Beast Control: Starting from the Sky Overlord

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I would like to give the author some advice, or you should use your strengths and avoid your weaknesses. Your strengths are all in the description of insects and plants. Don't write human protagonists and animal protagonists. After the Cockroaches, if you have made progress, it will be fine. In the end, none of them have been completed. Don't be stubborn. I suggest the author try to write novels without human society, because As long as there are human beings in your novels, you must bring in the unfairness and unspoken rules of reality and write them in a very boring way (readers don't need you to remind them what real life is like, after all, you are not creating documentary literature). Don't always set up some obviously unflattering plots to disgust readers, such as the blood ginseng in your novel, since you don't want to Yes, don't spend a lot of money on cultivation in the early stage, otherwise readers will feel as if they have been tricked and will be very speechless. Your Cockroach book is very good in many emotional descriptions and other details, and the writing style is also good. Why bother adding some obvious reading points to your own book is like a useless thing? Don't be stubborn. In fact, judging from some of the poison in the early stage of your book I have already guessed that you are going to be a eunuch. Since you are not the kind of author who generates electricity for love, it will not be good for you to be stubborn. Also, author, do you have any misunderstanding about the relaxed and cheerful writing style? The contract meat pigeon invested hundreds of millions of resources and the effect is not as good as others who invested tens of millions of resources. This is not called a relaxed flow, this is a hard-pressed flow. I hope the author knows this!

I wanted to read an article about insect farming written by a cockroach in the astral world, but I didn't read enough of the cockroach.

First, it's suppressed by lottery, and then it's reduced by negative emotions. It's so boring😱

