I, the Stand-In Master

It's so numb that I can't stand it, really! When I first read the author's message, I thought I was going to work harder later, but when I saw the latest chapter, I felt numb. Why do female characters blush so easily and think wildly? It's 22 years now, am I not traveling through time? This way of writing is really... How can I describe it best... Forget it, I can't describe it. Just, really, I was numb anyway. They don't speak or think well. Like the narration in the animal world, "Spring is here", they blush at every turn, and the characters' psychology is also very young. If the author is a novice, then I wish you progress in your writing and don't give up easily. There is still a lot of room for growth in your writing. If you are an old author, I would like to say, brother, fan light novels are not so young. It is already 22 years old. You can't keep up with this, so please update it quickly!

I couldn't help but leave a comment... Poisonous Point 1: Nami is not a nymphomaniac. Poison Point 2: Look down on pirate fans? This kind of rubbish combat power goes back and forth with the serious Hawkeye... It feels a bit heavy to force the protagonist to level up. The previous articles are all pretty good, but when you enter the pirate dungeon, everything is gone... The taste of ancient routines is really overwhelming...

This book is so exciting, it makes me feel like I have gone back a few years. I thought it would be my cup of tea after reading the introduction, so I couldn't bear to read it all until I almost couldn't finish it in one breath. Brother, you still need to practice your writing skills.

The protagonist doesn't look like a killer or a stand-in at all. He's like a salted fish who can't think. His brain is full of muscles. The setting at the beginning is as if there is none

At first I thought it was JoJo but when I looked back it turned out to be a pirate. But when I looked back it turned out to be FGO. I told you, the protagonist reminded me of the overbearing president novel ten years ago. I was so embarrassed that I kicked out of the three-bedroom apartment.

Why are so many authors so fond of merging worlds with different power systems? Let's just say that the fusion of the two basic world views of the world of Spell Return and Fate is simply beyond the control of humans. Once you add the setting of Spell Spirit to Fate, your world history will have to be revised from beginning to end.

This book, as mentioned at the beginning, has a very cold heart. However, from the beginning of One Piece, he has been acting like a good guy. There are serious discrepancies in the setting, which makes people uncomfortable to read. Not recommended

Too embarrassing. . . It's full of middle school atmosphere, and I think that adding a lot of gorgeous adjectives means good writing. In the eyes of people who are used to reading online articles, it looks like a primary school student's composition. The protagonist is also very unlikable. Such bitter and hateful protagonists are no longer popular nowadays.

As a time traveler, you can forget the memories of the past as time washes away, but it is impossible to lose your open mind. Why can't the strange behavior of so many people in the Holy Grail War not allow the protagonist to have the slightest guess as to whether he has traveled through time in the future? (Although I haven't seen the back part, and I'm not sure whether the author really designed time travel, but I can always make this guess?) When the fist is big enough, you don't need IQ, but this does not mean you don't have IQ, right? It's a little poisonous point, above.

How can I put it this way? The author's writing style is quite average. The setting is a killer and a stand-in, but the result is that the writing is like a fool. Then in One Piece, Nami is made to be as easy to pick up as a nympho. If it was a few decades ago, it might be quite popular, but now it really doesn't work.

The smell is very strong, and it is the ultimate suture monster. So far, the sutures are very unsatisfactory, with holes everywhere. I can't bear to dream back to 10 years ago.

One moment the character is installed, and the other moment the character collapses 😅😅

It has a house smell, and it's the expired kind.

I actually don't have any bad feelings towards TV series, but I think some of the settings are a little too outrageous. To grab the weapon from Hercules with bare hands, I would agree if the substitute's ability is used to strengthen the weapon, but to say that martial arts C can strengthen the weapon from the hand of a person with strength A is a bit outrageous, although it can be explained by using water to control the air circle. But this is a skill, and Hercules also has the same skill. Even if he is turned mad, his body can still use the skill instinctively. Let's just say that both sides are people with the highest level of skill. They used martial arts with C level to snatch A-level weapons. How to say it? I just think the explanation is a bit far-fetched, as Haki can also be used on people who have gone crazy.

It can be said that the author and the protagonist are black middle school students who suffer and hate each other all day long. Everyone reads the book for fun, not to accompany the author's illness.

The author sets the story that the protagonist has traveled 20 years and cannot remember the plot of One Piece. The protagonists don't even know who Luffy and Zoro are when they meet. But I still firmly remember that Aaron Paradise is in Cocosia Village, and I haven't forgotten it for 20 years.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   will be going to be played in 2020.

Regarding the toxicity of this book, Those who first want to talk about the plot don't need to read it. This book is completely the author's own pleasure. In my eyes, the biggest toxicity is Chapter 12, Luffy, help me. I changed it to the protagonist. I feel like Luffy has been cheated. It's uncomfortable, very uncomfortable. The protagonist of this book, Long Aotian, hahaha, I won't say it anymore, it's too poisonous

The protagonist at the beginning made me laugh to death. A dog actually wanted to come to the table to eat with its owner, and was so moved that he thought he was a human. I laughed to death.

Ideas and creativity are okay, but other aspects are not.

Isn't this book inappropriate to be placed among the sacred books of 20 years ago? It was also capable of fighting ten years ago, but now...

After reading a little bit, the smell is too strong, what exactly is it like? I like to pile on some gorgeous words, giving people an empty sense of awesomeness. The background of the previous life was that of the orphan killer Abba Abba, who was piled on top of the dark and powerful people. The wording is fake and advanced. Eyes and gaze cannot be used. You have to use your eyes. There are very few expressions, basically just a few, including a darkening of the face and a raised corner of the mouth. A look of disdain. No matter what, he has a strong murderous aura, and he will only treat the swordsman and the swordsman in the same way, clamping them between his fingers. The protagonist is dressed in black, evil and crazy, wild and cool, domineering and has various handsome faces, cold and gentle, just like the air conditioner that can be switched at any time. The female character in the early stage of the original novel still has some characteristics, but the female characters in the later chapters have no characteristics at all. If you remove the names, you won't know which one is which. The only way to treat their writing style is to pamper their tone. There must be a moment when the female character lies in the protagonist's arms and lies on the protagonist's bed, greedily smelling/absorbing his scent. The system task reward is 12345. You don't need to look at the grades abcde. Anyway, they are the highest grade in the end. If the multiplayer system is fine, it will break the record. You must complain about yourself as a non-chief during the lottery. I don't know if the weapon is easy to use or if it has its own plan. Anyway, it just needs to be cool and handsome. I have some thoughts. Some of them are not from this book. I just want to talk about what the smell is like, but this book takes up more than half of it, and the smell is quite strong.