Being a Salted Fish in Hongwu

After reading books for so many years, I have to write a word for the first time, otherwise I will feel unhappy. It was originally a fairly decent historical time travel story. After reading the opening chapter, I thought it was going a light, warm and funny route, and I was quite interested. Personally, I still like flesh-and-blood stories in historical stories. After subscribing and seeing the middle period, I regretted it more and more. Is this the same kind of kindergarten that Grandpa Sunqing wrote for you, with spankings every day and a few bites occasionally? It's disgusting to be deliberately cute. I really can't stand it anymore

I can't stand it anymore. It was interesting to watch Lao Zhu beat his grandson earlier. He is getting more and more sloppy. Now he is either beating his grandson or beating his grandson. Zhu Yuanzhang started out as a man who conquered the world with just one bowl, but he was written as an old man who only knows how to beat his grandson.

I think it's good now. It's quite relaxing to watch. Reading novels is meant to be entertaining. There's no need for so much content. As long as it can make readers relax and feel happy, that's all. The author doesn't need to worry about other people. Just write whatever you want.

Little Mushroom🤭 Sorry for giving you such a nickname😂 However, I feel quite easy-going and approachable😁 Do you like it🤭 Just keep your original intention Write according to your settings It is indeed quite good Keep it humorous The nature of the book is just fine Most of us readers read books just to have fun and feel better It would be better to be rigorous and consistent with historical facts, but after all we are not looking at actual records. Of course, the author can freely use it on the premise of basically respecting history, as long as there are no big bugs. Overall, I quite like "Salted Fish". The characters of Lao Zhu and Xiao Zhu are also quite good. They are not cold historical figures hanging on the wall, but living people with flesh and blood, like an old man next door and a naughty little devil. Pretty good Come on! There will definitely be first-time subscriptions, follow-up subscriptions, and monthly passes at the end of the month. The rest depends on your performance😁😁😁

The early part of this book is really good. Whether it is the storyline or the characterization, it successfully highlights the cuteness of the protagonist Xiao Xiu as a young child. It is very interesting to read as a fictional novel. The free chapters made me want to subscribe to the full text. But after reading it, I feel a little disappointed... What makes me personally feel disappointed is that -The later stage is really broken, the ending is very hasty, and the setting of the story characters is very unreasonable! ! ! The author wanted to enrich the plot and added the White Lotus Sect. I can understand that the plot in the article that the surviving prince and grandson of Zhu Yuanzhang can only rebel in the name of King Qin near the end is logically reasonable.       ，， Although this highlights Xiao Xiuxi's filial piety from another angle, it is really hard to describe - even though there is no evidence, or the evidence was destroyed by Zhu Yuanzhang, is it just a matter of fine and salary? Using the reason "Zhu Yuanzhang couldn't accept it" feels a bit far-fetched. When I think about it carefully, here is the contradiction. What I said before was "just suspicion is enough", but now I am "forgiving" because the old man doesn't want to. Even Zhu Yuanzhang still asked to be let go after Zhu Yunwen's rebellion... It's hard to describe. Very contradictory. Although it is not a documentary historical novel, it is really inconsistent with common sense: A took the opportunity to rob B's family because of B's death. B's family may have died as a result, but because B faked his death and took precautions for this possibility, B's family was fine. Son, in the end A was caught by B, but B did not kill A out of fear of making his elders sad, and then the elders also wanted A to go to the undeveloped area and become king instead of staying and imprisoned... It's really... Indescribable... Isn't this a matter of family affection? Zhu Yuanzhang was also an emperor. It was impossible for him not to know how to let the tiger return to the mountain. Even if it was out of trust in Zhu Yunxi's ability, he would not make such a request. It was extremely unreasonable. It makes people really speechless... The last point I want to make is the character design in the novel. Let's take Zhu Gui as an example. Zhu Gui was very likable in the early stage. He was very good as an auxiliary character in the novel and cleverly highlighted the protagonist's image. However, in the later stage, it really collapsed to the point where people wondered if the author had replaced him. At the end, the protagonist let him go several times and finally gave him military power. In this case, he still chose to be stupid and chose to swing the knife at the protagonist... Isn't that too stupid? This is still the case even though it is known that the protagonist is not dead. This character has really been written down. I completely don't understand why the author wanted to write about such a person. The sentence "finally chose his class" is not true, because the choice at this time is not a matter of choosing not to choose a class, but a matter of whether he is deliberately stupid. I really don't understand. If the author doesn't like this character, you can write that he never received this order in the first place, or that he was a little lucky and happened to escape this incident, or that his wife was strict and his wife was smart and refused to let him go. For this reason, he beat this person until he couldn't get out of bed. There are various reasons to make this character more vivid. But the author chose this most unacceptable ending.        ，…… This book really feels like it starts and ends. Although the story is really exciting, there are still some contents that are really disappointing. I hope the author can write better works in the future, or give this book a real ending.

