Vice Admiral in Faerûn

Can you go faster? Ten chapters a day and the current problems won't be a problem.

By the way, does the author plan to create a group? {"NickName":"","UserId":200839111}

It seems to be okay so far. The author should just leave the outline alone and not change it. If it feels weird after the change, then you are really trying to persuade him to quit. Then you should find more reasons for the protagonist's injury. The current reasons don't make much sense.

Ordinary people without cheats, through hard work and practice, can be on par with Hawkeye. How funny this is. It's just as funny as an ordinary person with no connections and resources becoming the richest man in the world through his own efforts.

Whether you are a pirate or a DND warrior, it is a bit hard to accept that your strength has been greatly reduced by shrapnel. It feels a bit like Sun Wukong died of a heart attack after exploding his star.

，        ，，，，！ First, let me explain the main reasons for domestic misunderstandings about the Wall of the Unbelieving. The main reason is the ultimate invincible magic reform in "Neverwinter 2" - the Wall of the Unbelieving: Anyone who does not believe in God will go up the wall. Melkor applauded when he saw it, and Cranvor cried when he saw it. It's not that I didn't, that's not why I put people on the wall... (Note: Let me first state that Neverwinter 2 is a good game, although there are some magic changes) Let me explain that Green Wood doesn't like walls very much. It's something made from toilet paper, and in the 5th version of the setting, the content about the Wall of the Unbelievable has been deleted (chishu). This is another victory for the great Green Wood against toilet paper (bushi)

The background and plot are good, but the description of the protagonist's combat power is not clear. As mentioned before, the protagonist and Kaido can be tied. The injuries suffered by the monster Yonko in One Piece are nothing at all, but the protagonist's sword is not enough 😅

If you have poisonous points, your life will be restored, and you can still control a single muscle fiber in the body, so the shrapnel in the chest cannot be squeezed out? You might as well say that the protagonist is poisoned. You want the protagonist to be injured and rescued by the Elf Kingdom to promote the development of the plot, but this loophole is too big.

The author himself said that it was a self-advertising article, but there are so many comments that are toxic. In fact, the two problems that are most reflected are: first, the Japanese notes that have been made in the first few chapters can be deleted. The author is stubborn and just goes against it. The self-advertising article will not be changed. The second problem is that the injured lung cannot be cured with life. This is purely the author's setting, and there is nothing in itself.

Um, I don't know if I remember it wrong I remember that after returning life, you can control the whole body, including hair and nails that are no longer part of the human body in theory Even control hair embroidery So, is it difficult to control the body to remove ammunition fragments from the lungs According to the comics, it is as flexible as controlling the hands So I think the description of this aspect in the previous chapters of the book is unreasonable So it does not make sense to extend it to weakening the protagonist's strength.

This review is purely based on what the author thinks of. If there are any misunderstandings and errors, please go to Twitter to find Green Wood to correct them (you are eating books again, eating shit) Thanks to the outstanding contributions of some authors of early Qidian. Com articles, Nese is often described in the description of Qidian. Com as: "The pinnacle of the human magic empire." In fact, Nese is a magical city-state that is neither a peak, nor a human, nor an empire. I'll chat one by one

Regardless of the setting of life return in One Piece comics or animation, it is only the ability to perfectly control any part of the body, which is a weakened version of the ultimate freedom. And there is never any control in the setting that can allow any part of the body to exert its power. The only one is a lieutenant general. It is even said that this is the application of life return. The problem is that you regard this thing that he only uses as a life return? Then the swordsmen of Wano country wield their swords to extinguish fire and raise fire, do you also want to boast that all swordsmen can do it? How can a bunch of people brag about not dying for a minute? If the protagonist is Luffy with a physique of over 30, why would he still be a lieutenant general? Luffy with a physique of over 30 is probably not the direct king of the navy. The lungs do not have the power to squeeze out foreign objects. And he was in a dangerous and unknown situation at the time. In order to make his injuries more serious for something that is not fatal at all? Wouldn't it be better to try it later when it's safe? Always say it's unreasonable. What you mean by reasonable is to come to an unknown place and give yourself another lung blow when you are seriously injured?

I don't like the way of writing that stresses strength. The main reason is that in One Piece, life can be controlled and even hair can be cured. However, the protagonist has shrapnel in his lungs and cannot be discharged in more than forty chapters. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I will come back to see when the protagonist recovers.

