Game of Thrones: the Arrival of the Dragonborn

It feels different from the main theme of Game of Thrones. I feel that most people watch Game of Thrones either because they want to watch the plot or the war. This book is a bit nondescript. You can either write the protagonist as a ranger hero and walk without a cloud, or you can just follow Tiber Septim to unify the continent and establish a thousand-year dragonborn dynasty. Using the setting of the Baratheon family is really unnecessary. Moreover, the setting of the Dragonborn in a low-demon world like Game of Thrones will be very restrictive. If it is strong, it can directly penetrate the world. If it is weak, it cannot reflect the true strength of the Dragonborn. At least as a bookworm for more than ten years who thinks he can understand the mainstream reading trend of the market, it is not fun at all. I don't even understand why the protagonist does so much. Why doesn't Revitalizing the Family directly write about Robert? Now this style of painting makes me feel like I'm watching "Awakening of the Dragonborn, the family follows the chicken and the dog to heaven", but it would be too boring to write about the mage-to-god style. Of course you can say that it will be mentioned later in the outline, but I don't think it makes any sense in u1s1. Besides, the atmosphere is so high that you can forcibly write the Baratheon family to death later. That is really an NT reality show.

After reading "The Dirty Man", I really couldn't stand it after reading dozens of chapters, and I was about to give up. Let me tell you my reasons: I can swallow those poisonous things about wives killing men and women, and "dirty men wearing double clothes". After all, I have been a bookworm for so many years. My reasons In fact, it's very simple. The more the author writes, the more he writes about daily life under the guise of a Game of Thrones. It feels like the male protagonist and two businessmen are fighting online, etc., But it's not. It's as bland as water. It's tasteless. It's a pity to abandon it. That's it. I hope to read the author's other books in the future.

The protagonist is only 3 years old now. Why do you care about all the troubles? Anyway, your eldest brother finally succeeded in lying down and survived until adulthood. He is only 3 years old and wants to make trouble all day long. Now the most important thing is to survive until he is a teenager, and the magic is exposed. The confession is that the first chapter is a 3-year-old child. The time traveler is awesome and has the golden hand, but a 3-year-old child teaches an adult. When doing things, I don't think people will feel scared. I'm not such a smart kid. I really want to make trouble and make the protagonist 3 years older to teach people not to scare people to death. {"TopicId":"783653801038053376","TopicName":"Comments"}

The setting of Lao Gun Weighted Game is quite interesting. After reading the first ten chapters, the three-year-old protagonist was forced to mix with a group of adults. It was too fragmented. I feel that it would be much more attractive if I could just explain it casually and skip to the plot of ten years ago.

With the true strength of the Dragonborn, what kind of tricks are necessary to build an army? It's all a one-man army.

Dragon Language

The Dragonborn of Ancient 5 grows extremely fast, and the upper limit is ridiculous. Three magical skills, combat skills, stealth, magic, dragon roar, etc., Very comprehensive.

The biggest problem with this book is the protagonist's brothers. I just want to say that this is not how Game of Thrones works.

Did the author downplay the Citadel's opposition to magic? In the author's writing, the school's opposition to magic seems to be purely out of pragmatism. "I opposed magic before because magic was not practical. The protagonist showed the power of magic, so we accepted magic." However, this is inconsistent with the original work and the settings in the setting collection. The school's opposition to magic is ideological. The school is trying to use various means to build a magic-free world while knowing the existence of magic, true gods, and dragons. To put it bluntly, it is even a bit devilish. This is by no means a pragmatic thing. For example, after the Academy City Long Family conquered Westeros, they clearly saw how powerful the dragons were, but they still worked tirelessly to guide their extinction. I originally thought that the protagonist's high-profile display of magic and the establishment of the Kingdom's Mage Academy would make the academy the opposite of the protagonist (and the kind of opposition based on ideology). However, the book simply said "Who doesn't want to learn magic" and the academy and the protagonist exchange information, and the academy awarded the protagonist an honorary bachelor. The author's writing style and plot are both good, but it was the school's attitude towards magic that made me completely unable to get into it, because I originally thought that the protagonist's fight against the anti-magic demons of the school would be very important. As a result, look at the comments section. Is the school behind the city still an important ally of the protagonist? It seems that the author did not take the "City Conspiracy" into consideration when writing the outline. This is too dramatic.

