Cultivation to Immortality Begins with the Jailer

I'm determined to have perfect attendance, even Jesus can't stop me, I said so!

To be honest, if you choose the first option, it will be a good book. It has been said in the book that the protagonist does not care about life or death, and his emotions of revenge also come from his past. Then why not just avenge your predecessor and think about your own affairs later? Isn't it just greed to choose the second option for the resurrection of a loved one under the euphemistic name? I openly admit that after a round of detours, the character of the protagonist completely collapsed.

Traditional web writing routines from ten years ago.

It's such an old routine of revenge and resurrection, it's not interesting.

How long have I seen this type of key? It's only a few chapters. It's either too slow or plagiarized.

The first chapter... The memory part can be written later. In addition, I thought that the protagonist could let those big guys come out to fight... But it turned out that they just changed things, emmm... Maybe they couldn't come out in the early stage. The writing is okay, it would be nice if the conflict could be more intense.

How can I put it this way? I feel that the plot is too deliberate and the pretense of picking up girls is too fake and doesn't resonate much. It would be better if the moisturizing process could be done silently and step by step.