Elf Invasion: I Am on the Front Line of Popular Science

Not bad, come on

Recently, the number of popular science books has gradually increased, but there are still not enough. So far, this subject matter is still good. There are few writers, it is fresh enough, and it is barely creative, and it can also write new ideas. If it is well written, many people will read it. The ones I have seen so far have the largest word count of less than 200,000. It has only been updated to dozens of chapters, keep writing, it will definitely be outstanding.

Are there any readers out there? If so, let me know~

Handsome Gengar

I hope to see the protagonist traveling alone, meeting elves, and discovering feelings and bonds with the elves. I don't like to see a minister taking his own soldiers on a mission. It doesn't feel very pure, it feels like you are just doing the live broadcast for the mission, and I am not moved. I hope to see a protagonist who really likes elves and does not act for the sake of tasks. He meets elves and tells stories about elves while live streaming.

To be honest, you made a common mistake in popular science at the beginning and just called the elf. People were trying to persuade you to quit. You were the only one who called the elf and you were out of tune with others. The key is that you still started the live broadcast. You know?

It's okay or not, it's an incredible system, it belongs to the brain type, The time is also stable, it doesn't take a few days to evolve, and it becomes invincible in a few months Men and women should be balanced, it is really disgusting not to have more women than men, There is no super lady, it is really poisonous to me, I hope it will be a single female protagonist Yes, but I also know that multiple female protagonists are more welcome, and more female protagonists are okay, but I can't accept those abnormal girls, such as lolita, jealous at every turn, and often acting coquettishly. Don't leave the girl for two or three chapters, which is really annoying, and you can also over-read each chapter I hope that when the time comes, I can get married and have children, and build my own family. Many novels are like this After it's over, get married, and it's gone Finally, I hope that the champion can share his life with his elf. The elf should be promoted before the trainer (otherwise you can't keep up with the gym level, how can you command it) The king also has a lifespan of several hundred, many elfs are. They have a long lifespan. If the King of Heaven dies in a hundred years, what will happen to their elves? Should we go to S together? Some elves in a hundred years may not be even one-tenth And don't overdo it in terms of combat power. At the peak of the King, at least he is not afraid of nuclear bombs. Forget it, I don't know if it can be finished.

After reading a few chapters, there are too many loopholes. How does the protagonist know the attributes, elf names, and skills? There is no doubt.

I can still watch it, but I have to say, ~~ I used it too much, and it made me a little irritated, and it gave me a frivolous feeling that everyone has the ending sound.

This is mainly for new book lovers. Of course, I would also like to express my special thanks to everyone who has been reading this book for their support! A very important point about this book is that it is true to the subject! This is emphasized in the introduction and at the end of the first chapter. But everything needs a gradual progression. In order to make the plot advance more reasonably, the plots in the first dozen chapters of the book are more sideways and warm, and then some small foreshadowings are inserted into them to facilitate the advancement of the plot. It has basically been adjusted by now. I believe I can accept it if I can see the current Shufa. Another question is about the system! Some writers are tired of seeing the system and feel that everything is too easy. But what I want to say is that the system proportion of this book is actually very small, just to make the plot more reasonable, so because the original team of the system has lost interest in this book, you can actually give it a try. Maybe it can alleviate your book shortage! Well, that's it! Let's go to the code!

According to what you say, then everyone in this world can awaken their abilities, and the streets will be ruined in an instant.

Help! ! ! Elf calls! ! !

Gu Qianzhi from Baidu Tieba-✨

At the beginning of many popular science articles, you can see that some readers may take your book into consideration and immediately reject it.

There are still some. For example, the quality and quantity at the beginning of many new books are still very critical. If the quantity is not enough, the plot will not develop, and if the quality is not enough, no one will read it. At least don't read one chapter a day. Many books are just so dull. They only add quantity to the plot and add quality to the description.

It is recommended that the author let pig trotters learn how to make elf food, which can save some science points 😁

How about a quasi-god, which is usually better if it comes early otherwise it will evolve slowly, multiple dragons or earth dragons? Otherwise Metagross, forget about the others, it's not that it won't work but it's not very useful.

I won't take it without Gardevoir.

Can anyone comment on the writing?

The choice of words and sentences is too colloquial, please be more standardized.

Let's talk more, everyone. We need to be more outgoing, more active, more comfortable expressing our opinions, and we need to be social cows! ! ! It's too cold here~