Hogwarts Great Writer

This book has collapsed and I suggest the author rewrite it. I don't know what the original outline was, but now the plot has collapsed. The reason for the collapse is the excessive addition of future variables. The problems the protagonist is encountering now require him to improve his combat power. But after the improvement, will Hogeos still go and what will he do? You are so strong, what are you doing here? Originally, after writing Harry Potter, how the author planned the changes in the magical world and how the magical world responded was a highlight. However, the addition of other characters, especially those who have direct contact with the protagonist, and this person became a cultist or a cultist. Too many variables were added at once, and the author could not properly deduce the future, so that the plot collapsed. As others have said, the highlight of this book lies in the way people deal with the present and the changes in fate after the original future is shown. This is the writing method of spoiler text. However, the book later adopts the writing method of behind-the-scenes writing, which resulted in the author having to write too much, especially the arrangement of the protagonist's affairs. The platoon was too impatient. In less than a year, there were changes in the fate of Harry Potter, changes in the power system of the Witcher series, changes in the addition of the evil system, and the addition of the evil system was the worst. The initial cultists needed the top figures in the magic world to deal with it. What about the following, what about the evil god? It is recommended to delete the Ke system and use similar ones. Use the magical items in Lord of Mysteries, those sealed items.

If you didn't choose to write about Harry Potter, this book would be a magical version of the literary giant's novel. What's interesting is the reaction of the original characters when they see the work from another world, and the interaction between the protagonist and the plot of the original work after entering the school, which is common in all HP movies. If this kind of interaction can be combined with the protagonist's identity as a copycat without being separated, it will be a good literary novel. But the author chose to write Harry Potter, which suddenly made the future of this book confusing. After seeing the latest update, I still don't see how the author plans to deal with the issue of spoilers. Judging from the introduction, it seems that the author does not regard writing Harry Potter as an important issue, but the problem is that writing Harry Potter in the Harry Potter world is essentially the same as writing fate in Xingyue and the finale of Naruto Live (a lot next door). They are all written in the same way as spoilers. This I have never seen such a novel that can be handled well so far. This is why all accomplished non-complex comics fans dare not let the natives know that the protagonist is a time traveler: it is completely beyond the ability of online novel authors to sort out the interesting points from the huge chaos caused by spoilers and let the fans accept it. It is not ruled out that the author plans to imitate Rowling's original rhythm of writing books and publish the book of that year after each school year. This has the advantage that it will only make the native Dihua feel that there are experts monitoring rather than predicting the future, but it does not fundamentally solve the problem of spoilers. I can think of a dozen plot development questions just by thinking about it. For example: after learning that Voldemort is really alive in the first film, won't there be remaining Death Eaters who go to the Albanian forest to hasten his resurrection? Does Lucius still have the guts to throw away Tom's diary? Will Malfoy and his two followers have more interactions with Harry Potter (Malfoy just likes to dominate in front of children, which does not mean that he likes to be watched as a clown by the whole wizarding world)? If these problems are not handled well, it will be a major logical poison. I don't know if the author has thought about how to go overboard in a reasonable and reasonable way. If the final solution is to read it as a novel by collective wizards, then it is difficult not to think that letting the protagonist write HP is a failure.

... To be honest, it's not very reliable to do business with the population of the Wizarding World.

Harry Potter's whereabouts are exposed, will he not be killed by the dark wizard?

It's only twenty or thirty chapters and it's already broken into pieces. I saw that the author wanted to write something of his own, but he also wanted to rely on the original work. The result was that the plot was very stretched and torn. The beginning was already broken. I don't know if it will come full circle later.

The direction of the plot is okay, but there are poisonous points. You cannot watch them carefully, you can only scan them roughly and quickly. As long as you read quickly, the poisonous points cannot catch up with you 🙂

You might say that writing novels is okay, but writing Harry Potter is outrageous. . . . .

I changed the novel once I started writing it, and now it's almost invincible. It just depends on how many chapters of Eunuch you still write.

Malfoy's original character was thrown to the ground and trampled to pieces.

We've already written about great writers, so you can't write well. You're also great at writing about Harry Potter in Harry Potter.

I feel that both the protagonist and the author are too eager for quick success. In order to combine the world view of Cthulhu and Harry Potter and create conflicts in the early stage, the author deliberately created a boss that is much stronger than the protagonist. Then, in order to improve his strength, the protagonist only wrote the beginning of two books and started a new one. He also wanted to expand his channels from the UK to the world. These things only happen in about three days in the book, and I don't even think about whether I have the ability to do these things. The pace is too fast, the protagonist seems to have traveled less than a month. Easy to collapse

After taking a look, the author's entry rate into the palace is a bit high. I don't dare to look at it.

I feel like I've collapsed (=_=)

Writing Harry Potter at Hogwarts? Believe it or not, Old Man Deng will try his best to kill you.

The villain we are creating now, if he can escape for two months, he may be able to kill Lao Deng alone and then directly spread the pollution. Then the HP world was directly promoted to the Cthulhu world. The protagonist comes to the beginning of seven books a week, and the seven power systems are directly integrated into one, and he becomes a true god on the spot. When I was 11 years old, I went to school, and I solved the conspiracy with my friends, embarked on the road of pretending to be a slap in the face, and solved the pollution problem by the way. We can run wildly on a wider map (collapse)🐴🙈

By the way, when the protagonist writes a novel, there is only one beginning, and then he becomes a eunuch?

Are you sure it's okay to join Cthulhu? Harry Potter is a low-demon world, and the combat power will increase if you add it.

The plot advances too fast, and the protagonist will be invincible by the time school starts.

This is the first time I read such sb article