Comfortable Ranch Life

It's a bit like Ranch Leisure, but this one is a little bit poisonous, so let's start the party.

Don't keep so many pets. Don't keep so many pets. Those books from a few years ago, such as Golden Fishing Ground, Golden Ranch, American Rancher, etc., All of which had the protagonist having a bunch of pets, were both low in word count and annoying.

Come and read to me

The author's writing is very good and not a noob. But it will not exploit its strengths and avoid its weaknesses. You wrote Goldfinger Ranch. Just write around Goldfinger's spirit fluid, and then write about blue sky, white clouds, and animals having fun. Look at what you're rewriting: The land on the farm is muddy and difficult to drive to traffic, and it's inconvenient to live far away from the city. There is endless work to do and endless animals to take care of in a day. You are not tired when you write, but you are tired when you look at it.

There was an awesome golden finger, but it turned out to be used in the stupidest way.

If you are not careful, you will be blind. Poison 1: Digging truffles. Your hook can basically guarantee the best truffles. I found a few so-called brothers who were young men. Poison 2: The brain is sick. If digging truffles is for primitive accumulation, the subsequent cooperation will be an exercise in imagination and nothing. Refer to Chapter 11 and ask the protagonist to give a guarantee. Poison 3: If you don't know how to speak, speak less. If you don't know how to plan the pasture, don't forcefully explain it. Just write down an irrigation system. If you don't have the ability to popularize science, don't talk awkwardly. There are so many simple and low-cost irrigation methods, so I chose the most expensive and troublesome one. On these three points, 99% of readers will be defeated. The audience for ranch articles is very large. If you write like this, you will drive away more people.

Too many translation accents and the "we" in the middle look a bit annoying and affect the experience.

I don't know what other people think about it. To me, the dialogue between the characters here seems to be that of an American TV series, with a sense of machine translation. It looks a bit awkward and awkward.

Such good liquefied spiritual energy, why is it not added to the food of hounds and horses, and why is it not consumed by the protagonist himself?

I just found out that I have a new book. I really like ranching and the like. Good luck to the author.

It seemed okay from the beginning, but the further I went back, the more explanations I had to explain over and over again, and there was more and more nonsense.

I've read more than twenty chapters of this book, but I don't know why I lost interest in it. It's tasteless.

In such a cold place, it is really ridiculous to be able to carry out construction without frozen soil in winter.

Wouldn't there be an aircraft that can spray pesticides that would be more suitable than sprinkler irrigation?

There is spiritual fluid, so if you don't drink it, you just play with it.

The article talks about calves one at a time, and sometimes a paragraph is repeated several times. In our local area, the word "calf" is not a good word. Isn't the calf bad? Wouldn't it feel cuter?

Why do you like to use the words "what are we, how are you, how are you"? When you talk to people, eight out of ten sentences will be "we, you". It's so uncomfortable to watch.

After reading the latest chapter, there is potential for the development of nonsense literature 😂

The writing is too plain, like a running account, the kind that is tasteless and a pity to discard.

It's all in a translator's accent, which looks really awkward. I've never been abroad, but Americans normally speak with such accents?

Since it is a ranch, there are no scenes describing the ranch. I can't feel the scenery or things about the ranch. I can't see it. There are no descriptive words about this aspect.

What is the situation? No more writing?

What's the update speed? There's always one update per day.

I'll go, this is too casual, I gave myself 8.9 Days off during the Chinese New Year! Hurry up and update, this is still waiting.

After reading it for the time being, I found that the ranch was relatively tight in the first year, but later on it started to talk too much. Every few chapters there were boasts to express the cowboys' efforts, and they were abandoned.

I like this kind of ranch novel and look forward to the author's next novel

Calabash, restaurants, and pastures are all the same. Can you come up with something new?

The writing is very good and realistic. It is better than the previous space ranch articles. It can finally make people think a little bit.