Water Margin: Marry Hu Sanniang at the Beginning

Regarding Deng Fei, although the original text states that "eating too much human flesh makes one's eyes red", in Chi Ke's personal opinion, it does not necessarily mean that he is a true cannibal. This is mainly considered from several aspects: first, Deng Fei was originally a boatman who escorted Hua Shigang; People at the bottom of society; secondly, Pei Xuan, the iron-faced figure who also lived in Yinmachuan Luocao, was once the Sixth Case of the imperial court. He was an upright man. If Deng Fei really cannibalized people, Pei Xuan would definitely not be complicit in it; thirdly, Deng Fei could say He is one of the most loyal characters in Water Margin. He risked his life many times to save the heroes of Liangshan. It is difficult to understand that a person who cherishes the lives of his companions can eat human flesh. Fourthly, the background of the original text of Water Margin is a relatively complex environment. The government forces the people to rebel, there are many strongmen, and the geographical location of Yinmachuan is inherently dangerous. Therefore, Deng Fei would not pay attention to the bad reputation of cannibalism. After all, in the context of the times, the worse the reputation, the more fearful it is, and the easier it is to survive.

Without Golden Lotus, Water Margin would lose some of its color😏😏😏😏😏 and some of its charm.

Chapter 5: Wu Dalang is the county magistrate. You, the author, are writing blindly. You dare to write. Let's not talk about literary talent. In the ancient imperial examinations, if you couldn't even write well with a brush, you had to brush it off. Wu Dalang's three-inch height is too small to pass, but he still wants to pass the exam? He is also known as a little saint. The greater his reputation, the faster he will die. He is just seeking death and the entire clan will be wiped out.

After reading two chapters, based on the situation of Zhang Zhenniang in your book, if you don't accept it, you will directly persuade many people to withdraw. Lin Chong was easy to win, but it was a pity that he used the worst method. It doesn't really matter to save Zhang Zhenniang and return Lin Chong directly, but it takes a lot of writing, which is very boring. Water Margin novels are becoming somewhat popular now, but there are still few good ones. The book Cao Cao traveled through Wu Dalang was actually quite good, but I was afraid of poison in the back, so I didn't dare to read more. Sure enough, I heard that poison was in the back, first Li Qingzhao, and then the princess was given away. There is actually no problem if you don't accept a girl. If you don't write this character, let her just follow the original work, and it will be fine. The key is to write it, with a lot of pen and ink, and to give it away. This is purely to attract readers for yourself. That book was supposed to be easily ordered, but it seems that it is not yet available. Historical literature about opening a harem will not dissuade readers, but the use of pen and ink by beautiful women will definitely dissuade readers.

It's unreasonable for the emperor not to have a harem (I don't care about having a harem, but this is a historical text)

At the end of the Song Dynasty, Yue Fei was ranked first in military use, and the four military gods of Bai Han and Li Yue were

Shi Naian died in the third year of Hongwu, and Wu Zhi was a Jinshi in Yongle year, which was about thirty years behind. Shi Naian wrote Water Margin in an earlier timeline. Wu Zhi was most likely not born when he wrote Water Margin. The so-called Wu Dalang prototype was all far-fetched and forced on by future generations. There is no such thing at all. Unless Shi Naian had no foresight and could calculate a few decades after his death, a young man named Wu Zhi would become a Jinshi.,,

There are old historical rumors about Wu Zhi and they are still being told here.

I hope it's not a wild road, please respect history. Water Margin is a novel. When you write a novel, you must write your own things. Don't rely too much on the plot of Water Margin. 🙏

It feels like I haven't seen a new book with this kind of writing for a long time. I follow it every day and vote every day. I'm afraid that the author will feel that no one will read it. I hope that the plot will be up and not broken, otherwise it will not be worthy of this writing style 😅

This author is good at writing characters. Starting from the original character's personality, he can derive a story that suits his characteristics, which is an advantage. But the shortcomings are also very obvious, that is, the author has insufficient experience and ability. The team organization of the protagonist in the book is completely disorganized, without any vigilance and discipline. The planning and layout are also very superficial. The consideration of the problem is one-sided. The protagonist's behavior is also very weak. He does small things personally, but cannot make decisions and arrangements for big things. Generally speaking, the story is very good, and the descriptions are great, but when it comes to military and political planning and the internal affairs of the court, it is not the same.

I was speechless when I saw the name. Hu Sanniang's whole family was executed by Liangshan, but she still married her enemy and survived. We don't know where this anti-human mentality came from. Hu Sanniang is not as good as Lin Chong's wife even a toe, okay?

Do you want to resist the Jin without destroying the Song Dynasty first? I don't know that the Civil War of the Song Dynasty was fought by insiders and outsiders.

I really like Water Margin, but the protagonist in the first chapter is actually called the "little saint", and the emperor of the Song Dynasty is called a saint! Aren't you afraid of being caught as a rebel and promoted? After an investigation, I can't convince myself of the overall recruitment and buying of troops to win over people's hearts.

After reading the latest chapter, I only have you in my heart, and I can no longer tolerate others. I can only say that I am poisoned to death. Do all the heroes who have conquered the world throughout the ages have this kind of love? Anyway, I don't have much sense of belonging. I started to conquer the world. Marriage is the fastest way to gather power. I say goodbye to clean up the poison for those who come after me.

Little saint, firstly, it is embarrassing, secondly, Song Huizong Zhao Zhe liked to be called a saint. In ancient times, this kind of thing was too taboo.

The writing is good, but the title of little saint is really a bit awkward. Several people have been called saints throughout the ages, and the things the protagonist has done now are up to that point. Whether he is worthy or not is a question. If the protagonist has already done some great things, it would be more or less, but now his career has just started. It is too loud. This nickname will probably be mentioned many times in the future, and it would be less dramatic if I changed it to another one.

To engage in espionage work, you have to hold your head and find a balance on the edge of a knife. Dulonggang Zhujiazhuang is just a private village. The name Sifang Embroidered Clothes Envoy is very ostentatious in itself. The espionage personnel also like to expose their leader at every turn. How is this different from the words "Reverse Qing and Fu Ming" written on the door of the Heaven and Earth Society in Stephen Chow's movie? . . Really speechless

The pace is too fast. It may end after about one million words or no one will read it. It is far different from "Water Margin Survival Story". The writing style is indeed very good, and the dialogues also have the flavor of ancient prose. In fact, you can completely follow the idea of ​​​​survival. Although it is said that all roads lead to Rome, wise men will choose the same road because the success rate is the highest. Wouldn't it be new if the people and scenery encountered on the road are changed? There is no plagiarism.

The author's eyes are high but his hands are low, and his heart is as high as the sky. The two nicknames "Taishan Jun" and "Female Zhuge" are simply too simple, but the characters in the novel cannot bear such names. .

Why do all your battle scenes have the same description? Just copy it and it's done. How about introducing it?

Li Ying is the same generation as Zhu Biao's father, so he became your sworn brother. He was poisoned in the second chapter.

This battle scene is so overly written. . . Zhu Biao has not written anything about the soldiers and horses he has trained for so many years,,, Only writing about conspiracy and generals,,,, that a bunch of ragtag people in Zengtou City, who have been training here for several years, actually want to fight against others? ? ?

I feel sorry for the author. I feel that the other book called Monkey King is more popular than you, but the fan base is so different.

The writing and plot are both good! I rarely read historical texts.

The writing is very good, but one chapter a day is not enough to read.

You have too many typos, OMG.