This is really a bunch of writing, with a total of more than two million words and more than 600 chapters. At present, I have seen more than 310 people who are still pretending to be grandsons in the capital. A White Lotus sect is written from beginning to end. After the mother is dead, the son is written. What happened to Zhu Yunwen? Is it because the White Lotus sect seduced Zhu Yunjian again and then made dozens of pictures? Then kill Zhu Yunjian and Lu, and then an unknown relative appears and makes dozens of pictures? Fantasy is like changing the map. You don't even need to change the map. There are infinite nesting dolls. This wave of atmosphere is indeed

This book is very good. If the style continues in the middle and later stages, this book will be a hit! Although there are minor flaws, they are innocuous. It is still a very enjoyable novel. Recommend it Also, if Brother can update a few more chapters, it will not be enough to read.

The author's portrayal of the characters feels very three-dimensional and very careful. Emperor Lao Zhu's habit of speaking "We" reminds people of Hu Jun's interpretation in "Zhu Yuanzhang". His words when describing King Qin make people feel like they are seeing the King of Han in "The Ming Dynasty" who is also the second eldest son. He is equally profligate, dissatisfied with his father and ambitious. When I was reading, I suddenly felt that the two-dimensional characters suddenly became three-dimensional, and I couldn't help but read it all afternoon. It feels very interesting.

Has Han Qing been arrested? It's time for Zhu Yunwen to repent, and the focus should be on sending the navy to attack all parts of the world, and letting the vassal kings go overseas to proclaim themselves kings.

In the latest chapter, has the protagonist appeared?

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It's a little funny, a little warm, without too much intrigue, and it's okay if it's appropriate. Don't be too scheming, and focus more on wisdom.

Take my advice and don't be too arrogant. These chapters feel like they don't have much content and the number of words is quite a lot.

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Where did the White Lotus Sect come from with such strong strength? All the old Zhu Jinyi guards have become fucking idiots. The White Lotus Sect will enter the palace if they want to. The Crown Princess is just a small leader of the White Lotus Sect. Please, this is the founding period of the Ming Dynasty, not the end of the dynasty. Zhu Yuanzhang is also one of the top three emperors in history. You write him like a trash

There are some problems with the writing, especially the aspect of seizing the direct descendant. You should do it as you should, and you are not really a child. You should have the mentality of an adult. Anyway, I almost can't stand it anymore.

Why is it that even though the protagonist has traveled through time, he actually has the IQ of a child? Lao Zhu's meaning is so obvious, how could the protagonist not see it if he has a brain? Isn't this a bit of forced intelligence? Of course, the book is still a good book, and the writing style is very similar to that of Emperor Gaozu of the Han Dynasty, which is more humorous and daily. The key is that although Liu Chang doesn't study and is a bastard, he is definitely a top political creature. His political sense and political skills are completely inherited from Lao Bangzi. The protagonist of this article, to put it bluntly, is a complete idiot in politics. Even if you write the protagonist because you understand Lao Zhu's thoughts, but you don't want to be an emperor and deliberately pretend to be an idiot? I like books very much, the writing style is great. I was really annoyed by the plot just now, I hope the author can improve it 😭

Chapter 600, Zhu Yunwen is still dancing, the White Lotus Sect is still dancing, the disloyal vassal king is still dancing, and Zhu Yuanzhang is still forced not to kill his disloyal relatives, so how can the protagonist be aggrieved? So where do you feel better? If it doesn't feel good, I'll just watch it. It's more boring than high school mathematics.

