A Love Game from Scratch

Riqing feels pretty good, and his writing is no problem, at least above average, not like a newcomer. Although the daily writing is quite good, there is nothing outstanding about the plot, maybe it's because I haven't watched enough of it yet. From the more than 30 chapters I have read so far, the biggest problem is that the character's personality is unclear and there is no intuitive attraction. This is most obvious in the male protagonist. If I have to say it, he is probably a young pig-headed boy? (Laughs) The male protagonist is more like an ordinary high school student. He does not show the life experience and experience as a time traveler or even the emotional intelligence. It feels a bit strange. As for whether it is good or bad, it depends on personal preference. As for the heroines who appear, the childhood sweethearts are a bit arrogant, but they dare not take the initiative. Ell has a strong sense of immediacy, and the male protagonist feels like a straight man, which makes it even more uncomfortable. The impressions of Aikawa and Hashimoto are still very vague, and I didn't feel the charm of the characters. If a large amount of content is used to slowly unfold the character's personality, then the first dozens of chapters will not attract me to continue reading. The summary is that it is a decent Niqing book. There are no big breaking points in the current chapters. It is very comfortable to write on a daily basis and I am looking forward to it. (Stacked armor, only represents my personal opinion, don't look for a sense of presence if you are a good person)