Dou Po: Lord of Pixiu

The writing is quite good, it's my favorite type, I hope the author will work harder

Pixiu's picture, that big brother's picture really scared me.

Suggestions: 1 There shouldn't be too many female protagonists. I dare say that for the female protagonists in the original work, it is basically impossible to willingly share the protagonist with other women. At present, it seems that the author has chosen Medusa and Yafei (although I don't know how this one can be worthy of the protagonist. From the perspective of interests, it seems that he has no interest in the protagonist. What's the point? Her qualifications are not good. The protagonist will have to improve her qualifications in the future... I really don't understand why I chose her. Is she really thinking about her lower body? The sister is fine, but the author seems to express his intention to accept her in the writing, but the character card is a female supporting role, which is difficult to understand. As for other women, such as Gu Xun'er, Little Medical Fairy, Yun Yun... Don't accept her. Where do they put their characters? I want the heroine to get along peacefully and handle her feelings well. It's very It is a test of the author's writing skills. At present, it seems that it is better not to accept it. If the author cannot write the taste, it will be very, very poisonous. Of course, readers who only think with their private parts may not care. They wish that the protagonist could be included in the chapter and just read the pornographic novel 2. The attitude towards Xiao Yan needs to be dealt with. I don't know what those people who openly and secretly said that Xiao Yan is a pervert think. The original work only said that it would be good to warm her bones and meridians (if you don't understand, I suggest you read the original work, Chapter 3). Many fans have written Xiao Yan in a bad way, which is very outrageous. It's not a little bit better than Tang★~_~ And currently, can the protagonist guarantee that he can become the Dou Emperor? What if it doesn't work? If you choose to suppress Xiao Yan, if he is destroyed, the protagonist will not be able to become the Dou Emperor. Then who will stop the Soul Clan?       The author must think carefully, don't read the comments and say that you should accept this or that. Don't pay attention to such people. As long as you can handle the plot well, no one will tell you no matter how much you accept. But if you feel that you are not capable of writing it, just honestly choose one or two female protagonists. There is no problem in including one or two. If you accept too many, it will be easy to write the heroine as a pendant of the protagonist. You can read Shen Youchu's book. Oh my god, it is completely Shura Field, okay? If you don't handle it well, a lot of people will definitely abandon the book. That's it. As for how to write it, it's up to the author himself. Come on!

On the one hand, you clearly know that your talent cannot be exposed easily, so why do you have to test your humanity when looking for a gun instead of showing off your strength as a fighting master? Why do you believe in the plot so much? Didn't the protagonist say that he had an experience of hardship and loneliness when he traveled back in time? After this experience, he actually still believed in the character of Xiao Ding and others (especially the mercenary group with so many people) in the plot according to the script? The writing of this paragraph is really cheap On the other hand, facing Xiao Yan, he is helpless, no matter what the law of heaven, but you are going to steal his wife and kill Xiao Yan's daughter Xiaoxiao. This is the character who runs through the fight against the sky and the great master. If you really had the will of heaven, I would have hacked you to death long ago. What you write here is too much of a double standard.

This book contains the following elements: 1. Improper word choice (warriors who practice martial arts, human practitioners) 2. Water word count (Dou X realm, Dou X realm strong men) 3. Confusing settings (Dou Po's space storage prop is not a ring, but the Qiankun bag in Wudong Qiankun) 4. The female supporting role in a crude routine misunderstands that the protagonist has done bad things ("What do you want to do to Qinglin?") 5. Wrong assessment of the financial resources of a strong man (the fourth-grade alchemist at the peak of Douhuang only has two fourth-grade alchemists in his collection) 6. The protagonist is too dissatisfied with his long life and tests human nature for no reason (unscrupulous use of treasure-hunting abilities in front of the hired mercenary team) 7. Fatalism, people's fate is destined by heaven (Xiao Yan is favored by heaven, and his fate cannot be changed; the protagonist, who is used to killing people, is a strong person appointed by heaven) 8. Earthy pretentious words that amplify hidden strength ("I don't want to kill, it's too late to leave now") ... To be added

Chapter 178-180 is really poisonous and speechless, forcing Nalan Yanran not to break off the engagement, and to ask the Xiao family for the spirit. The Xiao family originally gave it to her for free, but Xiao Xun'er told her the value, and the protagonist took the initiative to buy it for one million gold coins. When meeting Xiao Xun'er alone, she was so cowardly that she didn't even dare to say a lesson. How could Xiao Xun'er just sway someone with just one sentence?