I am the first one, I hope to write a farming novel like Star Cockroach

Even if the story is lighthearted and upbeat, the main character should be both awesome and enjoyable. . . If you don't believe me, go read those relaxing and happy books that can make money. Which one is as good as your protagonist? . . Waste. And next time the protagonist is not a naturally honest beast, don't write it as generously as someone who is taken advantage of. This is not a question of whether we readers are generous or not, but that as readers, most of us are reluctant to let the protagonist suffer a little loss, whether we are taking on the role of the protagonist or treating the protagonist as a child. Reality and fiction are two different things. Everyone knows that generosity is a right thing, a virtue, a good way to make friends, and a necessary return on investment. But do you think there are many generosity people in reality? ? ? Not much! ! ! Even those who are realistic and generous, are they really generous? ? ? No, they are trying hard to maintain their personality, to save face for themselves, and to wait for the many rewards after being generous - who is not a saint who is willing to give away his things to others for free? ? ? Who wants to be a licking dog if he is not greedy for his body? ? ? Ahem, the digression is over, let's get back to the topic. In reality, except for true saints, generosity has a purpose and does not come from the original intention. So what should I do if I read the novel with my original intention and suddenly see that the protagonist I have substituted is as generous as a saint? Either the protagonist is not human [you are best at first blood], or the protagonist is a fool. First Blood, you have written about people, the protagonists, in three consecutive books. . . You also write like a fool, but you are not likeable enough! If you can't write a lovable silly protagonist, why don't you write a silly protagonist, except for your old fans and really silly ones. . . Who would pay for your book with a silly protagonist? ? ? You can go and see the farmer next door who is practicing martial arts and conquering the world. He is also an old farmer who can't see himself clearly. Whether he can become famous depends on whether he can control his desire to die. He spends all his time thinking about having the protagonist fulfill his daydream of dominating the entertainment industry for him, and he doesn't even look at the poems he wrote. To be honest, Yi Xue's writing style itself is relatively thin and not fleshy enough. It is inherently weak in arousing people's emotions, anger, sorrow, and joy. I want to write in a relaxed and cheerful style that relies on jokes to come up with a few witty lines and exciting snippets to attract readers. . . Get twice the result with half the effort. At least you must first learn how to outline a character's image in just a few sentences, and then learn how to make fun of his clothes. Finally, you must master the degree of ridicule--the most important degree is that it must be funny but not disgusting to the person involved. In fact, light and cheerful novels are far more about talent than other genres - you need to have talent in psychology. Otherwise, every time you write a part of the plot, you will offend a group of readers. The key is that the readers who like the plot you write later will be offended by the plot you wrote before and they will not come to read the plot they like later. This is very embarrassing. So the readers selected by all the plots must be highly overlapped. . . . . . It's troublesome anyway, so most of today's light-hearted and joyful books are aimed at a very broad point. For example, the main character is sure to make money without losing money. If he loses, all the readers will run away. The higher the cost of the main character, the fewer readers will continue to read. This is the reason why almost all popular books are sold without capital. Authors: I want all of this generation of readers! ! ! The protagonist is also loved - the more characters who hate the protagonist, the fewer readers, including villains, and vice versa. Therefore, it is difficult to find a few people who hate the protagonist in a light-hearted and cheerful book, even if it is a villain - authors: I still want all of this readers! ! ! Except for a very few geniuses who have grown up to be great gods, for others, writing a book is ultimately a subtraction: the more each of your plots deviates from the narrow sense of human nature, the more readers you will screen out for each plot, not to mention that your book must have a lot of plots, and each plot will be screened out once. . . Why did those old masters in the past few years just keep doing nothing and refuse to innovate? ? ? Because it took them several years to sum up a set of routines that would not eliminate too many people. If they don't just try to fool around with others, is it like spending more than ten years in their youth to create a new routine? ? ? They are not young anymore, and they have tasted the dividends and cannot eat free rice. What's more, they may not taste the dividends again for more than ten years? Unfortunately, times have changed, and the routines they summarized before are not classic enough and are outdated. 😴Suddenly I realized that it was half past five and it was time to eat. Although I haven't finished speaking yet, I would like to summarize a few words at the end. Yixue, are you more interested in satisfying your creative desires when writing books, or are you more interested in making money? If you just want to satisfy your desire for creativity, then you can continue writing like this, slowly change your style little by little, and work towards the perfection you want. But if you want to make more money and make your book popular, then you have to start learning to aggrieve yourself, try to think about the perspective from which our readers view things, understand what our readers' original intention is when reading your book, and position yourself as a server, not a sharer. ——Readers who can accept the protagonist's few resources and give more than one-tenth of the resources to the female character are the niche among the niche! ! ! In reality, people give away a lot of thousands to get along with each other, but in novels, even if the protagonist does not want something, the readers will feel distressed if it is given away for free! ! ! [I don't feel bad selling my father's land. The point is not that I'm selling my land that is not my own, but that I have never made any money. I don't know how hard it is to earn the money, so I just squander my hard-earned money! And don't think that just because the readers you are speaking about in the book can accept it and think it is good, it means that other readers can accept it, but the many readers who are not niche readers and are not niche readers have all run away. If you want to make progress and be popular, the suggestions you want to read should not come from [readers who think you are writing well now]. If you only satisfy [readers who think you are writing well now], then your readers will always be only a small group of them, and there will always be only so few. I don't need to explain why this is true, right? In short, you can still write a book with a lot of animal protagonists, but switching to a human protagonist is very unsuitable and even has toxic values. If you want to continue writing human protagonists, you have to change it! Beast: He is so powerful that he has no brains. Person: delicate, frail and calculating. Finally: The relaxed and cheerful style does not mean that the characters have less calculations and live happily, but it means that the plot is direct and has less foreshadowing. The style of the book is not equal to the style of the character, or even the same or opposite does not matter. The Three Kingdoms of Shui Shui is a positive example.

I think the main problem is that there is no plan for controlling the beasts of the pig's feet. It feels like I just contract with what I have at hand, and the skills are in a mess without a system. Then there are the low lottery success rate, the small increase in the grand prize, and other factors that suppress the growth of Pig's Foot and his beast. Another question, is there no book where a beastmaster can only contract three or four animals at most? After reading a lot of articles of this type, do I feel like all animal masters want to open a zoo? You cultivate a bunch of third-level and fourth-level beasts, while others only raise one mythical beast. With the same resources, others can level six or seven. Can you attack the streets with a group of pets with a group attack skill?