The upper limit of the world of ice and fire is indeed not as high as that of The Elder Scrolls, but the water in the world of ice and fire is actually very deep, and the TV series actually talks about it very little. You can tell by looking at the map. The TV series talks about the upper left area. In Ice and Fire, it was vaguely mentioned that there were even deep divers, who seemed to have indescribable existences. There are also the ancient oriental Dawn Kingdoms, the Golden Celestial Dynasty, and the Gemstone Dynasty. There is a lot to talk about.

Dead literary youth, dead daughter, and cuckold are all written about it, no wonder he rushes to the street

It's the first time I've written a book and I've been able to deal with so many surprises. I haven't read many of them before. . I would like to make another suggestion. The starting point must not be to choose the protagonist who is under 10 years old. This way the interactive dialogue of the characters will be abnormally inconsistent. You can put one or two key plot points in childhood, but the main plot must still start at least 15 or 6 years old. The simplest thing is, what kind of attitude would you have when your 3-year-old child talks to you? When writing character interactions, you must be personally involved, otherwise it will be difficult to avoid a sense of dissonance. In short, if you can learn the lessons of this book, the next one will be much more exciting. Of course, if

Map of Westeros

The character of Theon in the novel is already useless. Don't try to control him. You can't control him. It's not that you can control him by grabbing Long Ma. He is a sperm-like brain instead of love. It is impossible to produce any love after only a short period of contact. The protagonist has already negotiated terms and sent him undercover. Xion also knows the protagonist's power. Under such circumstances, he still thinks about the beauty. If he doesn't betray, he just doesn't dare. Such a character is completely unreusable. Not everyone who specializes in this kind of thing can play like this. If the enemy really sent a professional beauty to seduce him, it wouldn't be surprising if he betrayed her directly. Even if he didn't dare to rebel, the beautiful spy could easily obtain all the information from him. This kind of thing will either kill a hundred people, or lose the village and become a knight. If you can't give him a heavy position or a high position, if you do, he will be a thunder that can explode at any time.

The most beautiful one in the upper right corner should be Nymeria

The word count and plot at the end are too overwhelming. In fact, it is better for the protagonist of Dragonborn to be the brother of Dragon Mother who is at an absolute low point.

The author replies to readers that they have studied the original work a lot, studied the outline carefully, and wrote it carefully But the content is always emmm, and it is indescribably uncomfortable, (the casual heroine who is a passerby), (the child is domineering and the combat power explodes), (the sense of rubbish dialogue), (the useless tool man Renly), (too much technology) The protagonist cannot bear the thought of being low-key (uncomfortable), because the protagonist is already magically invincible! (Speechless) It's not good anyway.

Nymeria

Regarding the bloodline problem of future generations, The Elder Scrolls gives a good solution. It does not require close relatives. Although the number is only one, the quality is guaranteed. Talisman of Kings and Dragon Fire Ritual. In the First Age, Alessia and the Dragon God made a covenant. As long as Alessia's descendants held the amulet and were loyal to the dragon's blood, the Dragon God would protect humans. The descendants of Alessia can also use the Talisman of Kings and the Dragon Fire Ceremony to ensure that there will be dragon descendants from generation to generation. Judging from the covenant, both Lehman and Tybodin are of Alessian blood. According to what you Mora said and said, the devil and the Holy Spirit despise this world, but they will respond if they are connected, otherwise the hookup between Euron and Mora cannot be explained. The protagonist's goal is to make a covenant with the Dragon God like Alessia and get something similar to the Talisman of Kings and the Dragon Fire Ritual. Not to mention that the bloodline of all descendants is powerful, but at least the heir will definitely become a dragon, and the dragon fire ritual can also ensure that the heir is a true blood relative. After all, if a hat is made to give birth to a bastard with no blood relationship, it will not be able to pass the dragon fire ritual.

After the civil war in Dorne, the quality began to decline sharply. It became more and more watery. The characters began to be reduced to intelligence, especially the way the protagonist dealt with the vampire incident and Geralt went to the North. Geralt is the adopted son of the protagonist after all, with mage blood, and the three adoptive mothers are all extremely smart. A smart person, the education he received since he was a child, his brains and defiant thinking are really unacceptable. There were so many opportunities, and he forced himself into a desperate situation before he was willing to accept it. I don't know what the meaning of writing like this is, and I almost broke down. I forced my wits to fall, so I could only forcefully arrange for reinforcements to come online. The hundreds of chapters I have written in the past few months are illogical. Is it because there is no outline?

