Douluo's Ice Demon Yuhao

I think the three views of this book are very upright. It completely describes the protagonist's growth process. It is just that he was confused for a long time, but now he has gradually matured. I think the fun part is coming. The protagonist's early problems are because his morality is too high and he is incompatible with the entire Douluo Continent. He cares more about the common people. In the past, there was Tang Laogou who used poison to massacre the city. The original work Huo Yuhao also blew up Mingdu, and most of the people who died were ordinary people. This is something that the protagonist of this book will never do (of course, it does not rule out the later Lelouch transformation and setting off fireworks in the capital). Because he received nine years of compulsory education and had a great man like Mr. Yuan as an example, he is incompatible with the mentality of the Douluo Continent Soul Master who treats ordinary people like ants. And the protagonist was not very old in his previous life. He was in the second grade, so he was powerless and confused about the current situation. But it is undeniable that he does care about the world, but his ability is temporarily insufficient. But who can stir up the storm from the beginning? Chairman Mao went to the countryside to investigate and brew for several years. How can I put it, this is what great men have in common. They all started from passionate young people who were tempered by time and the general trend. Gradually become more calm and restrained, becoming more determined. Sometimes something does not necessarily have to be successful, but more importantly, it is to take the first step and explore in failure. And at this time, no one understands him. The Ice and Snow Emperor and Tianmeng can give him guidance in cultivation, but they are unable to accompany him in this aspect. Yi Lao has rich life experience, but it is more about enlightenment and cannot achieve ideological resonance, so he will always be entangled and impetuous in the early stage.

Because this book really made me smoke twice as much. I only read 180 chapters. The protagonist gave me a twisted feeling. He was like a guy who was born under the impact of two world views. He has "lofty ideals" and is like a madman. He also said that with Tianmeng, they became gods and always committed suicide and provoked titled Douluo. The total number of past and present lives is more than 20 years old. After experiencing so many things, he has not matured. So the protagonist can't bear the blow and starts to twist? He also said that he wanted to change the world, so he should work hard to become stronger. From the chapters I have read, I personally feel that the protagonist is an untrustworthy, distorted thinking and "crazy" guy. He said that he wanted to change the world, but he started to commit suicide before even taking the first step to change the world. A hero with such lofty ideals turned out to be a bastard. A guy who has no wisdom, no mind, acts impulsively and doesn't remember the consequences.

I have been very interested in Dou Er fans recently. I have tried to read eleven or twelve books. This is the only one that I can happily follow. Let's not talk about the issue of whether the three views are correct or not. Many works do not even describe the values ​​seriously. How can I say that this book is described with care? I really don't know how. So many people have opinions about this book and the protagonist In fact, many books seem to have the protagonist being very smart and in control of everything, but in the final analysis, it depends on how the author wants to write it, either to give the enemy wisdom, or to give the protagonist a stack of buffs such as the Unpredictable Prophet, but this book starts from the beginning. The setting is that the protagonist is just a time traveler who does not know the original work, and every action he takes is based on his own values. As for many people saying that the protagonist commits suicide in the early stage, it is actually mentioned in the article. The protagonist himself has some problems because his values ​​are inconsistent with society. The "devil" tendency manifests itself in always saying bold things, doing crazy things, and having a weak sense of survival. In my personal opinion, time travel stories should depict the ideological collision between modern society and the world they travel to, otherwise it would be better to just write about a local character. And many time-travel novels don't have any depiction at all on this point. Let's talk about the various "contradictory" behaviors of the protagonist. In fact, in my opinion, this is one of the main highlights of the book. The protagonists in many works can get to the end all the way, which is arranged by the author's will. Normally, when you write a character, you must arrange a lot of "relationships" for him. To make it simpler, that is The arrangement is clear, with one side being allies and the other being villain. In this book, Xing Luo's original character Ming De is not like this. These parties have both good and bad views on the protagonist, and their own values are also different from the protagonist. In addition, the protagonist also has a commitment to Ice Emperor Tianmeng. Under such various restrictions, his behavior is naturally very "contradictory". "Shield", and this is exactly what I think is good about this book. I feel very immersive after reading the whole book Then let me talk about my personal opinions on this book When describing ideological confrontation, it is actually not necessary to completely become what modern society looks like, because productivity is different, and copying it will cause problems, such as In order to improve the status of civilians, Douluo itself has "magic". It is unrealistic to demand equality for everyone when there is such extraordinary power. Instead, the idea should be changed to make civilians have stronger power, improve civilian martial arts, develop powers that are not restricted by martial arts (soul guides), and shorten the "gap between rich and poor". Rather than relying on the "violence" of the protagonist to achieve equality, we should start from the source and remove the root causes of inequality. On the one hand, the protagonist needs to achieve the so-called unified world, and on the other hand, he must also study ways to actually improve inequality. Finally, I would like to give some words to other readers. There is no need to hold on to one or two places. In the end, the work is written. It may be that the author's own ideas are slightly different from yours, or the expression is not appropriate, but it may also be that the author's expression is different from your interpretation. A few problems are really innocuous. How can an online article cover everything all the time