The recent scoldings from book friends do not appear suddenly, but rather a concentrated outburst of all dissatisfaction. This book is trying to enlighten Lao Zhu and Jin Yiwei from the very beginning. Lao Zhu is a silly old man who only knows how to beat his grandson. Jin Yiwei is extremely incompetent and relies on his grandson for all difficulties. His grandson will beat him when something happens, and when nothing happens, he will beat him. Lao Zhu's shrewdness and ruthlessness are missing from Jin Yiwei's pervasiveness. A state secret service agency can only follow the cult, just like the CIA has no way to deal with terrorists and relies entirely on super children to solve the problem. The previous part of the wisdom was covered up by the protagonist's wisdom and nonsense, but this also caused a strong sense of tearing. The protagonist is a child with modern knowledge. The important thing is that he is a child. The universal value is that children should be innocent, and adults are the wall that protects them from conspiracies. Now it's a little kid in the front who's fighting the damage

I discovered this book the day before yesterday, and then I read it until there were only six chapters left. So I took a look at the book circle and saw many criticisms, so I thought of giving some explanations to this book. It's been a long time since I've seen such a relaxing historical article. It is true that as a historical text, many historical issues in this book are not up to standard, and the pace is also slow among online texts. However, I think the biggest criticism of this book is that it is not pretentious enough and the protagonist is not invincible enough. Whether it is saying that the plot is slow or that the protagonist is cowardly, they are essentially mocking the slowness of the plot. However, it is very warm. Yes, a novel about the royal family, especially Zhu Yuanzhang, is full of warmth. So this is not actually a historical hegemony novel, but a daily novel that is about daily joy and a little less serious. All the criticisms are actually just the external display of the hostility in the readers' hearts, so that even the essence of the book is missed. This means that some people may not be suitable for this book. Readers choose novels, and novels also choose readers. If it's really not suitable, you can leave. Don't force it. However, after reading all the stories about Who Is Apart from Me, all about the world and my past, and all the things that make me laugh proudly in the world, why not calm down and read this daily joyful novel that attempts to teach, teach, and sing? The story of this book is mediocre, but the writing is really interesting.

After reading Chapter 185, I have already given Zhu Yuanzhang a few blows. He is the most upright emperor who started with a bowl. Could you please show some intelligence and get rid of this rubbish Concubine Lu as soon as possible? Jin Yiwei is useless when he should be? Later, it was said that the White Lotus Sect is so crazy that entering the palace feels like going home? Please, this is the time when the country was just founded, not the last days. Done, it's a waste of subscription!

It looks okay in the early stage, but what will be written later? The Holy Mother had a seizure? You wrote it all yourself. The Ministry of War openly organized a group to commit corruption and slandered Huang Taisun. It would be better for you to keep the culprits and accomplices in jail. What you wrote is another Zhu Yunwen, which makes no sense at all. There are also the things Lu Hongfu proposed before. Negotiate with the emperor's grandson, otherwise the emperor's grandson will not make any money. The nine major families agree and discuss the possibilities together. I can't hold back my blood. If the leaders of the nine major families have such IQs, can they live in a famous family? Can you have some common sense? Okay, since the Emperor Taisun has recruited the navy, he can prevent you from going to the sea. Even if you take other sea routes to do overseas business, you should go inland for supplies. You can check the inland for sure and don't think about it later. Forget it, abandon it. I don't really want to use brocade. Yiwei has the same virtue as Zhu Yunzhen, and that's it. Zhu Di is still crying with the prime minister in black, and he is still whimpering. The prime minister taught me, damn, withdraw, withdraw, there are people who are invulnerable, and continue to read, don't tell me later, I can't bear it anymore, poison first for respect!

The author began to be blinded by the results in front of him. In order to retain readers, he started to add some vulgar elements, and he couldn't stand it anymore.

