Comprehensive Martial Arts: Gather in Xianzhuang at the Beginning, and You Will Become Stronger by Watching

Why are there so many realms and stages to be divided into when writing about martial arts fandoms? It doesn't matter if it's original. The fanfics are completely superfluous, and it's impossible to accurately tell what kind of fifth-level warrior the opponent is. It's superfluous. This is a fantasy writing method. The author had better change it.

What about the onlookers? What about being low-key? What is written is a mess.

..., In Chapter 12, the protagonist slashed the enemy twice. It was so boring. Didn't you think about cutting off his hand?

A lot of nonsense, there is no great god's life, but there is a great god's disease ! After seeing 17 pig feet and doing nothing, I gathered around a Juxian Village

A pure studio-style novel

Add drama to your family. The useless family has mastered unparalleled martial arts, so I'm afraid they don't know Lin Pingzhi's family.

I've read more than 30 chapters, and the protagonist is still in some level, and has not yet broken through the Qi Gathering Realm. Even a character like Shan Zheng has reached the Qi Gathering Peak. You have written for so long and the protagonist has not yet reached the Qi Gathering Peak. It is really rubbish. The protagonist's talent and golden finger, I don't know how long it will take for the protagonist to reach Shan Zheng's level after breaking through the Qi Gathering Realm. Then, how many moves can Shan Zheng do under Qiao Feng? How long will it take to reach Qiao Feng's level? It really feels like it's a lifetime series. The plot is written very compactly, giving people the feeling that the protagonist will die if he takes just one step slower, but it's also very draggy. The author can't bear to cheat the protagonist, so he can just make a small repayment pill. The ice silkworm's internal energy added by the writing is too little, and And I don't see how strong it is In short, the pressure is a bit too much, and I sincerely do not let the protagonist level up quickly. If I were to care about the life and death of the Yang family, I would first find a way to take advantage of the opportunity to improve my strength. Besides, Shan Zheng will not live long anyway. In this case, why bother to compete with the dead? Aren't you making yourself unhappy?

To attract traffic by force, right? The title and introduction of the book look pretty good, but in the end the content has nothing to do with the first two...

It's so verbose, there are too many voice-overs, the realms are too confusing, what realms are they are divided into and how many levels they are divided into, it's too cumbersome.

The most annoying thing is this kind of hodgepodge, it's impossible to write at all, it's just made up. Nothing

Does anyone who writes about Zong Wu have a hole in their brains?

The plot of the Yang family is unclear. From the setting point of view, the Yang family cannot help the protagonist at all. On the contrary, it wastes the protagonist's energy to deal with trivial matters. From the plot point of view, the only meaning of the Yang family is to leave a mess for the protagonist. It is natural for the protagonist to pretend to be a slap in the face. I feel quite embarrassed, especially since the old Wang family is so far away. It is obvious that this mess cannot be solved at once.

Even though I have been cured of secondary school syndrome for many years, I still feel extremely painful.

The writing is very good, but it is too wordy. I suggest you learn how to get out of the way and write a small plot in two or three pictures. Now it is very dragging. I often can't see the main character in five or six pictures. There are a lot of branch plots and the main plot is passed by in one stroke.

This writing is a bit contradictory. On the one hand, he talks about practicing hard, but as a result, he causes trouble everywhere and has a split personality

At first glance, it looks like a garbage novel full of skills.

The battle at Juxianzhuang at the beginning was a bit advantageous, but the rest of the plot was filled with rubbish.

What kind of thing is it that sometimes it's in the Qi Gathering state, and sometimes it's the seventh level or the fifth level?

Shouldn't Juxianzhuang be Taizu Changquan?

Another book that sells dog meat on sheep's head. Watching? You end up being a licking dog and showing off! Still watching?

It's hard not to have confusing plots in the world of mixed martial arts

I've read a few chapters and the content is really confusing! !

Can you become stronger just by watching? This is interesting. Then Juxianzhuang compiled three exercises, and the next one is fantasy. The power system is fantasy and not martial arts. The plot is very bloody. The Shan family, a single judge with a human face and an animal heart, and the Yang Zhujiao family are fighting openly and secretly for regional hegemony. The traitor in the family is actually a disciple of Zuo Lengchan of the Songshan sect, and he is also plotting to seize power? A very traditional fantasy formula. The plot design, dialogue scenes, etc. Are very awkward to watch... If you watch fantasy, you can give it a try. Martial arts? Just started, it was still a sheep head. So, farewell

In fact, it is easy to get into trouble while watching. I read a novel where a pig's feet killed someone and immediately escaped. The father flashed to that city, but he couldn't find the murderer for a while, thinking that the murderer was still in the city, and wiped out the whole city. In the movie, the masses are the evil sect's healing material.

After watching it all, I gave me a monthly pass. It was great, but it was too little.

What things have realm

How about keeping a low profile? I don't want to see what's behind

There are not many good writers on mixed martial arts, but there are still some who overestimate their abilities and will surely die in mixed martial arts.

Waste system, waste protagonist, Mao Yong, I read more than ten chapters and was persuaded to quit.