This Dou Er fanfic is really good-looking and the characters are quite fresh. The author will update it soon!

Maybe some people have read too much of Long Aotian's slap-in-the-face harem cool writing routines, so some people crazily criticize him when they see some of San Guan Zheng's works. This book does have some poisonous points, but not many. It is much better than those harem studs who tortured Tang San San Guan Zheng crazily and without reason. Although in the early stage, the protagonist felt like he was driven half crazy by the world, but later because of Electrolux, Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, The reasons for Tianmeng and some other people have been brought back. To be honest, I like the character of the protagonist of this book very much. He has the ambition of a young man, does not give in to oppression, dares to resist, and has the urge to not hit the wall and never look back. From a God's perspective, sometimes the protagonist is really stupid, but from a perspective of the protagonist without a God's perspective, the protagonist actually does a very good job, at least better than most people who don't know the plot. People who have traveled back in time have done much better. If I didn't know the plot and traveled back in time, I don't think I would be able to achieve the protagonist's current achievements. After all, I have been so rounded by society. Without the impulse and vitality of young people, I don't think a person can go far without ambition. When I was young, I thought I was the protagonist. Later I realized that I was not one of the insignificant sentient beings, and the earth would be the same without me. It has changed to the point that I am completely ruined now, whether it is due to environmental factors or social factors. It is undeniable that I am a failure, but reading this book is like seeing myself when I was young. He is more impulsive, ambitious, and daring to do things than me. He has more perseverance and persistence than most of us. Some people think that the things the protagonist does are indeed too extreme, but who doesn't have it when they are young? When I was young, I also had great ambitions, which is completely different from the me who is like a loser now. In summary, this is a good Dou Er fanfic. I hope that the protagonist can continue to climb to the top of the world with his ambition, impulse, and ambition, at least not to become the dog in the original work.

The front is fine, but the character of the protagonist in the back is gone. He can break away from various organizations very easily, and his behavior style is completely different from the previous one. The author's writing skills are not good enough. Also, the protagonist has always had this weird pride of being a time traveler. If you know a little bit about it, you feel that the IQ suppression and technical suppression formed with the people on Douluo are outrageous. I suggest you read the previous one.

(Spoiler Warning) In the past few days, I wanted to look for some Dou Er fans to read, but after reading for a long time, I found that either Long Aotian from the stinky street followed the group, or the writing style could not keep up with the imagination. The few who could write the ups and downs of the plot mostly had personality defects, so I finally decided to play Ice Demon. The Ice Demon is not without its faults, but at least it can tell where the protagonist comes from and where he wants to go. He remains consistent while continuing to learn and improve. It's a story with roots and one that's bathed in sunlight so it can thrive. To this day, I can still recall the phrase "Use the sky and the earth as a painting studio, dye all things with autumn colors" (should it be this sentence?) In Beidi Douluo and the Valley of Love. The majestic mountains and rivers change their colors, and they seize power from the sun and the moon. Although there are more details in the details, it is enough to become an incomparable classic fragment for me. I like this book.