The Queen is Invincible

Fighting to Break the Sphere, Dark Slave Auction Conference, very interesting 🙂

Don't rush me, the author is also a human being and needs rest. He is also very tired 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 . However, what does his tiredness have to do with us, but if he is not dead, please update us quickly 😡😡😡😡😡

It seems that there are no Dou Po fans who are good at the end of the book. Basically, the results in the early stage are okay, but then they start to pull the hips. I read a lot of them on many platforms. Basically, I accept this, accept that, and then everything collapses.

Author, I have found for you the first to seventh-grade elixirs in "Fights Break the Sphere". They are basically the same when combined with the original work. Currently, the top elixirs in the Northwest Continent are only seventh-grade, and only in Zhongzhou are there eighth-grade elixirs. If the author needs it later, I will also send you the eighth- and ninth-grade elixirs. I hope they will be useful for your work. Come on! Looking forward to the following articles: First-class elixir Huichun Powder (has a little healing effect) First-class elixir Ningxue Powder (has a little healing effect) First-class elixir Reinjury Pill (has a little healing effect) First-class elixir Ninghuo Dan (increases the absorption efficiency of fire energy) First-class elixir Rejuvenating Pill (restores consumed fighting energy) First-class elixir Hemostasis Pill (is the most common One of the trauma elixirs, except for heavy bleeding caused by damaged arteries, it can quickly stop bleeding in other situations) First-grade elixir Explosive Qi Dan (increases the strength of the fighter by 20% in a short time) First-grade intermediate elixir Accumulation Pill (increases a certain degree of personal strength) First-grade elixir Rejuvenation Pill (can restore fighting energy and speed up the speed of people's recovery of fighting spirit) Second-grade elixir Rejuvenation Pill (can restore fighting energy to a certain extent) It has a certain healing effect on internal injuries, and it also has a relatively good healing effect on external injuries) Second-grade elixir Bingling Throat Lotion (can relieve various burning pains, and can protect the throat from sudden hot energy) Second-grade elixir Zengqi Powder (can allow practitioners of fighting spirit to temporarily possess the strength of a fighter) Second-grade elixir Blood Recovery Pill (can It stimulates the human body's potential and generates a large amount of blood in an instant, which has a miraculous effect on trauma with massive bleeding. Compared with the Hemostasis Pill, the Blood Recovery Pill is obviously more effective, and the hematopoietic function can prevent excessive blood loss.) Second-grade elixir Zengqi Powder (used by those below the Fighter level, it can reach the strength of a Fighter in a short time) Second-grade pill Qi Lian Dan (after being taken by a Fighter, it can be improved by one star. A Fighter, a first-grade pill) Students can only take one piece) Second-grade elixir Wenmai Dan (used at the fighter level, speeds up cultivation, has certain side effects) Second-grade elixir Peiyuan Dan (used at the fighter level, speeds up cultivation, has certain side effects) Second-grade elixir Nourishing Qi Powder (used for weak Qi pulses after using secret methods to improve skill) Second-grade elixir Foundation-Building Spirit Liquid (used at the Fighting Qi stage) , accelerate the speed of cultivation) Second-grade elixir Warm Yang Powder (has the effect of warming the root bones and increasing physical strength) Second-grade elixir Shenggu Dan (has a better healing effect) Second-grade elixir Vein-protecting Dan (protects the veins from damage) Second-grade elixir Bingxin Dan (keeps the soul awake) Second-grade elixir Ice Spirit Pill (can temporarily suppress the fire poison in the human body) , so that it does not corrode the person's body and mind) The second-grade peak elixir Bingqing Dan (can be extremely effective in alleviating the doping of fire poison) The third-grade elixir Guixi Dan (can make people fall into a state of suspended animation in a short period of time, during which they can't feel any breathing sound at all, and they look like they are dead. After time, they will return to normal. They are generally used to save their lives when they are severely injured. Used) Third-grade elixir Marrow Cleansing Spirit Liquid (has a certain effect of cleansing the marrow and weak pulses) Third-grade elixir Resurrection Pill (not only has a powerful hemostasis and healing effect, but also can quickly restore fighting energy) Third-grade elixir Awakening Pill (can make the person who takes it more sensitive to the external world energy in the state of cultivation, and the speed of absorbing energy will be much faster) Third-grade elixir is popular Dan (can make the person who takes it sensitive to the wind energy between heaven and earth in a short period of time, and can achieve the effect of increasing the movement speed) Third-grade elixir, Qi-Returning Pill (quickly restores fighting spirit) Third-grade pill, Sulingfeng Dan (it can speed up the fighting spirit in the human body, which is like filling a windmill with strong winds out of thin air, making it even more fierce when it is already running) Rotating at a speed, greatly increasing the strength in a short period of time) Third-grade elixir, Restoring Pill (changes a person's appearance to make him look younger, but to restore the original appearance, you need to take