Not many chapters have been ordered. Chapter 217 I am going to delete the book and run away This book was very attractive at first The relationship between the grandfather and grandson is so interesting that it makes people laugh The biggest highlight for me to continue reading But you can't hold on to this forever Yes, the protagonist is A child who fuses the memories of people from the future But before he was ten years old, he could throw around in childish distress The protagonist is already 14 and still cries all the time It's mentally retarded to act like a child, right? In ancient times, a 14-year-old could marry a wife and start a career Then the protagonist just hugged his grandfather's lap and cried every day br>You even got spanked, right? What was a bright spot at the beginning has now become a poisonous point Secondly, Zhu Yuanzhang, as the second male lead, has become lackluster This is the most upright founding emperor of the country In your writing, he has become a stupid old man who has no ability and can beat his grandson when he has nothing to do Furthermore, the subsequent battles between the government and the palace were so childish that it made people laugh, especially the Lu family. Not to mention that the concubine Fu Zheng was able to jump like this. Her ability to poison Zhu Biao and the Crown Princess was the most exaggerated. With the pervasiveness of the Jin Yiwei, her weakling mother clan could quietly send poison pillows into the palace and distribute them everywhere. She had already been picked off by Lao Zhu. The most, most, most outrageous point - the White Lotus Sect, please forgive me for using five words to express how disgusted I am with this villain. This is the early Ming Dynasty, and you, a White Lotus Sect saint, enter and exit the palace like visiting a vegetable market. If Zhu Yunwen is taken, Zhu Yunwen will be kidnapped. The Jin Yiwei will always be one step behind like the police in Conan. If the White Lotus Sect is so awesome, why are they still making trouble in secret? Can't they just kill Lao Zhu? Why do you mess around here again If you are a civilian The protagonist who wants to climb up in time, then the White Lotus Cult can jump. This one you wrote is the emperor's grandson. Will the White Lotus Cultist stand in front of him and be looked at by him? Logically speaking, shouldn't Lu start to have contact with Zhu Di after his death? The protagonist is 14 and can already be involved in politics, right? I was a 6-year-old child there This book is useless to me now, and it is a pity to throw it away if it is tasteless. Book friends who come later see my decision to read it or not. If there is a shortage of books, it can still satisfy me. Remember to throw away your brain before reading.

It's been two hundred chapters and you still haven't been crowned the emperor's grandson, so let's go slow!

The writing is very good, but the logic doesn't make sense at the end, if only the White Lotus Sect was that powerful. Whether the Ming Dynasty can survive the second generation is a question. If you can kill the prince, you will have the opportunity to kill the emperor. At the end of the day, the princess was still a small boss. The more I ordered, the more I felt like I was losing money. Alas, I couldn't keep up.

Haha, so happy. If you dare to be a eunuch, author, I will beat your muscles, peel off your skin, hang you on the city gate and let you bleed... 😂😂😂