This book gives me a very restorative feeling. Except for Brother Hao, a time traveler who has been growing up, the other characters are basically exactly the same as themselves in the original book. They are really excellent. Some parts of the original book by tjss were not given much ink, and this book also has reasonable expansion, which makes people feel that "if they were that person, they would really do this in this situation." Although some people say that they are forced to quit in the early stage, I think the beginning is not bad (regarded as an above-average level). The handling of Duke White Tiger's family was even better. Not only did he take good care of Brother Hao's mother without any enmity, but he also effectively destroyed the beginning of someone's long-term plan to absorb the Son of Destiny (laughs). Starting from the middle and early stages, Brother Hao's arrogant and arrogant character has become mature as he grows up. Although he will compromise, the compromise is for the subsequent explosion. Brother Hao will eventually implement his own thinking and will. We can also see that he is still Brother Hao in essence, and there is no situation in the original work where Wang Dong becomes Dong'er and becomes a spoiled wife. As for Huo Fengxian, the slave with the third surname that some people are making fun of, I can only say that the protagonist is really not Lu Bu. His actions have a clear purpose. Brother Hao is a person who must repay kindness. You will understand it after reading it. Personally, this book is one of the few T1 fanfics about the peerless Tang Sect, and it is definitely worth reading. If you can't stand it in the early stages, you can skip a section and start watching another plot. (Although the early stage is quite fun, I quite like it)

Let's talk about the conclusion first. I think this fanfic is in the position of being above a good work but below a good one. Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The protagonist has not read the original work, and there is no system to upgrade him, so it will not give people a sense of mindless coolness. 2. The author has a unique understanding of skills. For example, using mental sharing on the enemy can cause mental pollution, and using mental agility and mental exile together can achieve the effect of torturing the enemy. 3. The middle and later stages are well written, such as the Soul Master Competition and the Qiankun Qingqing Valley and other chapters. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages: 1. Dai Huabin and Zhou Yi in this book are a bit too beautified. Dai Huabin can actually be "whitewashed" under the education of the protagonist? Will Zhou Yi change her teaching methods under the protagonist's persuasion? Yuhao's classmate said: If I dared to say this in front of her, it would be great if she would not expel me and just let me run in circles. 2. For the shaping of the protagonist, first of all, I can understand that the protagonist will often reject the values ​​​​of this world, but it is really disgusting to preach to other characters at every turn in the early stage, and later when the Ice and Fire Eyes were created, they also wanted to destroy the entire Ice and Fire Eyes. This... I don't know if it's because I brought a God's perspective, but I felt awkward when I watched it anyway. That's it for the current review. There are still 248 chapters that I haven't read yet. After I've read them, I'll post the next review.

I like the character of the protagonist of this book very much I have recently read a lot of fanfics where the protagonists start to go crazy after just a few steps away from the bottom and become Tang San. Especially the Douluo fanfics. The protagonists are as if they are enveloped by the blue silver field. They obviously traveled from modern times and started doing bad things but adapted quickly If you are poor, you can be good at yourself. If you are great, you can help the world. Since the protagonist is in the Hydrogen Continent, he can't be considered weak, right?

From 2022 to now I have seen other fanfics with names and surnames Changed an account The sun and the moon have entered the palace I still think the ice demon is the best There is no harem and no strange value The plot is exciting and the writing is not a noob Standing out of the mire of a crowd of sensational online articles After three years Nearly six hundred chapters have passed Shrek's first appearance The brief stay of the Noumenon Sect The climax of Sun and Moon Mingdu The characters in those books are so vivid Brother Hao and Qiu'er are two aspiring young people who have inherited the beautiful thoughts of modern times There is a generation of master Mu En (gone) , arrogant and unruly poisonous, mentor and helpful friend Electrolux Those soul beast companions are so cute The incomprehensible Tianmeng, the duplicitous and arrogant Ice Emperor, and the stunning Snow Emperor The author has brought to life those somewhat labeled and formulaic characters in Peerless The description of psychology is even better than that of other fans. Overwhelmed Brother Hao's adventure story accompanied me for some years in junior high school and high school However, standing at the crossroads of life I had to temporarily leave this book that I have been chasing for three years to study for the college entrance examination In the modern era where capitalist civilization is high Han people are even more enthusiastic about the sun. Nation So we pursue time and efficiency The author who writes such a meticulous book is so rare I hope that those worldly fame will be added to me When I can come back with honor and peace of mind to brush it over again It is still not extinct I hope the author does not change his original intention and is a true hero