There is nothing wrong with writing rubbish to suppress progress. You can't go too far. This pigeon must have cost at least 1000W. Can anyone else do it with 50W of normal training? Can your input-output ratio be so outrageous? You can't play like this in farming articles. There are ghosts only if you can be popular. Relaxation, leisure and fun are not a part of it. There is a sound when a stone is dropped into the water

As a person who reads pirated copies, I just want to add the author's new book to my collection, and it is a starting point for downloading. Starting from Ant Thief and finishing Ant Thief, I searched all over the Internet for half a year before I finally identified this type of book: this is the only one, and there is no other book (even if it is unfinished). Two or three years later, when all the greenery was gone, I discovered "Astral Cockroach", another masterpiece. To be honest, the author really has the potential to be a great person. After all, in addition to these two books, Secret Words of Nature and Green Time and Space are also good. Ant Thieves and Cockroaches, if it weren't for the niche subject matter and a bit of a bad ending, it would definitely be a very popular book.         ， And no matter whether it looks good or not, just like it first and then talk about it.

It's just a daily novel, let alone the dragon blood ginseng spirit that you worked hard to cultivate and have feelings for, and sell it to some Tianyao Liu. You say it's a cool article but you procrastinate and sprinkle water everywhere. The first hundred or so chapters set the stage for not wanting to engage in Tianyao style, and then three more chapters are spent trying to persuade you to engage in Tianyao style. To be honest, the author started to regress from "The Ant Thief". When I wrote "Astral Cockroach", I felt that you had changed your style and the writing was good, so I was very optimistic about you, but as a result, I kept falling apart when I started new books. This article is very similar in style to "Astral Cockroach". But a comparison shows that you have been regressing over the years!

I want to see a farming novel that looks like a cockroach in the astral world and makes my presence felt! (ง •̀_•́)ง

Can negative energy values ​​be deducted? Pig's trotters are not RMB, so it's impossible for everyone to like them, and what if you make enemies with others? Small-minded people curse you every day, do you still want this golden finger?

Points are deducted for negative energy. Does anyone really like this setting?

The meat pigeon thought it was too expensive and gave him nothing after the contract. According to that world, if you don't have fighting power, something could easily happen. As a result, the protagonist went to cultivate this and that.

You shouldn't have contracted Xiao Hui. It's a waste of too much. If you throw a bunch of resources at it, it won't make any difference.

The advantage of the author is that the writing is relaxed, not forced to be funny but makes it enjoyable to read. Moreover, the depictions of various animals are particularly good. They are neither imbecile nor embarrassing, and each has its own characteristics. The author cannot be a kindergarten teacher. I have never come across an author who writes about animals so interestingly. Come on, don't be a eunuch. Watching Insect Hunter made me heartbroken. Speaking of which, Verdant Spacetime can be considered a sequel to Insect Hunter. I feel that the setting is similar.

Where has the innocent and positive energy gone? ? ? Why did you change your name to something so vulgar?

The author can write a higher limit on the map when writing about farming, so that he doesn't have to rush to the universe, because the world he is born in is very powerful. In the previous books, apart from going to the universe, he couldn't grasp it, and the plots on the planet were quite attractive. Publish a new book soon!

Astral Mantis is still the best looking. There are fights and it basically looks like a stand-alone game.

New book! New book! New book! ! ! ? ? ? ! ? !

Dear author, I will always support you and pay attention to you. I will read every book you open.

Can you write a fairy tale about farming? Families, gangs, and sects work together to refine their own ancestral weapons. A tree or a brick can be converted into an ancestral weapon with special properties. All industries thrive on the ancestral weapon, and business wars can be carried out without fighting.

It's a pity. I like this book very much. In fact, fighting and killing is boring. This kind of pet can communicate with people on an equal footing. I hope a new book will be published soon.

Ask for new books, or send razor blades

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Great God! A masterpiece! Can you please keep writing it down? !

I thought it looked pretty good at the beginning, but it turned out to be a mess😭😭