The Lord of the Sea, Where Everyone Survives

Studio Fiction. Yingying strange!

You can read it before Chapter 34, but it's a little more addictive afterward. Poison points (1) The character description is too poor, the villain is unclear and mentally retarded. Poison point (2) The heroine was added inexplicably, very suddenly, the heroine has a unruly character. Poison point (3): The items in the system expand too fast. There are hundreds of thousands of items in Chapter 30 alone. Don't you have tens of millions or hundreds of millions in the future? It would be better for the author to practice more character descriptions.

Chapter 34 adds a female protagonist inexplicably. It's too poisonous. Even if she is just an auxiliary person for cheating, the description is too disgusting. There are many ways to cheat. This kind of annoying and abrupt thing is actually unnecessary.

The author's introduction says that people whose memories have been erased are put to the test of survival. I want to ask, wouldn't they just be a bunch of ignorant children without memories? There is no cognition, no consciousness at all and it still needs to be tested. It is better to die slower than anyone else.

Before I even read the introduction, I just wanted to ask. Everyone's memory has been erased. They should be like newborn babies. How do they survive?

Let me tell you my feelings after reading a few chapters. The character descriptions are too poor, basically stuck at the level of mercenaries, nobles, and stars. It doesn't matter if there are less descriptions of the villains. After all, a mature reader can figure it out on his own. The key point is that the author's description of the protagonist himself is also pitiful, and there is no mention of his personality, age, or height. There is no sense of immersion at all. Then there are too many data-type things. I read that at least 6 of the 12 chapters are about data. The cheers of passers-by and the admiration of big guys are not to say that there cannot be these, but it is a bit too much. The beginning of the chapter is shaky, can you write it back later? At present, I don't see how the earth's life experience will help the world you create. It automatically decomposes, automatically expands the island, and automatically builds houses. Don't tell me that a child can really survive if his attributes are doubled. So far, I haven't seen any difference between this magic ice sea and the southeast and northwest seas. I may write about it later but I haven't seen any foreshadowing. The thing that bugs me the most is that there's more trading content than adventure content. I simply can't imagine the scarcity of supplies. If the changes go well later, I hope Shen Nong can reply to me, and I'll check back. Above

I hope there won't be any more scenes of selling water and food.

I knew that this kind of novel would be controversial with the setting of old people and children at the beginning, and it would be of little use to the subsequent plot, because there are almost no authors writing about children and old people. There is no need for the author to be so detailed. Look at how your predecessors fooled you. Just saying that the elderly and children are not on the same track will basically fool them. Reader, just fool him and he will give you the money😁

I feel like I can't watch it if I just add a heroine randomly.

The plot develops too fast, and the combat power soars so rapidly that the characterization is blurred. In fact, it would be good to slow down the tight plot a bit

There are no major flaws in this novel. The writing is on a high level, but the settings and other aspects are mediocre, and some aspects are a bit perfunctory.

I gave up when I saw something about gods and indiscriminate elimination.

Come on, there are very few maritime novels, but those who persevere will make good profits. Come on, the main thing is whether the updates can be fast.

The book wasteland has moved on, and the tower defense is the public enemy.

More updates, 😅