but the overall feeling is really great! I hope to see more high-quality novels from the author in the future!

After reading Fishing at Work, it's a good story!

Lu Wenqi approached Sun Mingshuo because of boredom, and the boredom was an unprofitable relationship, and she rejected Sun Mingshuo because of boredom, and the boredom was the displeasure of unprofitable work. She has no idea that Kang Yu and Sun both have the same lack of emphasis on emotions and lack of seriousness. You have to choose one between the prodigal son returning with gold and a serious plot design. Both Lu Wenkai and Xue Qinghuai have said that "eldest sisters are like mothers." The former is a character who helps relatives but not others - he has early insight into the "reconciliation" at the end to reduce the error, while the latter is hatred and hands-on planning based on practical principles. At this point, I probably feel that civilian authors who are restricted by laws and regulations cannot create characters that go beyond ordinary morals. With a little help from Qinghuai, they can stand out and not be forced. The key node in the final plot is whether Xue agrees that it will bring harm to himself - "being punished by law" and implicating children like Xue Nian. I believe you already know the answer to the former through the previous words, and I need to explain some reasons for the latter. Parents need children for companionship, but in reality, the normal situation is the other way around. Children need care because they are young and weak. You probably also understand that accompanying others is also the relationship of being accompanied. In the collision of beliefs, no matter what words Xue or you use to convince yourself in the end, do you need "Xiao Nian" or Xiao Nian needs you? In the end, do you compromise or get more correct? A harmonious marriage between parents is the first priority and a necessary relationship between husband and wife. After having children, some couples no longer have a pure relationship as husband and wife, and some will compromise. After all, the other party will have different ideas and emotional problems, but the child will not, because his powerlessness cannot stop you. You also know that your children cannot leave you, and all relationships will be more stable or, in other words, safer. Now switching to the child's perspective, for Xiaonian or Xiaohang, as long as one parent can accompany or take care of them, that is the bottom line. It would be great to have both parties harmonious, but it is not necessary. Xiao thought that with Qinghuai around, he would be "safe and sound", but as an adult, Qinghuai would become vulgar if he compromised the law or became a caregiver for the weak. But I am not saying that I will abandon the weak Xue Nian. This is the gloomy part of the law. If he is not held accountable by the powerful forces of society, he can still live a good life with Xiao Nian, and he can kill enemies or evil people with his own hands. Not allowing punishment is the biggest punishment of the law, but there is never an abstract entity of the law, just a group of people, some institutions, and some irrelevant ideas. Sun Mingshuo will not be forgiven, and Lu Wenqi will not truly "make up" for his mistakes. The former's three-dimensional image is intact, while the latter has shown logical fallacies. Maybe Wenqi will not reject Sun. If you fully acknowledge your narrative connection, she will still be unable to redeem herself if she rejects Sun. The impulsiveness of a person's behavior, "How can you be immersed in the creation of messy novels without any work benefits", to accept the kindness of senior executive Sun more than once, and go to the physical hotel. The plot twist can be understood as your skills. There may be problems and "errors" in the beginning, and the stitching and embedding with superb logic afterwards is in line with the general creation of novels. Xiaohang also mentioned in the previous article "curious stories". I like telling stories, and being curious is also a favorite. The following article allows the family of three to return to normalcy. From your words, you are not at ease. You have not grasped the right, wrong or truth of the ending of people. So I borrowed Lu Wenqi's word and said, "Xiaohang doesn't like it either," but he didn't say anything like that. The first question he asked was "I did it for your own good." He must have been an emotional killer and hypocrite as an adult, just like Wen Qi and Huo Shan. You look like a fool and still accept other people's favor or "goodness". Moreover, Huo Shan really fell in love with Executive Sun half-heartedly. You, Wen Qi, liked her half-heartedly, which is not as pure as her. I know you want to have characters and content that are weird and unexpected and make sense, but you better actually make sense. The word "reason" makes even me feel that if I don't advance, I will retreat, let alone other people. If you like stories, both the person telling the story and the content of the story should eventually become this person. If you don't like those stories, you don't like this person. If you don't like this person, you still have to accept or pursue love, and you still have to get married. Like a raccoon dog, you still have to listen to stories. You used a lot of narrative tricks, but you didn't leave any appropriate hints and "warnings" at all. Your use of narrative tricks was really useful. I think it was a misunderstanding by the readers, regardless of the author. To put it another way, Wen Qi was moved by what a man would do in the wilderness and was cared about. Can you say that Kang Yu didn't care about her, went for a private investigation, didn't even dare to read the content at the end of the video, and revealed a series of personal discomforts in a lot of his personal psychology. You want to interpret it as a relationship between two parties who do not understand each other, and there is a difference and distance in perspective. What Wen Qi cares about is what she cares about, the short-lived passion of pursuing love in college, the capture of an outstanding and reliable executive, and the other person's attempt to stop the crime for the sake of ideals but is understood to be saving her from danger. It suddenly occurred to her that Huo Shan was also entangled in the story when a hero rescued a beauty. In the end, you arranged the ending of Huo Shan, who played a relatively supporting role, as the end of the