The Strongest Dragon Knight of the Divine Seal

Yes, things are starting to get better. The author's level has improved. When writing, the author can consider expanding the introduction of items in the mall system and the plot of its use. Effect on the protagonist group. The storyline can be divided into two parts. The first is the impact of the protagonist's killing of enemies to improve the product system on the protagonist's improvement. The second is the plot development of the main body of the story. The emotional stories of the protagonists and the historical development of the Gods and Demons Continent. The stories of former heroes and newly created artifacts may be original, or refer to artifacts from other novels, fuse them, and innovate. You can think of this novel as a world, with the author as the storyteller. Those stories are not fantasy, but ancient epics of heroes that took place in another world. You need to have this kind of thinking to create. The author should have two lines in his mind, one is killing enemies and monsters, and the other is the detailed stories of their lives. Can think and create independently. Integrate again. Insert history and other characters into it to build a vivid and vivid character image. In this way, the author's writing level can be improved, and the novel can be considered a good work. Similar to A Song of Ice and Fire, Lord of the Rings. Okay, here are some suggestions for my work based on my feelings. Thank you for reading my book review

The Dragon King is really not as powerful as the Nine-Headed Chimera

It is recommended to find a suitable opportunity for Haoyue to exit. The reasons are as follows: 1. Haoyue has locked up the plot time. It will take more than 10 years for him to reach his peak. When he reaches his peak, no matter how the plot is arranged, his power level will be at the top, and it can be said that the finale is coming. The problem lies here. Over the past 10 years, the protagonist group is generally only in their twenties and thirties. They can only play cheats and upgrades. The original book has a serious pacing problem. It can be said that it collapsed. A major upgrade of the Tower of Eternity was arranged. When they woke up, the protagonist group Wang Yuanyuan and others were directly promoted from level 7 to level 9. There was no other plot filling in the middle. Originally, the demon hunting group was engaged in guerrilla warfare among the demons, and they were promoted in the alliance. There are a lot of exciting points to write about, but the result is anticlimactic, passed over in one stroke, and directly transferred to the finale. If the protagonist group can barely handle the cheating, then the rest of the temple can't do anything. They are not strong enough to have a decisive battle, and there are no extras. 10 Years is too short, and there is no choice but to come up with some eternal heroes. The six temples and supporting characters who spent a lot of pen and ink in the early stage are basically useless. 2. The fanfic must have a new protagonist, and the two bosses in the original work are all plot-killing around Long Haochen. Originally, the story of the Holy Demon Continent was supposed to be a fantasy heroic epic about the rise of a genius, uniting human forces, making sacrifices and ultimately winning. However, it ended up being written as a family ethics drama, and the three views are not very upright ethics dramas. Alas, if I want to watch this kind of plot, I can't go to the female channel, there are a lot of them. After thinking about it, if we can't let the ethical conflicts within Long Haochen's family take over, we may have to let Haoyue exit early to leave plot space for the new protagonist

Although Long Haochen in the original work is a Madonna character, he is not perfect, so there is no need to overly mythologize him. I think the author's character design of Long Haochen is quite reasonable. The author based it on the original work, which is reasonable and well-founded.

A piece of advice I would like to give to the author is that there is no need to be a nanny for your fellow demon hunters. Recently, I have been giving pills and other pills to the Light Spirit Furnace. I could have upgraded my body, and then I bought a formation, which is completely unnecessary. Really, you have to arrange opportunities for your teammates. Of course, this will be more troublesome, but if you don't do this, there is really no point in being a nanny. This teammate is completely unearned and can be replaced by anyone. No one likes being cheated on, really.

What kind of dragon can touch the Nine-Headed Chimera? The new dragon clan is just a creature created by imitating the Chimera. The Dragon God is also a stepping stone, let alone the Dragon King.