Originally, after looking at the introduction and cover, I was a little bit reluctant to take a look. After all, it smelled of fun people and a broken painting style. But, there are no books to read now, so here I am~ I have to say that the py deal between Lang Bao and the author is still valid. At least the direct inducement is the soft advertisement that Lang Bao stuffed at the end of the book. To be honest, the introduction and cover of this book are a bit separated from the content. Personally, I feel that the protagonist is not a grumpy old man, but more of an angry young man. I personally prefer a growth-oriented protagonist. Let's just take the protagonist's early immaturity as such. After all, most people's growth is to swallow bitterness and compromise with life? The protagonist grows from strength to ideological level, and the author promotes this process with the development of the storyline. Growth can never be obtained by staying in a greenhouse, but it is only accompanied by bitter tears too often. Seeing that the author also talked a lot about his personal situation during the coding process, I can only say that there are still only a few tentacle monsters and typewriters like Lang Bao. I think the protagonist carries some of the author's emotional and spiritual sustenance. Some things may make many people think they are pretentious and cheap, but they linger in their hearts and will never be forgotten. Come on, author bacteria

It took me two days to read it, and I would like to give my personal comments. First of all, I personally feel very good about it, and there is one thing that most novels, whether original or fanfiction, do not have, that is, the protagonist's psychological growth. In current novels, the character is basically the same as the first chapter, and there is basically no change in the middle or the end. As far as whether there is any poison, there is basically none.

Fans with obvious advantages and disadvantages have their own things, such as the explosion of Qingqing Valley, the character of the protagonist in the early stage, etc. There are also shortcomings, such as the inexplicable mine trip before stealing the country, the excessive malice towards Shrek and his like, resulting in a lack of rationality, etc. Most of them appear after the updates are intermittent. My personal suggestion is to call it a day after watching The Valley of Love The character was quite obvious in the early stage, but later it became a template for the protagonist of Internet culture; the hatred was a bit serious, the countess drama that was difficult to complain about, and the martial arts system that became more and more facial; and although the original Shrek was very CS, he couldn't bring it up completely, and the part where Ma Xiaotao died was physically disgusting. This is true, but this is also a tribute to the original work. (In addition, I also want to complain that in the original work, Ma Xiaotao and Huo are not completely unrelated, and they are not characters who cannot be influenced by the protagonist. It would be a pity to be in Ye Guyi's position and just be used as a punching bag); there are also fewer and fewer daily emotional scenes in the middle period, and the emotional scenes of Lin Jiujiu, Xue Di, and Qiu'er are all lacking It may also be that there are not many fans recently, so the requirements are a bit strict.

I have read Chapter 11 so far. Personally, it is difficult for me to understand the logic of the plot of Tianmeng Ice Silkworm. First of all, the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm in the original work is indeed very special. After being sucked as food for ten thousand years, its primary purpose after coming out is to lick the Ice Emperor, which is quite outrageous. However, in this book, after the protagonist refused to absorb the soul ring (perhaps out of vigilance? I can't understand), Tianmeng Iceworm still clearly resorted to forcible absorption when the pursuers were about to arrive. After intending to forcibly absorb it and was stopped, he was caught up by the auspicious beast and still looked for the protagonist to make a decision. Compared with the original work, is it a bit too confusing? Secondly, Tianmeng was instigated to attack the auspicious beast. I really don't know what the protagonist's motivation is and why. You have to hit before you can run. Regardless of the result of doing this, it will cause a super-powerful beast to persecute more people. Just talk about whether this is too extreme in terms of the logic of the protagonist. Maybe it is a setting made to reflect the growth of the protagonist in the later stage, but this kind of treatment is not very pleasing to people like me who like a more stable protagonist (subjective evaluation) Currently, these are my shortcomings

Good guy, this can be said to be an excellent Douluo fanfic from the beginning, and it is the pinnacle of Dou Er. At first, I was attracted by the cover and introduction, but as I read, the writing is excellent (Good Guy kills most of the fandom in an instant), and the content is also quite rich (Oh my god, there is finally a normal person who has traveled through time, and it has solved all the readers' dissatisfaction with Dou Er) , and there are many funny jokes, and the relationship between the characters is well handled (such as the relationship between Yuhao and the Dai family). It is highly recommended. After reading ten chapters, you can determine the character of the protagonist and some of the author's thoughts on Douluo (unlike other novels where the protagonist is naive and only follows the plot). Author, you write well, you write well. You should be rewarded severely. (Damn it, why isn't it popular)

First: Never act out of emotion!