A brief discussion, let's talk about discussing with the author (after reading the free chapter, I ordered a chapter, and I am struggling with the subscription): Every author has his own ideas about the plot structure, character setting, etc. Of this article, so I will not comment. However, since it is a historical article and is created based on real history, there should be respect for history. First of all, Lao Zhu is actually very clear about the choice of heir to the throne. Everything Lao Zhu did after he established his empire had only one purpose, which was to make his empire permanent. The same applies to the selection of his successor. In succession to the throne, there has always been a struggle between establishing a direct line and establishing a worthy person, but for Lao Zhu, the choice was very simple, that is, the eldest son inheritance system. In addition to Zhu Biao's own reasons, the most important thing is that the eldest son inheritance system is the most legal and stable first choice in ancient throne succession, and it is also the most consistent with Lao Zhu's unwavering needs for thousands of years. So after Zhu Biao's death, there were only two successors in Lao Zhu's mind. One was the Qin King Zhu Ping, and the other was to find one of Zhu Biao's legitimate sons. The others had no chance at all. The reason for choosing Zhu Yunwen in the end is actually not complicated and can be said to be inevitable. First of all, Zhu Xi is not good enough. I won't go into details for the specific reasons, but his existence itself cannot be circumvented. Therefore, if you want your sons to inherit, you must break the eldest son inheritance system. This directly conflicts with Lao Zhu's ideas. Secondly, in ancient times, clans were valued, and clans were divided into main lines and branch lines. In Lao Zhu's mind, only Zhu Biao's line was the main line of Lao Zhu's family, and the other sons were all branch lines. How could the branch lines get involved in the position of the main line? For Lao Zhu, this also broke his throne succession system, which was unacceptable in terms of personal emotions and institutional establishment. So once Zhu Biao died, the heir could actually be determined, and it could only be one of Zhu Yunxi and Zhu Yunwen (this can be seen from the fact that Zhu Biao died in May and Zhu Yunwen was established as the grandson in September. Lao Zhu never hesitated at all). According to common sense, Zhu Yunxi is the first choice in terms of the direct inheritance system, but the reason why Zhu Yunxi was appointed is that Zhu Yunxi is too useless, and there is no need to elaborate on this. Although Zhu Yunwen was lacking in ability and character, he still had a benevolent and filial role, and his identity was already in the Lu family's position early. As long as Lao Zhu acquiesced, no one would dare to question the identity of the legitimate son. It was basically in line with Lao Zhu's plan. But similarly, conversely, when the protagonist becomes Zhu Yunxi and is no longer a waste, then his status as the first heir is unshakable, so it actually poses a great challenge to the author's routine. Because you have to figure out whether the protagonist is a smart person or a real fool? With Lao Zhu's domineering attitude and the degree of love and indulgence he shows for the protagonist, how could anyone with a normal IQ not see it? Even according to the author's settings, the protagonist's soul penetration is imperfect, but his IQ is basically normal, so even a pig should have realized it. However, the protagonist just can't understand it. He just doesn't want to take the easy way, that is, he wants to divide the king. This is really pure intelligence, and it is quite unreasonable. It is also one of the reasons for hesitating to subscribe, but it is not the most important reason. The most important thing is that the author writes historical articles but lacks knowledge of some common sense knowledge. As for the debate about the legitimate son and the concubine, it can be said that this chapter has never stopped. For the needs of the plot, it is understandable that the author is a little "ambiguous". But other places are really speechless, such as the title. Whether Lao Zhu calls himself "We" is hard to say. Quoting from TV series is not a big problem, but to be strict, we can actually find traces in some of Lao Zhu's imperial edicts. This has historical truth. In one imperial edict, he claimed to be "I" (... My army is no longer going on expeditions now, and all the teachers go to various states and counties to go around the fields to conduct household comparisons...), So it is more likely that he calls himself me. I will only discuss it here. But there are some places where I really can't stand it. For example, when the servants in the supporting roles address the protagonist, they directly call him His Highness Zhu Yunxi, with his surname and first name... In ancient times, doing this would lead to enmity, let alone a slave calling his master? In ancient times, there was a set of rules for addressing people. The full name can only be used on special occasions and special circumstances. Normally, even the name cannot be called casually. Even Lao Zhu must address his ministers by their nickname, title, official title, position, etc. This is the most basic respect in interpersonal communication. If you really call him by name, it will only happen if you are extremely dissatisfied with this person. Not to mention the princes and grandsons of outsiders, they are either titled + His Highness, or directly ranked + His Highness. How can they be called directly by their surname and first name? Take the book as an example. Basically all the second-generation princes have been crowned kings, so for the sake of distinction, instead of facing each other, when they are called, they are basically titled + His Highness. Face to face, they call them His Highness directly. It is impossible to call them His Highness Zhu. The third generation of the protagonist is even simpler. Just rank them. When you need to distinguish, it is the grandson of the Third Emperor. When you don't need to distinguish, it is the Third Highness. After all, the closeness is there, but writing it as His Highness Zhu Yunxi like the author did, it is really... Speechless and choked. Then there is the teacher of Ohontang. He calls himself "Mr. Ben" every now and then, which is intoxicating. It doesn't matter if he calls himself like this when teaching, but he also calls himself like this when talking to the prince and grandson in private. How "irreverent" does it take to do this? Do you really think that Confucian etiquette is just a decoration? Do you really think that Lao Zhu is a talkative, bad old man? Are those princes at the founding of the country really so temperamental as the royal family who were raised like pigs in the later period? The above is my summary after reading it. The book is quite entertaining, but the routine itself has loopholes in the underlying logic. If you don't pay attention to it, it will be fun, but some common sense mistakes are relatively big flaws. Since the book is placed in the history column, it should still have some seriousness (common sense). Writing so much is considered a discussion with the author. If there are shortcomings, it may be that I take it for granted. Discussions are welcome. If it is just a pure argument, forget it.

Garbage waste of money! A White Lotus sect has been stirring things up for more than ten years, assassinating the prince, the prince's concubine, and the emperor's eldest grandson. How could Zhu Yuanzhang not find out at all after such a long time? And assassinate the protagonist and escape unscathed? Are you underestimating this emperor who started with just one bowl? Let's talk about Lu, who colluded with Bai Lian to kill the prince. After killing Lu, were you not at all defensive about his son? Even if Lao Zhu is not the emperor, he will not be unprepared for the descendants of the woman who killed his son. Even if he is the descendant of his own son, his lineage is considered useless. Even if Lao Zhu values ​​​​family affection and does not kill, why not find a reason to imprison him? I'm really sick of seeing this. Is this Zhu Yuanzhang? Is this an emperor who starts with one bowl? Forced wisdom!

The melting point of tungsten is over 3390 to 3430 degrees. Without mentioning how to mine it, you just made tungsten wire? The author has already started to make it up, and it will definitely become more and more outrageous in the future. This is not how fictional history works.