specific pills) Third-grade elixir, marrow-washing cold spirit liquid (use this spiritual liquid to drop into clean water and then soak the body for practice, which can slowly expel the fire poison in the human body) Fourth-grade elixir, Brahma Blood (Yao Lao uses twenty-three different fire attributes) Refined from medicinal herbs and the blood of three second-level fire attribute monsters, it is the first fourth-level elixir the protagonist has seen; it only has an effect on people who practice fire attribute fighting spirit, and it is undoubtedly equivalent to poison for people with water attributes. Applying it to the body can accelerate the consumption of fighting energy in the body, and at the same time, it can also accelerate regeneration. In the stalemate of constant consumption and regeneration, the strength will gradually increase) 4 The fourth-grade elixir Jade Bone Powder (poured into water for a medicated bath, which not only tempers the body but also moisturizes the skin, is very precious) The fourth-grade elixir Purple Heart Breaking Barrier Pill (the same as the Sanwen Qingling Pill, this is also the kind of elixir that can directly improve a person's strength. However, its effect can only be applied to the Great Fighter level. If a person at this level takes the Purple Heart Barrier-Breaking Pill, it will be able to increase one star's strength. The most important thing is that a person, at the same level, can take two of these pills in succession without developing too much resistance.) The fourth-level peak pill, the Three-Line Green Spirit Pill (ordinary Three-Line Blue Spirit Pill can help a strong Fighter Master to break through. Breaking the boundaries of being promoted to the Great Dou Master, if a powerful Dou Master takes it, there is a small chance of improving the user's level by one star, and there is no backlash. There are three grades of the three-line Qingling Pill. Each grade will form a circle of pill patterns. If it can form three circles of pill patterns, it will be the highest-grade three-line Green Spirit Pill. People below the Great Dou Master should use this pill with caution! It has a chance to increase the strength of three stars in a short period of time. At the same time, there is also a certain chance of causing the backlash of the drug effect. The strength of the person affected by the backlash may be reduced by one to two stars, but there is no danger to his life. If the spirit warrior takes it, it can only increase by two stars even if it is successful.) The fourth-grade low-level pill Beast Power Pill (can increase some of the strength of the user in a short time, Bai Bai during the fierce battle with Xiao Yan in the inner courtyard. Cheng takes it) The fourth-grade elixir Qingxin Dan (has a significant effect in removing fire poison) The fourth-grade elixir Qi Gathering Powder (allows 100% of the ninth-level Dou Qi to be promoted to a fighter) The fourth-grade elixir Guji Dan (can repair injuries and improve physical fitness, specially used for people below the Great Dou Master) The fourth-grade elixir Shengling Dan (increases the chance of being promoted to Dou Ling at the peak of the Great Dou Master) The fourth-grade elixir Weather Pill (the original work only mentions its name, the specific effect is unknown, it is the elixir refined by Xin Lan when he was in the inner hospital) Fifth-grade elixir Yunqi Pill (consolidates the somewhat empty fighting spirit after continuous breakthroughs) Fifth-grade high-grade elixir Fuyuan Dan (specially used to heal some serious injuries, and the medicinal properties are mild and will not cause the slightest damage to the already injured body. It can be said to be an excellent elixir for healing serious injuries) The fifth-grade peak elixir Dou Wang Dan (can temporarily soar the fighting energy in the body of the person who takes it to the level of Dou Wang, giving him a short-term quasi-Dou King strength. If a strong person above Dou Wang takes it, the effect is equivalent to the high-level Qi-recovering elixir. Sequelae: destroying the meridians and even the Dantian of the user. If you are unlucky, you may not be able to heal for life. Try not to take it unless it is needed to save your life) The fifth-grade elixir Huishen Dan (quick recovery) The soul power consumed) The fifth-grade elixir Soul-Nourishing Saliva (restores the damaged soul power) The fifth-grade elixir Pouling Dan (increases the chance of being promoted to Douwang at the peak of Dou Ling) The fifth-grade elixir Blood Lotus Dan (can form blood scabs in the human body to protect the body from fire damage) The fifth-grade elixir Longli Dan (allows the user to have extremely tyrannical power in a short period of time. This kind of Strength has nothing to do with the amplitude of Dou Qi, but extremely pure physical strength) The fifth-grade peak elixir Resurrection Purple Pill (can completely repair some strength that has declined due to seals or internal injuries) The fifth-grade low-level elixir Xuanling Dan (can increase the fighting spirit by one star, only one can be taken) The fifth-grade low-level elixir Fengxing Dan (can make people explode in speed in a short period of time) Up) The fifth-grade elixir Qi Cultivation Pill (has some effects on accelerating the recovery of fighting qi for Dou Huang and even Dou Zong) The sixth-grade peak elixir Demonizing Pill (the effect is similar to that of the Transformation Pill, which can only partially transform the monster into a human form) The sixth-grade peak elixir Retrospection Pill (can reshape the