The Far North Trio

There is Dong Hao's handwritten book "The Abnormally Dancing Lepidoptera" on station b. I recommend everyone to read it and talk about my views on Wang Dong's character. Writing about Dou Er, Wang Dong must be a character that cannot be avoided. This character is far more difficult to deal with than imagined, because in the original work, she is a very separated person. This book will undoubtedly be anti-Tang Dynasty, so how to deal with the relationship with Wang Dong will be very difficult. What do we criticize about the original work? It was Tang San who controlled Wang Dong, obliterated her personality, and turned her into his own puppet and a tool to kidnap Huo Yuhao. Some people may say that writing a fanfic is just to make up for regrets and prevent Wang Dong from becoming Tang Wutong? But what can we rely on to maintain Wang Dong's personality? She will eventually regain her memory, and will be caught between the protagonist and Tang San, facing a painful choice. Some people may say that as long as he is stronger than Tang San and defeats Tang San, Wang Dong's personality can be preserved. But in my opinion, Wang Dong is still a puppet, but he has just changed from Tang San's puppet to the protagonist's puppet. Her pride and spirit are never worth mentioning. Can anyone give me some inspiration?

Qiuer's reissue (replenishing the character's vest)

It's so tiring to watch. One of the protagonists is a noob and the other is a master.

According to unreliable information, the heroines of this book include Wang Dong'er, Wang Qiu'er, Xiao Xiao, Jiang Nannan, Tianmeng, Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, Mermaid Princess, Mermaid Lord's sister, Mermaid Princess' mother, Bajiao, Orange, Xu Jiujiu, Wei Na, Wu Ming, Lan Susu, Lan Luoluo, Nan Qiuqiu, Nan Shuishui, Nana, Weina, Meng Hongchen, Cain, Tang Ya, Ma Xiaotao, Zhou Yi, Hibiscus, Han Ruoruo, Ling Luochen, Zhu Lu, Xu Tianzhen, Bai, Muyue, Su Tong, Zhang Lexuan, Gu Yuena, Bi Ji, Zi Ji, Mo Huang, Lan Fuzi, Lang Yue, Ye Xinglan, Xu Xiaoyan, Yuan En Yehui, Wu Siduo, Dai Yun'er, Ya Li, Long Yeyue, Nunnally, Long Bing, Ling Zichen, Leng Yaozhu, Cao Dezhi, Ye Lingtong, Xingxuan, Bai Xiuxiu, Lan Mengqin, Tang Yuge, Yuan Enhuihui, Qiangu Yourou, Le Qingling, Sakura Falling Red, Blue Butterfly, Nan Cheng, Long Tianyang, Crimson Mother, Song Lao, Cai Meier, Xian Liner, Ye Xishui, Fengling, Duchess , Huo Yun'er, Dai Luoli's mother, Xu Yun, Xiao Wu, Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing, the three Shangguan sisters, Feng Nu, Lan Chen, Sula, Li Haiyang, Anya, Xiang Luan, Ye Lianqin, Mother Demon King, Lily, Phil, Tian Qin, Piaomiao, Mo Yue, Mu Zimo, Hai Xing, Li Muzi, Evil Emperor, Golden Dragon Princess, the first angel god, Qian Renxue, Bibi Dong, Hu Liena, Ye Lingling, Xue Ke, Liu Erlong, Meng Yiran, Bo Saixi, A Yin, Deep Sea Demon Whale King, Daming , Erming, Emperor Tian, Dark Dragon King, Water Dragon King, God of Lust, God of Light, Water God, Bai Chenxiang, Wife of the Dragon God, Sheng Caier, Bai Yue, Lan Yanyu, Li Xin, Meng Qingqing, Sun Wanwan, Qiao Huan'er, Meigongzi, Su Qin , Huo Linger, Crystal Demon Emperor, Tianyang Tianjing Emperor, Diyin Tianjing Emperor, Yuan Enxingtian, Li Jiangqi, Qiu Zixuan, Lan Yinhai, Audrey, Hepburn, Ling Menglu, Tang Ling, God of Kindness, Goddess of Life, Lie Yan, Dai Ying, Face