Catch up on the latest chapter and give it a rough review. Welcome to discuss First of all, the author's writing style is from a newcomer's point of view and a fanfic. The fighting descriptions and daily descriptions are at a normal level, and there is nothing overly offensive or embarrassing Secondly, although it is a system article, this system is the compensation for the author's control of the rhythm. After all, writing a fan fiction still requires cheating. For the time being, I have created an invincible body with high external spiritual power and rapid recovery, and a companion red dragon mount. Judging from the introduction, I guess I need to learn this cheating skill? ThenEmotionally the original cp was not removed. There are two original female protagonists, one is the ice magician girl who is my childhood sweetheart, and the other is Tiansheng (original version of Angel Yan) who has not yet written much. It depends on how the author handles it. Although Qingmei is a sister who is three years older, the psychological maturity of Dalilie is a little smaller than that of the protagonist. It feels like 2333 Partner creation The images of these teammates are quite distinct, the reliable shield warrior, the shy little priest, the space assassin, the green plum ice control mage, and the dark summoner lady seems to have a side plot to unfold (maybe a human-demon hybrid or something? After all, facial description and dark talent) The teammates have talents and they are not useless. If they are trained, they will probably achieve good results. And I haven't dismantled Long Yuan's demon hunting group. In fact, I think Long's demon hunting group is really not acceptable to ordinary people. I personally feel good that the author did not pull him over, and there is nothing shocking about it To be honest, some people think that Long will not be angry with the protagonist because Cai'er was injured, but I think the author The writing is quite reasonable, and the author also gave an explanation in the chapter, which is completely self-explanatory After all, from the perspective of a Divine Seal fan, the evaluation requirements are not too high for me. Looking at it now, it is not particularly unacceptable.The main thing is that the mount, the heroine from heaven, and the system are expected to have some explosive points? Can you give me some suggestions Red Dragon Dragon Clan Mount At first glance, it seems to be from "Dragon Clan"? After all, you have already received violent blood, but you changed a Demonic Dragon Soul from the system, created it using the Dragon Pill of the Divine Seal Throne's world as a carrier, and then called it Red Lotus Demonic Dragon... Or don't call it violent blood, otherwise it would be a bit awkward If you really want violent blood, you might as well just change it to the Soul of the King of Bronze and Fire. By the way, you can also engage in fire refining, alchemy, alchemy, weapon forging, etc. This is no bigger than your Red Lotus Demonic Dragon, haha, or just write a normal western fantasy dragon, there are so many templates in DND, or I think you can set up a Deathwing... It depends on how the author rationalizes it, otherwise it is really weird If the heroine of Tiansheng is not well portrayed, she will probably be a poisonous one. I hope the author can control it.It can be cheated, but it should not be too exaggerated beyond the native people of the divine seal. After all, the title of your novel is not called Traveling through the divine seal throne with Angel Yan (laughing) And what about this system? Speaking of which, it's hard to comment. If the author doesn't dilute the system in the future, he will have to improve the balance of Battle points acquisition. The fourth level is 100 and the fifth level is 500. The price of your previous skills... Maybe it will be inflation and directly scan the goods in the mall. Then you can buy it or not. Isn't it purely poisonous to suppress the growth of the protagonist? I hope the author can deal with it well or downplay the system in the future. High-end hacking skills should either be compiled into Master Inheritance, or reasonable cheating and let the protagonist create it with the power of my imagination. Some skills can also be written to be a bit more exciting Because the hacks you open in the system now are actually deus ex machina to get physical constitution and mounts. Both of these can be compiled. It is the opportunity given by the master, allowing you to inherit an external spirit. Of course, there is no way to change it now. What I mean by this is that you can also rely on you as the master to provide some reasonable assistance, just like what you wrote to support the equipment. Of course, if you have a reasonable outline, just pretend that I didn't say anything After the plot of the Demon Hunting Group has been written, the proportion of the author's original plot will gradually increase. You can refer to the original plot. I'm just writing a part of it. After all, if I keep following the original plot, I might as well read Seal of God, right? It depends on the author's outline I hope the author has an outline, after all, Seal of God fanfics... There are so few of them now Personally, this book is really good among the four Seal of God fanfics, at least it is better than Wenqing Sadist and Outrageous Game Fans (Personally, I don't mean to start a fight, but I really don't understand that the fandom of that game can be ordered by thousands. Maybe it's because there really aren't any Divine Seal fanfics at the beginning, and the book about the Wenqing Torturer is even more outrageous... I really can't stand it.) It will be on the shelves soon. I hope the author can remain stable. Let's just say that he can write a Divine Seal fanfic, and then the most important thing is to update it steadily. If the tentacle monster can be updated more than ten thousand times a day, that will be even better. The results will probably not be worse than those two books. I wish you good luck.

