After My Rebirth, My Ex-Girlfriend, a Top Student, Chased Me

: The names of these characters in the novel look very sad. It always feels like it's from Japan or Korea, but it doesn't look like it. It's very funny to watch. : The writing of the novel is good : The plot is average

It smells like little Japan, it's really ugly

In this previous life, they had a peaceful divorce and were hit by a car. The couple traveled back in time to high school, and then the woman chased the man. It looked familiar to me.

At first, I thought there was nothing bad about you being a reborn kid being chased by your wife, and you made it a Japanese style story. After exiting and seeing the label, I realized that it was for the purpose of opening a harem. If the character tags are correct, the introduction is too ironic.

Where did the Korean style come from? Is there a person named Jin? Not many people in China have the surname Jin.

Let's just say, I clicked in and read the book at the beginning and thought it was pure love. I was also moved by the relationship between Jin Beiya and Duan Muchuan (rebirth and chasing after each other) (it was fun to watch), and then I was rewarded with 5,000 coins, which is not much (No. 1 On the book list 🤫), but, after watching it, I felt more and more interested in it. Uncomfortable, how should I put it? This harem has no internal flavor, and the essence of Yasang is also a bit different (it would be okay if the harem was really written as fragrant). The key point is that it feels neither good nor inferior In addition, the male protagonist's character is also a bit weak (although sp), which makes it quite unpleasant to watch. Well, it is quite unpleasant. I am here to complain.

What do you think╭(╯ε╰)╮ I will describe a female character like this later o>_<o

I don't know why, but I always feel like kimchi when I read this book.

I'm curious, is it stock trading or harem?

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I am the chalk of Lianyouqun, launched towards Chen Ling

Ah ah, I have to go back to school next Monday and you only go out on Tuesday. I can only watch it during the National Day holiday.

A little obsessed. It's weird to think someone's name is Japanese and then say it's Chinese.

So Ouyang Xufeng is gone? Female supporting role? Is teacher-student romance prohibited? 😱

Ah, the teacher is gone. It's so sad. I think it's good to have the teacher in it. The teacher is so cute. Woo woo woo

Because many readers have commented that the characters and background are Japanese-style, I will explain it here. Because this novel was later cast inwardly. The original setting was Nikgaru Tokyo. I originally conceived the plot outline and wrote the beginning of 30,000 words. But the author is not sure about the Japanese background and the description of Tokyo. He always feels dissatisfied and feels that the writing is not good. Later, the background was changed to a more familiar continent, and the first few thousand words were deleted. But the written beginning was not overturned and rewritten, only the character appearances and the order of chapters were adjusted to fit the domestic background. This also leads to the strong Japanese flavor in the novel. After adjustment: For example, the Dean of Students was changed to the Dean of Students. The tram has also been converted into a subway. The grade minister was changed to the senior section leader, etc. In addition, the character names, school uniforms, schools, etc. Have already been set. It was too troublesome to change, so I changed the last name later. As for the written opening plot, if you change it, the outline will be scrapped and started all over again... Wuwuwu~ The main reason why Mrs. Duanmu has the same last name as her husband is that she can't think of a last name that fits the name Cimin. She can only use the excuse that the two were childhood sweethearts from the same hometown... Ahem! In addition, the internal submission was also passed, and the editor did not allow the background to be changed. I just continued writing according to the original plot. Try to avoid using Japanese surnames in the future to fit the current mainland background. For example, the person who was originally set to be on a blind date with Ouyang Xufeng was the character Higashino Akira. This surname is relatively rare in China and has a more Japanese style, so we simply changed it to Mu Yuanshan. And Wanzai Hadai... Lu Qianhe, I only changed my last name. I thought of a name again. Please forgive me for choosing a name... Otherwise, the title of the book would not be so overbearing 😂. At the same time, I also specially inserted a city background to supplement the explanation. Although it is useless, I will still be criticized for the word count. Heehee——

Single or harem? Why are you hanging on without talking about it?

I am now in my senior year of high school and will graduate soon. I think I can write the other two lines first, and then write the teacher's line after I have almost graduated. There is already emotion in this, and it would be difficult to calm down if I didn't write it down. It's originally a harem story, so if I don't accept it, it's probably going to have a bad impact.

Please calm down, this Japanese author... Never do something you regret!

It's okay. Anyway, I can't stand teacher-student relationships. I always feel that the aesthetics of this generation of young people are a bit distorted.

It does have some elements of Xiaoli, and the name also leans towards Xiaoli.

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I feel like the first two are pretty good, but the later ones are a bit sloppy.

Is the removal voluntary or forced?

It is full of poisonous points. The first point is that the name makes me feel like I am reading a novel translated from Japan and South Korea. The second point is that the plot is too blunt and the heroine's pursuit is too direct and stupid. It makes the hero who has just time travel doubt the heroine's time travel. In fact, it is better to create subtle friction and ambiguity, and re-establish the relationship through constant small contacts. I really can't stand the poison. It's too embarrassing.