Great Master: Become the Young Master of Pagoda at the Beginning

What a pity 😔 It's so hard to finally watch a Domination fanfic and it's a waste of time. No matter who it is, as long as it sleeps with Muchen's fucking novel, it will become a hit. After all, the 1.8 Rating back then was no joke.

I noticed that you seem to have some special feelings for wives.

How could a super powerful young master have a foreign surname? It seems like he is insulting my intelligence.

For some reason, the protagonist of Tudou's books always sees beautiful women taking a bath. I wonder if Tudou has any special obsession (Cai Lin, Xiao Xiao, a certain female supporting character in Yuan Zun)

The beginning is a bit poisonous, it feels like you are a son-in-law, you come to the door, and you ask that your children be named after you, not your wife's name, Qing Yanjing, later in the original work, he even has to be sent for marriage, and he can't even control his own destiny. How can he be so strong in asking his son to have a foreigner's surname? And such a big family, he will give in when he is persuaded. This is not the case in the original work.

I feel that this surname really sucks the reading experience, because it is absolutely impossible to have the surname Mu. In such a big family, where bloodline and family recognition are very high, you will be forced to change it if you don't change it. In the original work, the Mu family is also used to threaten the Qing Dynasty. For Futu, it is easy for the protagonist to become a real family member instead of an outsider.

Looking forward to Jiuyou's appearance😋

Those who dare not dismantle the original CP are not good fans.

After reading a few chapters, I realized that the protagonist is a loser, a womanizer, and unmotivated.

Although this book has some changes to the original text, it is a fanfic after all, but it still feels pretty good. Keep up the good work, the author, and don't stop updating.

Three elements for opening a book: one is never to be a prisoner, the other is to keep updating (unless something happens) and the third is to never be unfinished, don't worry about entering the pit, try to make up for the regrets of the great master, if not, Mu Xuan will bear it🤣

If heaven and earth are unkind, I will use the book to prove that Tao becomes a god!

I'm not complaining, my writing style is really bad, and my wisdom is a bit strong. Xiao Yan's gift of his daughter and Xiaoxiao Bai totally embarrassed me. Since I'm a newcomer, I'll take my time. It's best to read the writing styles written by my seniors and learn from other people's writing styles 😅😅😅

Now that we have traveled through time, the original protagonist is a piece of shit, or he has been transformed into a mother-in-law, or a brother-controller, or a brother-controller.

There are quite a lot of errors in this book. If there are errors, please comment on that chapter. I will read it and try to write it better

I just found this book and read it for you, the heroine 😜

First of all, the protagonist should not be sexually immature. How powerful is the Qi clan? Even if you are the biological father, you have no strength and are not in the clan. Why should you be sexually immature? Moreover, the young master is equivalent to the master of a family. How can he have sex with an outsider? With such a large power, no matter how many men come in, they can only marry into each other. The protagonist and the woman's family name are the same.

Why is it written like a licking dog? 😥 Am I, Emperor Yan, so shameless? I am rushing to give away my daughter.

Brothers, let's get started with fanfiction. I'm a big fan of this, so let's put it down and fall into the trap 🙂

If it is unreasonable, please correct it and leave a comment below.

I hope you can have more recommendation votes and successfully sign the contract

Just don't write it down. After all, there are too few fanfics about the Great Master.

This male protagonist's behavior is so brainless and awkward, and the plot is full of flaws.

This book needs a cool pace. . . It's hard to get good grades, and the plot and character settings were wrong from the beginning. This is unreasonable. The most annoying thing is that you don't even need to send a girl, you just arrange and set it up and it belongs to someone else. People in the same genre still do this, but I stopped watching it after watching it for a while. Later, I saw some likes and comments on my previous post in the background. When I checked it out, I found that I was still dissatisfied with the arrangement of the relationship between the characters in the plot. I knew it wasn't very popular

What a fun thing to do! ?

No, this book is just gone?

I don't know if the author thinks too much or too little. The protagonist's surname is Mu, so what will be the surname of the protagonist's child in the future? Should the child inherit his position as the head of the ancient Buddha Clan? The one with the surname Mu will only be able to give birth to girls in the future, or boys who are not good enough to improve their talents. Otherwise, there will be a lot of things and a lot of bugs that cannot be solved. If you want to be the young master of a powerful force, just be direct, or start a new one, or make it impossible to see the future at a glance. An old bookworm like me can imagine a 5 million-word family feud from the very beginning of the surname change. The author tells these bug solutions in advance, or hints at them, otherwise it will be difficult for people to be interested in reading.

When is the new book planned?

The setting is interesting, but there are too many poisonous points!

It's tasteless, not interesting, and it doesn't even remove the inflammation?