meridians, target the meridians and Dantian damaged for unknown reasons, and restore the user's physical condition to recovery) Status! Requires that the injury lasts no more than three months. Effectiveness: For those who are Dou Huang and below, if the medicine is powerful enough, it can even completely restore the body of a Dou Zong powerhouse!) Sixth-grade intermediate pill Soul Restoration Pill (can cure people's symptoms caused by the influence of other souls) Sixth-grade peak pill Qingming Shoudan (can increase a person's life span by nearly ten years, and can only be taken in one person's lifetime! One piece) Sixth-grade low-level elixir, Emperor-breaking Dan (increases the chance of being promoted to Douhuang at the peak of Douwang) Sixth-grade high-level elixir, Earth Spirit Pill (necessary elixir to conquer the Fallen Heart Flame) Sixth-grade peak elixir, Breaking Sect Dan (increases the chance of being promoted to Douzong by 10% for the strongest Douhuang, and can stabilize the strength at the pre-breakthrough level even if the breakthrough fails) Sixth-grade high-level elixir, Huangji Dan (it can make a Douhuang-level expert who takes it improve by 1 to 2 stars. A Douhuang can only take one Huangji Dan in his life!) Sixth-grade intermediate elixir Hunyuan Bone Shaping Dan (has a particularly significant recovery effect on the injuries of monsters) Sixth-grade low-level elixir Breaking Edan (breaks the seal and has a chance to avoid the next seal) Sixth-grade low-level elixir Vitality Dan (accelerates the injury) The necessary elixir for recovery and healing) The sixth-grade high-level elixir Fusion Spirit Pill (an elixir that allows the soul to fuse with the body, and can quickly restore the soul's power, and can also heal the soul from the pain it has suffered) The wound is completely repaired) Level 6 low-level elixir Dou Ling Dan (A warrior at the level of a warrior can upgrade one star by taking it, but a warrior can only take one self-spiritual pill in a lifetime) Level 6 Peak elixir substitute pill (when receiving fatal damage, form a substitute to bear the damage, and at the same time teleport the body over a short distance) Sixth grade peak elixir Soul Clearing Pill (can cleanse all soul power in the body that does not belong to itself, and also has the effect of warming the soul, the refining materials include body purifying grass, ice and fire soul-melting fruit, water spirit lotus seed heart) Sixth grade intermediate elixir Snake Marrow Bone Sloughing Pill (can To nourish the fetus and make it easier to practice fighting spirit, this elixir is required for the second-level secret method of the Snake Tribe) The seventh-level peak elixir, the Spirit-Reviving Pill (can revive a seriously injured and dying person) The seventh-level peak elixir, the Blood-devouring Pill (can raise a person at the level of a great fighter to the level of a fighting king in a very short time, but the user only has a three-year lifespan) The seventh-level intermediate elixir, the Soul-Restraining Pill Dan (restores the damaged soul power) Seventh-grade high-level pill Transformation Pill (can completely separate the monster from the beast body, and then has the long life of Warcraft and human cultivation talent) Seventh-grade peak pill Wall-breaking Pill (increases the chance of breaking through Douzong at the peak of Douzong) Seventh-grade intermediate pill Tianhuang Dan (essential pill for swallowing strange fire) Seventh-grade low-grade pill Instant Qi Pill (its function is to be able to Restore some fighting spirit in a very short time, and even if it is taken by a strong Douzong, it is very effective) The seventh-grade intermediate pill Yin Yang Life Soul Pill (a necessary thing for refining the body, resurrecting the soul body, and restoring 80% of the strength) The seventh-grade peak pill Bone-melting Blood Pill (a necessary thing for refining the body, resurrecting the soul body, restoring full strength, and even has the potential to advance to the eighth grade, no. It is said to be a super elixir that can instantly revive anyone as long as they are still breathing) The seventh-grade low-level elixir, the Soul-Sculpting Bone-Shaping Pill (an enhanced version of the spirit-melting elixir, strengthens the root bones and increases the chance of breaking through the great realm) The seventh-grade low-level elixir, the Life-Returning Pill (as long as the head is not directly chopped off, or the heart is directly shattered, then this elixir can save a person's life) The seventh-grade high-level elixir Yin-Yang Xuanlong Pill (If someone takes this Yin-Yang Xuanlong Pill and is seriously injured or on the verge of death in the future, if you are lucky, this thing can give you the opportunity to break away and stand up. The so-called breaking up and standing up means breaking the shackles of the past, making people feel like transformation. No matter the body, soul or even fighting spirit, they can all go to the next level) Seventh-grade intermediate pill Su Xin Dan (when refining the pill, it will be Taking it will help stabilize the mind, thereby increasing the success rate of alchemy) Seventh-grade high-grade elixir Fire Bodan (eliminates the hidden dangers caused by failure to swallow strange fire) Seventh-grade peak elixir Xuanpu Foundation-Building Pill (has a good foundation-building effect) Seventh-grade low-grade elixir Tianhun Blood Melting Pill (the highest secret method of nourishing babies of the snake people, has amazing magical effects in improving physical fitness and improving cultivation talent)

