In Marvel's Kamen Rider Chronicles

I specially dedicated a chapter to test the poison. It's not a good thing if you don't want to vomit. The first five chapters are not attractive at all. What if you call this slow heat to distinguish it from Shuangwen? Then I can only say that your writing level at the starting point has not reached the passing line...

I just want to say that whether it is slow or not has nothing to do with the level of writing. If it is not good, it is not good. There is no need to use slow heat to put gold on your face.

Success was forced to cancel the show after it was interrupted. The meaningless plot and the only strong point were lost, which made me unable to watch it anymore.

Old Riddler: The main character in the plot is simply mentally ill (; 1_1)

The bald man in a wheelchair looked at the protagonist's memory... And it immediately collapsed. Okay, let's imagine a bald man in a wheelchair.

After watching "DC Knight", I had an indescribable feeling when reading fan fiction about knights. Kamen Rider should be a hero who protects people's happiness, and is a representative of justice no matter what the situation. Instead of hiding behind the scenes to play conspiracies, open up a harem, seductive and depraved villain image, this image should be more like a knight monster.

I've seen Chapter 89. How can I put it, it's not that exciting, and the clone is a setting that I really dislike. Because it is easy to write a double protagonist as a double protagonist, and most of the two protagonists cannot distinguish the primary and secondary. Ever since there was a doppelgänger, most of the pages have been about the doppelgänger, so why didn't you make the doppelganger the protagonist from the beginning? I can endure the paid chapters just to watch the protagonist. As a result, the main character only appeared two or three times. The original protagonist has become a backdrop, right?

What exactly do you want to write about this book? After reading more than fifty chapters, I was confused.

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It's a very stable book, with a stable output of poison points. If you changed the name to Marvel's Overhaul Card, I think it would be a surefire success. But if your book's title is Kamen Rider, I can only say that I'm sick of it🤮

Zimli is so beautiful

Seriously, if the author hates the United States so much, why would he want to write a fanfic of American comics? There are obviously many Chinese stories about cultivating immortals and catching ghosts that can be written It was a bit funny when I saw the word Ugly Country at first, but later on I really only used the word Ugly Country, which makes people have a rebellious mentality. After all, it is an insult. The words will only make people think that the author is a capable but extremely anti-American person. There are also many black things about the United States in the article, but in the end, it feels like it is the opposite. It is basically available all over the world, including Dongguo, but the author wrote it as only happening in the United States. Basically, I was confused when I saw this. I would skip it directly because I feel that the author is really an extremely anti-American person Then there is the protagonist's clone. The main body is an outsider, so he doesn't care about everything. This description is normal, but when it comes to clones, the Dongguo clone is for the country and the party, and the American clone is beaten to death and refuses to admit that he is American, but this feels unreasonable. After all, the purpose of creating avatars is to integrate into the world, and American avatars have lived and grown up in the United States. The author in the middle has a very good saying, people hate the government, but people love the country. The American avatars are people who grew up in this country, but they refuse to admit that they are Americans. It's really weird. To use an analogy, although I hate the chaos and evil in Gotham City and it makes me suffer, I also love Gotham City deeply because this is my hometown and the place where I was raised. I almost chose to leave. At best, I might find a way to change. To put it simply, there is a way. Although I keep scolding my family, if If you follow the curse, I will be rude to you. This is something only I can curse The protagonist creates a clone in order to integrate into the world, but he refuses to admit that he is an American. This is the place where he was raised after all. Hating the government and hating the country are completely different things, and the protagonist does not admit it. If he has his own nationality, then he doesn't have a nationality. Integrating into this crap world like this, but going against the world, can better explain the current situation of American clones To give a bad analogy, an orphan in Dongguo grew up receiving subsidies from Dongguo. He also studied in Dongguo, and had food, clothing and housing in Dongguo. There are many people from Dongguo. My girlfriend, however, refuses to admit that she is from Dongguo. She even says that she hates Dongguo and often creates chaos in Dongguo. I would be surprised if you don't call such a person a traitor or a traitor. Moreover, it would be best if he disappears immediately. This kind of rotten person should be nailed on the shame rack of history for others to reviled.

Chapter 10 is used to screen readers. I have to say that you succeeded. I'm leaving. A protagonist whose memory is randomly read by Professor X is really poisonous.

Although I haven't read a few of them, I still want to say that your timeline is too early. For such an early timeline, if you want to write a lot of original writing, it will test your writing skills and be thankless. The only writing points of the previous generation were the mutant incident, Captain America incident, and Howard's death incident. Then it took a few more years to barely get to the Captain Marvel incident. By the time the main plot was written, it was basically almost done.

