Kuai Chuan: It's a Showdown, I'm the King of Rolls!

Emmm, what can I say, compared to the book The Chosen, it feels a bit like a running story, and the protagonist of The Chosen is a growth type, so the character is fuller. Gu Huai is set as a boss, but I feel that the character creation is not very good, giving me a feeling that everything has nothing to do with me. There is no need to emphasize that he likes food. Excessive prominence will make people feel disgusted. The author can write more about Gu Huai solving things instead of letting the supporting characters do everything. Focusing on Gu Huai's psychology can better shape the characters. And you can intersperse some of Gu Huai's personal stories in the small world or recall the killing because of a certain incident Also, the world is too long. As a fast-travel novel, is this river? ! The story should be shorter. It doesn't require too much detail. As long as the story is complete and has no loopholes, it's OK. You should choose the main content to write. Furthermore, don't introduce new characters halfway through. Don't suddenly introduce cannon fodder supporting characters that are unimportant or have never appeared in the original book. It will feel very abrupt. As for the more important characters in the original book, the same sentence remains: pay attention to shaping the characters! ! ! Liangbo Jiangyuan in The Chosen One is great. Everyone has their own character and flesh and blood Finally, I hope that the book can be written better and better. I also believe that this will be a good book and can be noticed by more people. Please pay more attention to your health. The epidemic has been very serious recently Finally, I have to praise "Quick Time Travel: I Am the Chosen One" as it is really, really beautiful. It is the top quick travel novel in my opinion!

Oh my god, Gu He is not a bad person. He takes his parents and brother to exclude someone else's biological daughter and bullies her. In his opinion, he is a bit guilty! His brother is even more brainless. He should be so confident and confident, but he drugged his own sister. It's really annoying. . . .

It's so hard to come up with names. I'm lazy and I'm going to open a name collection forum. Please leave the names you want to use, the heroes and villains (or special requests)~ This forum will randomly drop more information~

How high is Gu Huai's combat power? It seems that he is a spiritual power user in the apocalyptic world, but he doesn't know what his status and combat power level are in that world. However, I feel that the setting of this book is that mental power is very popular, after all, you can kill a system if you can start it. Also, if I have time, I think I can write about the male protagonist's experience before wearing it as a side story, and talk about the evolution of the male protagonist's personality and other aspects. You can refer to Ginsan in Gintama, for example, from ruthless, cold and handsome to heartless in his daily life. Personally, I feel that writing it this way can make the character of Gu Huai more three-dimensional and more charming. After all, if you only write about getting into trouble, the character you portray will be very thin. However, there is no rush since the new book just came out. Here are just a few suggestions as a reader. If the author feels that writing this way is not good, there is no need to force it. After all, I have never written a book. I'm looking forward to the success of this book, and I will keep pursuing it!

Thief Gaga looks good, come on!

It's fat enough, let's kill it sometime!

Damn, are you planning to create a fan group?

I kept it for several days and finished it in one night.

Can Shen Nong tell me what you think after reading this?

Found a completed article 🙂

Ahhhhhhh, so pretty

Big cheers for the author, hahaha

I haven't watched it for more than a week, and the first world is not finished yet! This should be classified as slow wear, right? When will my Xiaoliu appear?

This actor's little world is really interesting to watch, the roommates are all so interesting, and I feel like Gu Huai is not so cold anymore.

I read it while it was on sale for free. I really liked this novel and will continue to read it in the future. Although some people say that it is written too slowly as a fast-travel novel, I personally like this kind of delicate description, and my favorite is the three modern worlds. If you put it on too quickly and see too much, it will be very comfortable if you wear it slowly. Keep it up, author, I really like the stories and characters you wrote