Elf Invasion: I Travel Alone to Promote Elf

Finally, I came across a popular science elf article that was barely understandable at the beginning. The elves suddenly came to the world and fought with humans for several months, causing heavy casualties. It was too outrageous to be directly reversed by the protagonist with just a few words and a few live broadcasts... It can only be understood if the elves have just arrived or have been here for several years and have separated themselves from humans.

I've read a lot of Pokémon fanfics, and almost none of them write about nocturnal Pokémon. All of them forcefully change the ghost-type to have the same schedule as humans.

To be honest, your background setting is the most reasonable one in elf science at present. The parents of the researcher who sacrifices to the sky, Da Muxue is a homoplasm from another world, and there are people behind it who are easy to do and don't understand. Even Xi Cui's book has a father-in-law who is a king of heaven, and there is an official background.

Why is it always giving, giving, giving at the beginning?

The latest chapters feel that the rhythm is good, but the wording is my personal opinion. Personally, I suggest that you add more words similar to what I think. I think it can be called. . . Such wording, similar to that of a paper, can enhance persuasiveness and authenticity. The wording used by the protagonists in these two recent chapters to popularize science feels a bit too absolute and too certain. Nothing else

The rhythm feels a bit strange, and the excitement is not outstanding enough. The main thing is that the plot has twists and turns and twists and turns. It's almost endless. The focus should be to highlight the promotion, right?

It was good to travel directly, and it felt good to describe the green caterpillar for the first time. However, I felt a little tired after watching the continuous battles and three folds. In fact, it would be better to put these little plots during travel

Author: Can you put a picture of the elves you meet at the end of the chapter? Some elves have several nicknames. We may not know the one you know. I hope you can put a picture or something like that. Otherwise, you will have to use Baidu to determine whether the elf you mentioned is the same elf as I know, which is very troublesome.

Post it, your book is too short. I just realized that I haven't invested yet and the quota for this month has been used up...

I originally wrote hundreds of words, but then I thought about it and deleted them all. The last sentence is, The protagonist has a physical strengthening potion, but others don't.

Speaking of which, Pokémon with special pupa shell types such as Iron Armored Pupa, Iron Shelled Pupa, Shielded Cocoon, Carapace Dragon, etc. Have no ability to eat... They can only wait silently for the arrival of evolution, but now many Pokémon stories say they can eat, which is outrageous.

I feel that the monkey monster is not suitable as the initial elf, and the walking grass is more suitable. Of course, because the plot requires stronger combat power, it is also true.

The writing is quite interesting, that is, there is a sudden tragic atmosphere in the green caterpillar. This tragic plot appears too early and makes no sense. Moreover, the main character before this, in the form of Le Ziren, was too dense, and it was a bit tiring to watch.

Why did I add it to the bookshelf, but there was no reminder for this book to be updated?

The beginning may be a bit awkward because I didn't have a substitute when I first read it, but if I read later, I will find that this is a very interesting novel, and some of the contents are relatively novel.

Good luck

This is the name Snow City. . . Damu Snow City?

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Why do articles updated 13 days ago appear in the daily guide? Damn it! ! It is indeed a poison 🙄

No, I can't stand it anymore. The provocative drama is weird. Author, you should first learn from the works of other great masters before writing! It's only about twenty chapters, and it's written like the climax of a long novel. It's like cutting off the climax part and embedding it in the front, which seems very abrupt. Isn't it too much to rush the protagonist to do elite missions as soon as he gets the novice outfit?

I want to ask, will this book have a female protagonist?