I watched the latest chapter at once, and it felt like I had watched it but not much. The plot felt fragmented, and the timeline jumped quickly, causing many characters to come and go in a hurry. For example, after the protagonist dealt with Pierce, Annie suddenly disappeared and skipped decades with Stark without giving any description. The Wasp and Pym ran away after dismantling the missiles. Magneto has no idea where he went. Howard and Carter should be foreshadowing. Polaris has only given a paragraph now. Deadpool, a Marvel talker, has no idea if there is any chance. When it comes out, Logan shows his face to show his presence, Spider-Man and Green Goblin and their dads are gone (named supporting actors) Slight spoilers follow The most impressive thing about the whole chapter is that Frank unfortunately got the lunch, and then Annie became the behind-the-scenes boss after being released, and now his name is revealed, and Howard and Carter have become foreshadowing. I don't know if the Spider-Verse that follows can be well laid out. Don't rush the plot too much and it may make people confused. If I have time to catch up on the previous plot, I watched it in a fog.

I can't say, it's really poisonous. I read novels for fun, can you please stop exporting your ideology?

Can you tell me which chapters are about your own country? I'll just skip those chapters. One clone is enough, and there is another clone who is still writing about China in American comics. Oh~ I know there is a Divine Spear Bureau, but there is no need to talk about it. People who write American comics are there to fight until the world is destroyed and the universe is restarted. It doesn't matter. Why bother talking about China? Also talking about contracts and stuff, it's a completely meaningless word count. Author, you can see from the few times you have published single chapters that you really want to write well. I personally suggest that when writing novels, don't overly reflect your personal social views. When writing novels, you need to reflect normality. But after you finish writing, can you check it objectively from a third party's perspective? There are a lot of meaningless emotional vents, and the number of words is completely low. Isn't it mainly about Kamen Rider and the characters in the Marvel world view? Are there any good stories? You always organize parades and the like, and then involve your personal opinions in various things that have no meaning to the theme of the story. Isn't it just a low word count? It's still very poisonous, so I have high poison resistance. Now I just want to quickly skip these poisonous points. I heard that your writing will get better and better later, so I can skip the poisonous points and see what happens next. My personal view of the world is that there is no absolute black and white in the world. It's just that each other's positions are different. If an enemy emerges that threatens all mankind, I believe that the whole world can unite. It's not because of anything, but I believe that mankind has this shining point. From an objective point of view, there is nothing good or bad. It's just that their systems are different, their social environments are different, and the people who implement them are different. We should maintain a humble attitude, instead of trolling others meaninglessly. It's okay to occasionally browse YouTube, Wuchang, etc. For fun. Complacency and complacency are absolutely unacceptable. I don't like other countries' systems, let alone other countries, but when we lower our heads and look at ourselves, are we perfect and excellent? It just suits us. Every country has different national conditions, different system needs, and different executors. It all depends on the needs. In this case, what's the point of complaining? Other countries think we are bad, and we think they are bad. Isn't this normal? The problem is that when you write novels, don't you mainly write plots and stories? Not to mention being a Marvel fan, there is a big gap compared to the parallel world. It is meaningless to be in love all the time. One clone appears and another clone comes, and all the belts have changed the clones. One by one in the knight competition, this level of eccentricity is too much. When the protagonist is invincible, shouldn't there be a strong opponent who won't let him die easily? Shouldn't he be allowed to grow and challenge himself? Otherwise, life would be too boring. In the case of invincibility, the main knight and powerful belt can be arranged in various plots. Anyway, the big event challenges the climax. Popular characters feel that they can stay longer, and those who cannot die will die. The inheritance of the belt can still be written, and all kinds of chivalry are in order. Isn't this better than writing about a parade? Isn't Kamen Rider just handsome, chivalrous and touching? The author doesn't need to give everyone a perfect ending, like Stark's father and Captain's wife. It would be great to write it exactly according to your previous outline. Sometimes people die, but in the hearts of readers, he is still alive. Readers will remember that tragic moment, that unforgettable moment. The moment you let him live, you felt that it was really a small scene. What kind of layout has been going on for decades, and it took a long time, and that's it? That's it? No loss, no problem, no problem. The most important thing is that others are inexplicably afraid of the protagonist. The problem is that the protagonist does not have any big scenes at all. Five nuclear bombs and so on. In a situation like Marvel's alien invasion, what does it matter? At that time, the original work even dropped a nuclear bomb but was stopped. You can't see the B pattern in the knight battle. It's like a nuclear explosion kick, something like fifty times the speed of sound. Just watching the battle, and then the people behind the scenes test the data, you can be shocked. Isn't this uncomfortable? To do something fancy, but now the captain doesn't give any plug-ins, so the Immutable Knight can also create something new, such as using its power or something. What about the protagonist's invincible character? The real big scene shouldn't be, global heavy acceleration, gaming, time travel... Think of these, especially heavy acceleration, which can detect the slowdown of the whole world, and can be seen with the naked eye in the gaming field. Isn't this bigger than the scene of five nuclear bombs? Covered by the field, the earth has disappeared in the eyes of satellites. Do you think this scene is big? Doesn't this B-square rise? The devil's b-square. Five nuclear bombs, to be honest, many heroes in Marvel can create them, especially Stark's wisdom, which is called a curse. You must know that in some worlds, he has a magician who can open armor. Is it difficult to create a few weapons that are far superior to nuclear bombs? It's just a matter of seeing where his story goes. According to the comics, Thanos is even more explosive. Who are you trying to scare with five nuclear bombs? I don't know if they can even hurt him. You don't have to use the power of the knight, just make some fancy things, parade around the world, and cover the whole world once. Who doesn't know that you are awesome? You can also tell others clearly that you are from another world, and you have to ask them to come to you. It is interesting for an invincible person to have limitations and weaknesses. Anyway, if you put the power there, they will definitely come. As long as you have the first one, there will be countless others. Because if you have it, others will definitely get it when they see that you have it. As for what you said about the will of the universe not being able to create big scenes, that's just the author's way of saying it. To put it another way, you can put it another way, you can create big scenes but not hurt the people who don't take action against you. Taking action against you is a voluntary death, and those who have nothing to do with it will just watch the show, and at the same time, you will be given a b-block, so that it is normal for others to be afraid of you. Unlike now, I feel inexplicable. What's there to be afraid of? The protagonist didn't do anything, just because he left a message? Just because you have great power? Isn't Thanos strong? Aren't gods strong? Shouldn't those superheroes still fight as they should when they meet them? As for not being able to go to bookstores? Why? Tell me, why are you so scared until now? Forget it, tell me where to jump to without writing about your home country. I will directly activate the avatar and let the world start to speed up.

