The Peerless Tang Sect's Praying Angel

Emmmm, how should I put it? The development in the front is too fast and too fast. The image of the countess is not three-dimensional enough. The protagonist has just entered Shrek's age. Marry her? The plot is too weird, and the reason is not clearly shown. There is only one way: Huh? Why did she fall in love with the protagonist? Or do you want to take advantage of the protagonist? Doubts, if it is just for the recommendation letter and the count has no follow-up, this design is not good. Then there is the problem of my sister. She entered Shrek. A count does not have the energy to know the name of a new student? Can't we know if the protagonist's sister survived? Moreover, my sister herself said later in the article that she was waiting for the protagonist in Shrek. Why didn't the protagonist know that her sister was in Shrek for three years?

The prologue is about two rooms and one living room. It has a second-rate taste, which is reminiscent of the protagonist's character design that was popular a few years ago (in order to attract people, the protagonist is either a blood feud or a frustrated family/love/friendship. Anyway, there must be something depressing). I can't appreciate it now. Analyze what I saw: the protagonist can hear other people's prayers to him and gain strength from them. It is quite powerful. It is the basis of becoming a god! To be more detailed, "Blood Soul", simply put, the prayers carried by the protagonist are bad and will affect the protagonist's behavior. Others also know about this impact on the spirit/behavior. Please refer to the prologue. There is a label of healing in the introduction of the book. If you want to promote, you should suppress first. The opening chapter is quite depressing!

How can you beat more than 90 peers at the beginning? One person can be instantly killed with just one skill, right?

Dousan Yali's martial spirit is a praying angel, and Dou Er Wang Xian'er's martial spirit is a healing angel. Can anyone tell me the difference between them? Thank you!

I feel that many of the comments on Qidian are very strange, they are all crooked, and they sound like they are mindless.

I don't understand some of them, but there's really something

I don't quite understand the plot, but there's something about it

There is too much foreshadowing, too many pitfalls, and there are also contradictions with the original background. It's written in a bitter, hateful and pretentious way, which doesn't suit me.

Author: I would like to ask who are the heroines?

I have already signed a contract and the website is short. If you want to invest some coins for free, hurry up.

Hehe, I am number one

I hope Xian Lin'er won't be the heroine. She's too old and it feels so uncomfortable to watch. 😖😖😖😖😖😖😖

The characters are too empty, fast forwarding to Shrek without any description, it's not exciting at all

I don't understand it. It feels like it jumps around for a while and then changes. The characters' appearance is not clear, and the story and plot are unclear. Let's see if there are any changes later.

It's fine if you don't read the first three chapters, but my head hurts if I read the first three chapters

The writing is good, and each story is pretty good, but is this really your first time writing a book? It shouldn't be. However, writing fan fiction is indeed a good way to accumulate popularity. You can consider creating original works in the future.

It's like knowing how many manuscripts Sister Bing'er has left...

This book is very well written, but there is also another book that is still good to read - Douluo Peerless: Life Simulator

This opening is written like shit. The author wanted to write in a literary style, but it ended up being wordy and unclear.