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I wonder what other people think of this book! The overall content is good and the pace is okay. But I feel like the protagonist was written too brainlessly, especially regarding the college's handling of Ma Xiaotao. The compensation fee was simply thrown away? If you can't resist, can't you pluck the wool? Okay, let's just assume that the protagonist has a strong personality and doesn't want to be humiliated. But how dare you provoke Ma Xiaotao? Do you think anyone is your father? Do I have to tolerate you everywhere? Use your mouth to escape those who are stronger than you, and punch those who are weaker than you. In a world where force is paramount, do you still despise strength? I saw that Wu Feng couldn't stand it anymore, and I felt like he was using Wu Feng as a punching bag. If you really despise the strong, just drop out of school. After you leave, say 30 years to Hedong and 30 years to Hexi. Don't bully young people into poverty. Wouldn't it be more enjoyable to directly join the long-standing team to defeat Shrek? Anyway, I really didn't notice the disdain for the strong, but the bullying was obvious.

Posting something fun to make everyone happy😋 At this moment, a huge golden figure suddenly appeared behind the six souls. The golden halo was like appearing out of the sky, swallowing up all the six souls and six emotions. An indescribable softness, unrestrainedness, wildness, and nostalgia surged out instantly. That is... The power of love! "Wutong! I——, love——, you——" Dai Yuhao shouted loudly. At this moment, his voice turned into a colorful halo, piercing Tang San in the distance. Tang San didn't flinch, he stared at the colorful halo persistently and firmly, and shouted word by word in a voice that was almost like a roar: "Resurrection! My - love -.

The protagonist is blaming the sky and the earth, which seems awesome, but in fact, so far, he is just a clown and has written almost two million words, but he has not been able to affect the real overall situation. The ideals are lofty, but the abilities are mediocre. To put it bluntly, the ambition is not big enough and the progress is not fast enough. Do you really want to write three million words for a fanfic?

After reading more than 200 chapters, I felt very awkward. In the past, the protagonist talked a lot about his ideals, but after more than 200 chapters, there was no growth at all. It was almost half the chapter and the character was still the same as in the early stage. There was no change at all. In the past, he talked about establishing order and everything for more than 200 and 300 chapters. In the end, the ideals are still ideals and there is no actual action at all. It is true that Douluo's world view is indeed inconsistent with the protagonist, but what can you do? Protagonist 1. Does not have a strong background 2. Does not have strong strength (currently the protagonist is just a gifted genius) What can you do if your three views don't match? As mentioned earlier, he is a man who can bend and stretch, but if one person dies in the game, he will fall out with the No. 1 Academy in Mainland China? Then he said that the Noumenon Sect is all crazy and he wanted to leave the Noumenon Sect again. He took advantage of others and said he wanted to leave because he didn't want to bear the sins of the Noumenon Sect. Isn't this mean? I didn't see any growth, I only saw an sb of an idealist who never took practical actions from beginning to end.

When I watched Douluo before, I thought Tang San and Shrek were very glorious and decent people, but now I'm watching it and your comments. Md, I just want to go back in time and give myself a big mouthful. What the hell is Monster Academy pure and pure. 😜😜

