Douluo: My Martial Spirit Is the Elf Ball!

It's funny, it's funny, and it's relatable! Come on, author💪

Creating your own heroine in fan fiction is a thankless task. The self-created character is not well portrayed by others, but the self-created character is well portrayed. Then why don't you change your own framework and write original works? And no matter good or bad, the self-created characters will definitely steal the scenes from the original characters. At that time, there will still be people who are original characters who will feel uncomfortable, let alone those who didn't like the self-created characters in the first place. They are not pleasing to both sides and are not human inside and out. This is what I mean

Looking at fan fiction, who looks at the original heroine?

The protagonist's first soul ring is a white soul ring, and the protagonist accidentally caught the wrong soul beast. I just want to say that the protagonist is not a fool, but it made me feel uncomfortable. The writing of this book is not bad, and it is not bad if you don't use your brain. Obtaining the first soul ring is a surprise.

There is really no need for the author to write about Seer. This IP is even less popular than Locke Kingdom. There seems to be two books at the beginning of Locke Kingdom. There is no Seer, but the two books of Locke Kingdom have average results.

I am Zhao Wuji, unmarried, tall and tall, with a holy soul, a son, and a lot of property. I am now looking for marriage to all netizens, and I would like to introduce you to a partner as soon as possible! Criteria for choosing a spouse: A woman must be good-looking, well-qualified, and it doesn't matter whether she has a good background or not. The key is to be good-looking!

Pokémon's Poké Ball is used to catch the Purcell Pokémon You are so awesome

How about changing it directly to elf capsule? Besides a Mewtwo, what else is related to Pokémon?

The author has many favorite Pokemon, but some authors may not remember them clearly. If you have favorites, please tell them! Maybe you can find a good friend with the same XP! Please collect and vote for վ'ᴗ' ի

I've read too many shady Tang San books, and it feels weird to suddenly come across one that's not shady 😶

In other words, can the protagonist's IQ be improved? It's too embarrassing to watch.

Who is the shadow? Don't say he's General Thunder! Here are my comments based on just reading the introduction In the world of Douluo Continent, do you need so much power?

Isn't it good to use Poke Balls to catch soul beasts?

After roughly looking at it, everything else is fine. It's really hard for Genshin Impact characters to appear in the God Realm. What a good little elf. The Mysterious Jade Hand is not so exaggerated. In the early stage of the fight, no one in the original novel can beat Yu Tianheng. The so-called Mysterious Jade Hand is nothing in front of the dragon's claws. It only has hardness and poison immunity and does not increase strength. In the original novel, when Tang San encounters powerful enemies, he controls the crane and captures the dragon in the early stage.

Purcell collects elves. I remember that they use capsules. Rock Kingdom uses Gollum Balls. Legend of Oz and many other games seem to use Poke Balls.

This is the new book issue. If you want to gain weight, it's understandable if you read it after you gain weight! But it's important to keep reading! Click to the last page within 24 hours after the chapter is released, everyone! Let's express our feelings to everyone! Without everyone's follow-up reading, the data will not be good. If the data is not good, we will not recommend it. If we don't recommend it, Xiaolanglang will have nothing to eat! Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hard! Don't keep books, everyone! Following the plot, it's nice to have a sense of anticipation!

Is there a big problem with the timeline_?

We didn't even check who is the elder sister and younger sister of Shui Bing'er and Shui Yue'er. The original book clearly states that Shui Bing'er is older than Shui Yue'er.

Pokémon! Your Gasser number! ! !

Might as well just write about Pokémon! There are too many elements and it looks uncomfortable.

It started well, but it got messier as it went on.

Do you guys think it's better to have one female protagonist or multiple female protagonists? There is at least one Yujiaolong. If there are a few more, who will everyone like? You can talk about it, try to write it down

Come on, this book will have a relatively small audience and is not my cup of tea.

In order to solicit the opinions of readers, we have set up a complaint post here. You can complain about any poisonous or shocking points in this book here. The author will check it in time and consider modifying it as appropriate! So everyone should complain here from now on, don't say it in the book review area outside, save some face for the author! Also, when you complain here, you can also be gentle and let the newcomers come in and take a look. If they are full of flaws, if they don't read it, then I will be finished. So when everyone complains, please also talk about our strengths. The author is handsome and domineering, the plot is vivid, the plot is refreshing and exciting, etc. You are welcome!

I really want to know how the author achieves balance. If it doesn't evolve, it's okay. If it evolves, Rey Gaia and so on will all be elf kings in the later stage, while Mewtwo's official website only has a megn evolution.

So the beginning is okay, what's next?

Well, Bibi Dong is the protagonist

The first few chapters are really good. I haven't read them since Dashalong.