Senior Sister, She Is Torn Apart

Look at the introduction, the senior sister who is divided into seven equal parts? Or physical?

The last one I watched with a heroine of more than ten minutes was Tomb of the Gods more than ten years ago

This book is very suitable for adapting comics. If there is a good painting style, good-looking girls, and senior sisters, this book can be adapted into comics, and it can be a big hit~

Author, I think this book has a good idea, the characters are well drawn, and the writing style is very comfortable. However, it has an obvious shortcoming, that is, the pace is too slow. After dozens of chapters, the plot progress is so slow, and the focus is not quite right. Although the plot is quite attractive, it is too ink You have to grasp a certain degree of control. Of course, it's not good to be too hasty. Fluctuating in a balanced range between plot and daily life will greatly increase the readability I like the book very much. I hope the author will not be ignorant and work hard (̿▀̿ ̿Ĺ̯̿̿▀̿ ̿)

When I saw it, I knew that sooner or later this would be the result.

So the harem in this book will be one person, right? Hahaha. Seven equal parts.

The plot is bland and the setting is quite interesting. It's a bit difficult for other characters to enter the harem, and the heroine is too strong.

??? The comments are fucking fake, right? Why can't I get your points?

A very good author, recommended by the wall

You need to post more about this chapter to make the author popular.

The author suddenly came here, it's okay, he's so popular

I have seen thirty of them, and I find them interesting, but let me ask my book friends, is the author still so confused at the end? I was attracted by the title of the book, and spent a few articles introducing the little apprentice? The female protagonist has passed the tribulation, and what does the male protagonist do? He brushes the apprentice's teeth and washes his face, carries the apprentice on his back, introduces the background, and encounters miscellaneous fish. How powerful the male protagonist is. Brother, the heroine is going through a tribulation. It's a matter of life and death. Is it appropriate for the hero to just let it go? I really like this subject matter, book friends, will the author still do this in the future?

Very pretty

It feels like I'm writing another kind of book. The content of the sermon is well conceived, but it's a bit out of touch with the female protagonist. However, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very interesting. It's time to push back on the plot.

What happened? There has been no movement for two days.

Wonderful, very wonderful. It's a pity that I don't have time. I'll wait until later. Good luck.

And This background is the one in the Mahayana system next to Vision Although the story is different, the invincible power of the heroine is very close to the problematic aspects of the fairy world But it doesn't matter, who cares about the background when looking at this, it all depends on love.

Shangxiang, kick me when I see the trumpet