I don't know what the meaning of the existence of a clone with independent thoughts is. Although the previous part is not burning, I can still watch it. Until this stupid clone appears, it is quite boring.

Forget about the clone, I can endure it, and I still have self-awareness, so forget it, I have high poison resistance, and I can still endure it, but why are you so crazy about suppressing the combat power of the clone? Until the fight against Thanos, the clone focused on the main line still only uses 555 to fight, and the power of other knights is only basic, so the meaning of your clone is just to create a useless character and be beaten together with the Avengers? You talk about making the Avengers characters stronger, but I think you didn't do much to make them stronger. Doctor Strange's strength is not even as good as the ending of the first solo movie. Iron Man has a knight power that he completely resists and doesn't develop, and his armor is not as strong as in the same period in the movie. The same goes for Thor. There was a foreshadowing in the early stage that made people think that he is about to awaken his divine power, but it turned out to be Hammer God. None of the other characters surpassed the original plot. What is your main plot?

After it was put on the shelves, there was more and more nonsense and the author became more and more self-indulgent.

I always feel that some of the previous authors are too naive. It's okay to manipulate the parade to cause trouble, but it is absolutely impossible to get such a big concession by just relying on the parade.

This book is so weirdly written, I always felt like I couldn't stand it after reading the beginning, it was just so weird and a bit uncomfortable.

The writing is incomprehensible. 10 Chapters out of 100 chapters advance the plot, and the rest are garbage. Marvel, if you don't write fights and improve your strength, you just write some inexplicable daily life. Who can continue?

The chase is over. I didn't feel it when I chased it before. Looking back now, I always feel that there are fewer knights, and I don't feel that there is no sense of knights. There seem to be few memorable events? (At least I can't think of it at the moment) But compared with the book next door with a similar name, it's very good. The book next door is pure water. Most of the plot feels like copying the original Knight TV plot, just like changing the characters to do the same plot But the book next door can reflect the importance of the knight's power. This book gives me a feeling that it can be used if it is replaced with other golden finger abilities.

I really feel disgusted about that SB clone Youqi. Why would Little Spider make such friends? It's so disgusting.

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