The Championship Begins with Double Queuing with a Female Commentator

Fine😌

It doesn't matter if you have the Triple Crown, Eunjing is no longer around. If you enter the Hall of Fame, who will go to the Enjing Room? You show off the fire shadow and grace the butterfly. You can be as strong as you want, Eunjing will give you wedding candy. Let your skin be your own, Enjing has a big belly. You can be a tiger, you can be a tiger, Eunjing is a mother.

I have a question now. In the later period, the author has been writing about Xiao Qing's various operations without mentioning the protagonist at all. Has the author forgotten that Luo Xing is the protagonist? How about just changing the protagonist to Xiao Qing, then I feel better...

As more and more readers read this book, a lot of controversies have arisen. This is inevitable. As a newcomer, I still have a lot to learn, and it is certainly impossible to cover everything. I read every comment carefully. I think many readers' criticisms are reasonable. I also admit that there are sometimes logical far-fetched places. After all, I am a newbie and not a great writer, but overall it should not affect reading. Some things in novels are unavoidable for dramatic conflicts. I hope everyone can understand it. I am trying to make some plots more reasonable. If I do not do well, I can only say that my writing power is limited and there is a lot of room for improvement. I will definitely work hard to change it. My original intention is to write a different lol e-sports article. If it is original, there will definitely be doubts. The plot has just unfolded. I will continue to insist on writing according to my own ideas. Although there are flaws, I am confident that it is still attractive. No matter what the results are, I will insist on doing my best to complete it. Finally, I sincerely thank the readers who support and read this book. Thank you very much!

There are no other problems. Shen Qing's exposure in the book is much higher than that of the protagonist. If this problem of indiscriminate priority is not corrected, this book will be a mess.

I didn't expect it when playing lol double row yy typing

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He is no longer the ticket boy! Tears!

Chapter ten, S8, can professional players still play in college leagues? I can be a coach, but I can no longer play.

Although the subject matter is very good. The writing is also very good. But the plot is really downgraded. I've read more than 20 chapters. The various intelligence-reducing operations used to advance the plot are outrageous and can't be watched anymore. If I could change it a bit, I think it would still be a very good novel.

The two elements of League of Legends eSports and love combined remind me of a certain author with a purple name. But none of his works are to my liking, and I feel like I can't relate to them. This is much better, but picking up girls on orders may be a bit poisonous I have some suggestions. I personally think it would be much better if the system's presence is weakened or the system is made invisible. On the one hand, the system should assist the protagonist in maintaining his status rather than forcibly improving his strength. On the other hand, the protagonist's love should not be evaluated by the system. In this case, it feels a bit utilitarian. Overall, I don't think there is any problem, it's all down to the system.

Shao Shao is still eager to win a championship with lwx. It would be difficult to take him away without packing it up. After leaving, he has won the championship to a large extent.

How can I put it this way? I feel that the heroine is well portrayed and the romance is not a drama. However, the description of the game always feels not so honest, as if it has been mixed with water. I think it is okay because of the slow pace. However, due to the poor quality of the competition, the characters and technical characteristics of each player are no longer distinct. I point to readers and compare them with their own impressions of gala Chen Chen and Liu Qingsong. I feel bad. And that jungler, does he really have a learning process that can seamlessly connect him to the profession? Or is he a master power leveling player? Or is it the jungle position that requires the most experience? I don't quite understand. At least someone needs to teach it, right? Then some college league chapters are a little redundant and the progress is delayed. I don't know if the author wants to catch up with the progress or what, and the competition seems a bit watered down. Finally, I want to complain. There are ten players in a team, but it is hard to imagine that 10 players will be replaced by 5 for 5 on a team. However, it is nothing in the novel, but I think at least the substitutes should participate in lspl to maintain their condition, just as pure substitutes... It is not a basketball team, and when 5 new players are introduced, it basically means that they are planning to replace the team. They will not keep 10 players of similar level in the team, and the team generally will not waste this money. The above are just personal opinions.

It looks like a slow-burning story, but if it really is a slow-burning story, the recent books are too fast. Once you get to the point of being invincible, there won't be much to write about. Personally, I feel that the hand injury could be written with a greater sense of presence, the pace should be slower, and some small details should be written better. But this is purely a personal opinion, please don't comment

This book is really tasteless to me and it would be a pity to discard it.

Although the slow heat makes me anxious and I always want to support myself, I still pause for 30 seconds on the last page every day😎

It's rare to see a lol article that distributes dog food. .

Personal suggestion is that I hope the description of the characters is more reasonable. As a leader, it is unlikely that he will directly say such things as Korean sticks in public. Also, the foreign player who was my opponent in the college game gave me the impression that he is a middle school student with low emotional intelligence 😅

If I can't give anything else, I will definitely give it to the full order. Come on! !

The team building content at the beginning is a bit toxic, why don't we change it?

Tell a joke s8 Blazer blasts letme I can only say that the author is very imaginative.

The pace is too slow

We? Starch said that he recalled some words, "Don't worry, I'm so unfamiliar" and "I don't know, I thought edg was the s12th century champion."

Haven't you updated it yet? You won't want eunuchs anymore...😅

Is there really no more updates? I quite like it. Unfortunately, the book has been deleted.

Hey

Doesn't this make me cum?

Additional refinement?