marriage. This is not good. She, Huo Shan, can be terminated as a supporting role, and Wen Qi can "correct her mistakes as soon as she realizes her mistakes" if she is closely related to the protagonist. Maybe it is not clear at this point that I am paying attention to the logic of Wen Qi's character. After all the foreshadowing, Lu Wenqi cannot and will not. Even if he is lucky enough to turn around, it will still be an unhealable crack. You mentioned "what about glass..." In your article. You have the repetitive idea of ​​how even broken pieces can overcome difficulties. You, I looked back at the description of the family at the end of the case at the beginning. At first Wen Qi was complaining and expressing her dissatisfaction, but later she suggested putting on nice clothes to redeem herself, which seemed to be part of Kang Yu's fault. According to who starts to say something that should not be said, who has a problem, she has a problem, she better really have a problem. It is abrupt and goes against logic. I understand that since I want to do the latter, I will be careful even with the dialogue that is characteristic of the former. Maybe what I said is wrong. You transpose the classic relationship between men and women, with the man taking charge outside and the woman taking charge inside. The former works to maintain the economy, while the latter maintains family harmony. Now Kang Yu is not only secretly sending suspense stories to the Gu family to earn fees. Although it didn't work, being ridiculed is more like when a person, whether male or female, devotes himself entirely to the vast external affairs of work, most likely he cannot be called family. Since there is a case like Kang Yu's, Wen Qi has already made a choice, choosing between outside and inside. There are people like Executive Sun out there. To put it more broadly speaking, people who pursue any external things and ignore the core psychological and spiritual understanding of humanistic thinking will not be called good people. I don't believe that Executive Sun will be a good family member, parent or lover. There is a bias around spiritual pursuits overall. Either your logic is wrong, or I can be sure that people like Lu Wenqi will never "like" others, become lovers or husbands, and then separate again, then get together again, it is still hypocrisy. Kang Yu can prevent the family from being separated out of responsibility for Xiaohang, but can he really reconcile with Lu Wenqi? You want to write her into a bad production, and at the same time write her well to enhance the depth of the content, but I think you write her even worse. It is true that a person's family is exhausted and it is a mess. Extending his corporate life is also exhausting and reasonable. Comparing the level of men, she probably won't feel that there are problems or fatigue in the family. This is a strong contrast brought about by such a leap. Maybe you can't tell it in the first chapter. You can even say that Kang Yu is a bit unhuman. In the second chapter, the logic will cover the previous chapter and further repair or correct it. Then Wenqi really spent three years completely ignoring her family. Maybe it's still not clear here. Let's take an example. Lu Wenkai, who is also busy with work, has no emotional dissent, but he made a mistake in ignoring Huo Shan's expression in the ending. Your explanation tends to be that there is a problem with the neglect of focusing on work, and there is also a problem with Wenqi's focus on the company and her constant promotion. But Wenqi will defend herself or there is a chance. Huo Shan was partially exempted, and Wenqi was exempted for the same reason. The former was forced, and the latter took the initiative to stay away from the family. Wanting to have both, a partner who has the same work value orientation as Executive Sun, but in the end gave up on Executive Sun because of pursuit of work value, and was moved by selfishness to return to the family. I have to say that your writing is really good and the logic is perfect. In the ending, I believe that we have learned from the past and it is a good direction that can continue in peace. But in your plot design, you placed the selfish, short-sighted and hypocritical Wen Qi next to Kang Yu, who is not that bad, so that they can understand each other. I hope they really understand each other. In fact, Huo Shan and Wen Qi are emotionally unforgivable to themselves, and their partners make people tired. Even if it doesn't, it will still be an eternal problem for those who have hurt it. I know that emotional issues are difficult to sort out. I like reading this book. You are a nice person, but I am afraid you are a fool. If I were to design the plot, Sun Mingshuo would die, and no one would take it seriously. There are so many unsolved criminal cases, and Qinghuai might be one of them. Wen Qi can do whatever she wants, but this Kang Yu cannot compromise on mistakes. The broken lens shows numerous patterns on its surface. People with blurry hands want to see blood, unless it is covered with bruises and powdery scum to tell it is a lie. Produce qualitative changes. Love is irreversible, it is a passing and dark memory. You have done something wrong, but it is unforgettable. Dreams come back and pass through the cage, like the Möbius ring, an infinite loop of endless pursuit of the beginning. In name only. In fact, I have already proposed a solution. If you do something wrong, you need to go deep into the wrong thing to find the mistake again and again. Only after you have carried ten thousand mistakes can you say that you have realized the mistake and will never be the same again. People like Lu Wenqi really dare to say and do what they can do to help others regain their love. Push it away by yourself, feel comfortable for a while, then come back, and let you save it. The desire for profit is inevitable. There is a simple model that can predict whether the relationship between men and women is right or wrong. The degree of injury is referred to as self-injury. Busy at work, Kang Yu is injured by ten, Kang Yu is dissatisfied, Wen Qi is injured by three. Wenqi looks for someone else, Kang Yu is injured by fifty, Kang Yu is transferred privately, Wenqi is injured by four. Wenqi entered the room, Kang Yu was injured two hundred, Kang Yu stepped in to stop him, Wenqi could increase the number in the opposite direction. Injure ten and injure one, injure ten and injure one, injure ten and heal ten...