Let's take a look at the protagonist's panel. First is the Great Swordsman. The Great Swordsman is considered a legendary profession. For Hawkeye, give him a level of LV3 to LV5. For Swordsman, give him a level of 5. For Swordsman, give him a level of 15. It's not too much to give Hawkeye a level of 25. Taijutsu is the benchmark for Garp. To be honest, I think it's not too much to give Garp a level of 30. But the protagonist should be a little weaker than Garp Taijutsu Apprentice LV5, Taijutsu Master LV15, and Taijutsu Master LV5 Total Level 25. In this case, the total level of the protagonist is about 50, which is obviously unlikely. Let's change it. The one who is both a great swordsman and a strong physical expert in the pirate world should be the Golden Lion (I seem to have seen him use it) or Dad (who is not bad in fruit, physical skills, and sword skills), which one? The horns are given to a LV5 great swordsman, a LV5 Taijutsu master (the life return should be enough to reach LV5), the basic profession is given to a warrior at LV20, and the total professional level is LV30+ (the Yonko and the general should be stronger, I estimate that the peak Whitebeard can reach LV40+), it should be fine. Experts may not exist (I always feel that expertise should be something that can be attributed to the laws of the world), after all, it is not upgraded in Faerûn. However, with supernatural abilities such as Armed Color, Wisdom Color, and Overlord Color, as well as ultimate moves such as Life Return and Overclocking, it is not inferior to the High Legend at all So it can be inferred that the protagonist's combat power is probably a LV30+ legendary warrior. The attributes are probably: Physique 30+ Strength 30+ Wisdom? Perception? Agile? Equipment Dwarf sword +2 (an adult red dragon has to be level 17 or above before it reaches legend, so it needs +2 to cut it) It's random writing, just watch it for fun, don't take it seriously. I can't post a fan, giao

With your physique in the world of pirates, you can recover after being injured after just one meal. Your profile is quite poisonous.

For the problem of shrapnel, you can directly cut open the chest with an armed-colored winding knife, use Life Return to control the muscles and blood vessels, and manually remove it yourself. With the protagonist's physique trained to return life, wounds can be quickly recovered by eating. The strong people in the One Piece world are strong in physical strength. This shrapnel problem should not always limit the protagonist's strength.

I haven't read the book yet, but I feel like the author's mentality hasn't changed yet. Use the reader's perspective to fight in the comment area 😂🐶

I just replied to a post and I still can't help it. Most of the authors of Qidian really know nothing about height, weight, relative strength and absolute strength...

I think the injury that requires the use of high-level spells to heal should not just be a bullet in the lungs, but should be more serious.

In addition to deliberately suppressing the protagonist's strength, in more than fifty chapters, even a broken shrapnel has not been taken out, and there is no problem other than being beaten and coughing up blood for a long time.

As a DND gamer and novel reader. Let me give the author some advice. Especially today I saw someone suggesting that the author write Nine Swords. My suggestion is not to touch this thing. The Nine Swords expansion pack is very good in terms of gameplay. If the author is playing a game, I suggest you add it. But you are writing a novel. I strongly advise you not to touch him because his storytelling is terrible. You can see that many authors who wrote this expansion pack failed. Today I saw someone suggested you write this, and you replied to check it out. I'm afraid that after you see the introduction and settings of skills, you think it's a good thing and write it in immediately. I can tell you clearly that Nine Swords is a typical expansion pack with good gameplay and poor story. And your protagonist already has the ability of a great swordsman in the pirate world. It makes no difference whether you use the Nine Swords or not. On the contrary, the monk you originally planned to use is indeed very good to the protagonist. After all, monks have high magic resistance. The protagonist, who came out of the world of pirates, must have very high physical and physical resistance. The monk can make up for the protagonist's shortcomings.

There is no need to suppress the strength of pig's trotters. The strength of pig's trotters alone is legendary. It can't even stir up waves in Faerûn, let alone the entire planet. Several planets in the Forgotten Kingdom have enough pig's trotters to toss, so there is no need to suppress them.

Goodbye, I was blown away by it earlier. If you meet the mage here at Black Dragon, you will become a monkey🐒. I feel like I have no IQ yet. I was so awesome in One Piece but so trashy here. At least I have to keep up with my combat instincts, I'm not interested anymore anyway. Come on (ง˙o˙)ว and keep up the good work

I really like reading this book. Author, please come back.