I still don't understand how these knights fight. After summoning the mount, can't a two-meter toothpick be enough to reach someone? I remember there was a book called "The Dragon Knight in the Age of Dragons", which actually had a seven-meter-long dragon spear and a long-range throwing axe. I don't understand how he can cooperate with Duanyi when he rides on a three-meter-tall mammoth. It's not online game data. Summoning mounts automatically adds bonuses. Don't you care about physics in reality? 😁

Talking about the sheer nonsense of the Nine-Headed Super Dragon God, there is a clear benchmark for the peak strength of the Nine-Headed Chimera. It was the previously destroyed plane, with more than a dozen demigods, and then died together with the Nine-Headed Chimera in its heyday. To put it bluntly, the Nine-Headed Chimera could probably defeat more than a dozen demigods at its peak. Just because the Nine-Headed Chimera was born together with the God of Creation does not mean that he has the strength of the God of Creation. Well, the original book said that the God of Creation is much more powerful than him. It is a simple truth. The lice on the elephant also coexist with the elephant. Could it be that he has the same power as the elephant?

I just discovered it, and I want to ask if any of my brothers have any fans of Cai'er's Divine Seal? Although Long Haochen has the most correct views among all the novels about traitors to the Tang Dynasty, I personally don't like this type of male protagonist (I like Xiao Yan's character). The two of them have gone through so many hardships together. Why does a relationship have to go through so many hardships? I hope that a genius stream can develop normally and grow up with Sheng Cai'er without so many hardships.

When the heroine came out, it felt very abrupt and confusing, as if a car forced her way into the car while driving. I don't understand what you want to express in these two pictures. It only makes me feel that the protagonist is very low. I obviously felt that my IQ was online before. Of course this is just my personal opinion, please feel free to delete it if you don't like it.

Protagonist Picture Mithril Pedestal Adamantine Pedestal Sacred Throne

Personally, I feel that the plane of the Divine Seal Throne is much higher than the Douluo Continent plane. I feel that the strong men of level 9 and 9 can hold down those god kings and beat them. The gods of Douluo are not as strong as the powerful ones of the Divine Seal except for their longer lifespan.

This is a fanfic from Super Seminary (Sealed Throne Edition). The current plot of the small world of the Goddess of Light is that Ge Xiaolun and Angel Yan went on a blind date in Fraser. Angel Yan died and was resurrected with the help of a sub-biological engine. Is Shangguan Yan going to have a XX spiritual furnace here?

After reading more than 80 chapters, I feel that overall it is okay, but the part involving the original protagonist, especially the Shengyue family, feels OOC. Although Mr. Shengyue protects his shortcomings, Cai'er's parents may have objections to the protagonist hurting Cai'er, but it is definitely not the kind of thing that is done for the sake of giving. Those who take revenge for their daughter and ignore the interests of mankind, otherwise Cai'er would not be separated from them. It is for the sake of mankind that they let Cai'er go to the trial, and it turns out that Cai'er hates them. Then how can they take revenge on the protagonist for Cai'er, or even kill the protagonist? Especially when we already know that the protagonist is a genius, the most he can do is teach him a lesson, so this plot feels very failed and very OOC.

In some places, the character is really maliciously vilified 😥 and the protagonist is both serious and upright. A system is created to say that Long Haochen, the son of luck, has good luck. I guess you are not from a poor family 😁 and Cai'er's family in the original book did not take action against innocent passers-by. You wrote the book based on your own preferences and changed the NPC settings at will. What's your stance in this fanfic about creating such a protagonist like Guang Zhengwei🤔

What the hell did you give the light element elf to someone else? ? ? ? Rubbish

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To be honest, the bottom line of this book is *, the character design has completely collapsed, and the author can bring the dead to life. The author is a character.

Then why are you in the twenties and thirties after chapter 110?