This is your Medusa, your wife, your queen

The protagonist is really a fighting emperor. He went back to a novice village and exchanged fighting spirit with a group of fighting masters. No one could see the strength of the protagonist while playing there. He repeated the NT routine for several chapters. No wonder he fell into the street.

Although Pixiu is only greedy for money, not greedy, and Pixiu is originally about wealth, so writing about gluttony would be better than just writing about gluttony.

Why did Haibodong know the existence of the eight ancient tribes?

The meaning of "Pixiu" is that you can only enter but not get out. This meaning has been violated from the first chapter. It is better to write Taotie. This is completely Taotie covered with Pixiu skin.

The protagonist's brain is also flawed. The premise for you to snatch anti-inflammatory resources is that you are sure to compete with the Soul Emperor when he becomes the Dou Emperor?

Shennong is here. Poisonous point 1. The two texts do not match each other. The whole text says that the resources of Najie are enough to cultivate to Dou Ling. The later text says that a great Dou Master needs one million, but the resources are only around 500,000? 2 I don't know what the point of writing this inexplicably disgusting supporting character is? 3 The protagonist is like a three-year-old child. When he sees something good when he goes out, he can't wait to show it to adults. He doesn't understand the principle of keeping wealth secret. 4 The game is too idealistic. The protagonist thinks that he can be an alchemist. In this chapter, he directly opens a game where the fighting spirit attributes can be changed at will. There is no foreshadowing. It is very idealistic and makes everything he wishes come true. There is no logic. I didn't look back for the moment, for fear of being poisoned.

How can Yafei be as good as Yunyun 😐😐😐

Brainless wisdom, the protagonist of the two-star fighting master takes a group of mercenaries to the desert, saying that he has a secret method, and then in front of everyone, he uses the "secret method" again and again to hunt for treasures and quickly accumulate wealth. It is really poisonous. As long as these people return to the city to spread some news, will the Douwang City Lord and other mercenary groups let the protagonist of the junior fighting master go? It's really funny that such a brainless and reckless author looks down on other people's novels and calls them brainless. Isn't this the legendary stupidity without knowing it?

It really doesn't work, it's too licking. How does it reflect the law of the jungle? Facing a woman who is a great fighter, she still gives so many explanations and gives her a choice? We all have the means to control life and death, and it's not just a matter of life or surrender. When a woman chases him from behind, he ends up licking her in turn? I think you wrote like this because you are used to being a licking dog?

It's so licking, tmd licking like a dog As promised, the weak will eat the strong. When you meet a woman, you will become a licking dog, right? Nausea

The first poisonous point is that in Haibodong's map shop, you have to reveal your treasure hunting ability. You tell other mercenaries wherever there are medicinal materials. This is a bit brainless, even though it is to earn gold coins. Then when you were with the Motie mercenary group, you also openly showed it to others that you had special treasure-hunting abilities. Obviously the author didn't consider that this wave of operations directly turned the protagonist into a person with a worrying IQ in the eyes of our readers. I won't go into more details about the latter part of the plot. Seeing that the woman can't walk, the conflict with the previous characters completely collapsed. Then there is an Ebi who accepts Qing Lin as his disciple, purely for the purpose of making friends, but it seems that he does not consider Qing Lin's subsequent growth at all, and still accepts the protagonist as his disciple, so I won't say more. After all, the protagonist has ice attributes, is Qing Lin the same as Ebi? He just takes disciples, he can't teach anything

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

The first part was okay, but when I saw the Medusa part, I really threw up.

It's a magical drama, it's really awesome!

Recommend a new book - Peerless Tang Sect: I Simulate the Legend of the Dragon King

The mirror-pressure world is outrageous. It can be improved directly but it needs to be improved a little bit.