Hurry up and finish it, write a Dragonborn of Faerûn

After reading dozens of chapters, it feels like the finale. Others' invincible style is a challenge of being invincible at the same level and crossing different levels. You are now invincible in the world. Invincible strength combined with invincible power seems meaningless. The Dragonborn can just slowly become stronger, become stronger physically and then strengthen its magic ability in the middle and later stages, and almost reach the top in the later stages of birth. The most fascinating characters in Game of Thrones are the supporting characters, Tywin, Queen of Thorns, Varys, and Littlefinger. You have to give them a chance to express themselves. The only way to show off is to kill them with a stick or just not write them. It would be a pity.

Success ends with leaving these abnormal heirs to the family and creating a big mess in the future.

This book is really good. I don't know why it's not popular. Also, the main character is not a loser. I just finished chatting with a wretched man.

In fact, if the body data is expressed in numerical values, the actual damage caused by 20 times the original body data is definitely more than a hundred times the original body data. After all, it is not 1+1 but 1+N.

Hurry up and finish it. If you want to write a book, you have to write a fanfic about Lao Gun or an infinite stream of Dragonborn. The audience for this Game of Thrones is still small.

I want to see it but I don't dare. Can anyone tell me what happened to the cuckolds here?🥵

Ouch~ Damn it! I've thought about what I would think if Dragonborn came to Game of Thrones. Isn't this a coincidence?

Chao Yao is a good man, everyone says so. Brother Lin Chong, since you recognize me as your brother, I will take you to the capital and kill Gao Qiu until he bleeds like a river! Don't thank me, I'm just a good person on a whim. Fellow Taoist Zhao Ji, since you call me senior, I will give you this red umbrella white stem fleshy Ganoderma lucidum taken from the Yaochi Lake in Yunnan to make elixirs for you. Don't thank me, I'm just a good person who helps others become immortals. Aguda, since you call me Ama, then you can go with peace of mind, your wife, I will take care of her! Don't thank me, I'm just a good person with a wide range of hobbies. Toba Japanese King, since you kneel down and ask for surrender, why don't you surrender your country as soon as possible? Don't you know that Jun's father hasn't swallowed the meat on his lips yet and is very hungry? Don't thank me, I just like good people who show their heart and soul. Why don't the Western barbarians kneel down when they see the miracles of the East? A piece of knee is missing and the leg cannot be bent? Then cut it open, crush it, and let me take a look at it for you! Don't thank me, I'm just a good person who likes to smash people to pieces. Chao Yu was sitting on the top of Weiyang, facing the morning sun, bathing in the golden light, and welcoming all nations to come to court. Suddenly, a big book that was thousands of miles long fell from the sky, and the pages were opened, revealing two lines of large characters: ... Dear readers, do you want to come to "Water Margin of Destiny" to read and give some advice? ... Thank you for occupying valuable space for publicity.

In the dark room, the oil lamp on the table was lit. The dim yellow light illuminated the faces of eight strong men. "Brothers, now that I have obtained the 100,000-ton birthday plan, I want to do great things, are you willing to follow me?" The wealthy officer looked around at everyone. "Brother Heavenly King, please tell me, we are brothers in life and death, and we should keep watch." The white scholar said. "I want revolution!" The wealthy member said loudly. "Ge... What?" The man with red beard and red hair was very surprised by the unfamiliar vocabulary. "Revolution!" The wealthy member repeated helplessly. "Whose life is harvested? Does my brother have a new goal?" Taoist Nagasu touched his ancient pine pattern sword. "I'm talking about an uprising!" The wealthy member raised his voice. "Qi Jia? Are you the Qi Jia, a loan shark in Yuncheng County?" Three strong men with broad ribs and broad muscles, their eyes brightened. It is terrible to be uneducated. The rich and powerful officials no longer follow them in circles. They slammed the table and shouted: "I want to rebel!" "Rebellion... Brother Tianwang, we have just received a huge sum of money and have not yet enjoyed it. This is not something we want to talk about." The thin man with a deer-headed and rat-like eyes said anxiously. Others also tried to persuade him, and only then did the rich man give up his unrealistic thoughts. Afterwards, everyone divided the treasures and left one by one laughing. The rich man looked at his share of treasure on the table and couldn't help feeling angry. Am I short of this little money? I have thousands of acres of fertile land, dozens of dealers, and countless slaves as a powerful landowner, but I can't live a good life. I join you in committing crimes. As a result, you all turned from paupers to rich men one by one, but I am in trouble? Why? At least join me in rebellion and help me become an emperor! Do you have to wait until you are forced to go to Liangshan? Chao Gai, who had just traveled through time, was full of complaints. "Damn it, no one in the world is loyal!" Lying down and quitting, Chao Gai hit his head on the corner of the table and died. System, help me change the start!