I spent a lot of money to read the latest chapter. Overall, it is a good fanfic, but I felt uncomfortable after reading it. It was like a delicacy with all colors, flavors, and flavors, but eating it was like a piece of cake. Let's talk about the advantages of the book. The writing is very good, the story is there, and the development that is completely different from the original is a plus point However, there are also shortcomings, and there are quite a few First of all, the character. I really don't know what to say about the character of the protagonist. The irritable old man in the early stage was very good, but later he became completely different. Moreover, the protagonist did not have a clear personality orientation, which is a big flaw. A qualified novel may have a distinctive character, but the protagonist is totally different. The current protagonist is completely an SB who has inexplicable arrogance towards this world because of his status as a time traveler. How to put this question: betraying Shrek, this is very cool, you can have it; betraying the Noumenon Sect, I don't understand, the evil nature of the Noumenon Sect's actions deliberately described by the author makes me confused; the last Mingdetang is still there. Needless to say, this is a modern domestic slave with three surnames. The protagonist leaves the top group in the world. What a concept, it's like joining the world's great powers, and you just run away because you are unhappy. It makes me feel like where did this protagonist come from? He is running around the world relying on his inner struggles. After the world of mortals asked about their hearts and minds, the character of the protagonist has not changed. He has always been confused and entangled. What is there to be entangled in? Whenever I meet an evil soul master, I feel "irritated" and "cold". You are getting irritated every day. I have read 870,000 words. Do you understand what 870,000 words are? If I read another novel, I have matured and even become a big boss. I am so fast that I can become my ancestor and change my place. The picture has been taken, but the protagonist is still irritable and sneering all day long. I understand a modern person's disgust towards evil soul masters, but you fucking regard the elimination of evil soul masters as your mission. You can't do it step by step. You have to lead yourself into a bad predicament. What kind of character do you have? ! Taishan jumps ahead without changing his expression. This is a sign of maturity. Furthermore, in the early stage, have the protagonist and Tianmeng Ice Emperor and Snow Emperor gotten along with each other? The original intention was to help them become gods, but in the end they became the tools of the protagonist to deal with the evil soul master! Don't feelings need to be promoted? Going smoothly will directly increase your favorability? Tianmeng and Ice Emperor at least got along before, but as soon as Snow Emperor came in, they were full of affection? Helping the protagonist kill evil soul masters all day long, but don't care about the path to becoming a god? Please, if you want to lead them to become gods, don't you kill the evil soul master all the way for your own sense of justice. The same goes for Snow Emperor. Shouldn't she take the road to becoming a god more seriously in her heart? She just keeps accommodating the protagonist. With this attitude, she becomes a god. Not to mention Wang Dong's problem. You can see how good the two of them were in the early stage. Then the Haotian Sect was screwed up. You know it has nothing to do with Wang Dong, so why don't you have any ideas? Why don't you ask Wang Dong for a solution? You can just think of one or two sentences and write them down, but no, I haven't even mentioned a single sentence in hundreds of thousands of words. I really don't know what to say when it's written by your character. The world of mortals asks for answers, and the awkward sense of justice is regarded as a mission. The arrogance of the time traveler is just like my boss, Tian Lao Er, and it's totally different. Second, behavior. What exactly does the protagonist want to do? His intention is to become a god, but his actions keep killing evil soul masters. Are you crazy? To put it bluntly, does the protagonist care about Tianmeng Ice Emperor and Snow Emperor? Maybe he does, but from what I have seen, after hundreds of thousands of words, they are just simple tools, even tool people without thoughts. You If you say kill the evil soul master, then kill him. If you say infiltrate the Holy Spirit Cult, then go ahead, haha... And the final issue of stance, the arrogance of the time traveler, I won't talk about it anymore. You say unify the continent, where do you have the heart? Brother, do you have the strength of an Ultimate Douluo? Do you have the 1234 level cannonballs that kill gods? You, the little soul emperors, want to kill all the evil soul masters like a savior, and you even do not hesitate to bring the ice emperors and others who have devoted themselves to helping you into danger. You are so arrogant. As for that, everything is on your shoulders. Overall, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. It is also one of the few peerless fandoms that I have read the latest chapter. The writing is online and the story is good. The only thing that makes me awkward or even disgusted is the character. According to the grumpy old man in the early stage, it was not very good, but it is different in the later stage. After finishing the book, I will just relax and read. I just hope that the author will really change the character of the protagonist in the future, at least clarify a distinctive character, let me know that the protagonist is attractive, instead of relying on his identity as a time traveler and some modern concepts to point fingers at this and look down on that, they are not in the same world, and the world view is inconsistent.

War against the Sun and Moon Empire ✊😡🤜 War against the Star Luo Empire ✊😡🤜 War against the Sky Soul Empire ✊😡🤜 War against the Dou Ling Empire ✊😡🤜 War against the Far North, War begins✊😡🤜 War begins with Shrek Academy✊😡🤜 War begins with Star Dou Forest✊😡🤜 War begins with Tangmen Haotian Sect✊😡🤜 This is it👈😀👍 War against the God of Destruction✊😡🤜 War against the God of Life✊😡🤜 War against the God of Goodness✊😡🤜 War against the God of Evil✊😡🤜 Love The God of Xu, let's fight✊😡🤜 The God of the Seven Original Sins, let the war✊😡🤜 The God of the Elements, let the war✊😡🤜 The God of the Sea, Shura, let the war✊😡🤜 I appreciate this👈😀👍