I Hang up While Others Are Practicing, I Am Invincible in the World

Today is the first time, the introduction is updated 30,000 times a day, and the word count is 13,000.

The plot is okay, the author should make the sentences more mature, otherwise it will feel a bit embarrassing.

As long as the protagonist is not the Virgin, it's basically fine

Don't wait for the enemy to attack your home before upgrading. You need to train your family members in advance.

Although it's very cliché, I don't see many new books now, so I'd better write less emotional drama, author

The author has become very awesome, updating three times a day, awesome (broken sound), three tickets

A very good mindless novel. But the plot is a bit cliche. The protagonist pretends to be cool and is ridiculed by countless people before being slapped in the face. He also breaks off the engagement and then breaks off the engagement. It must be made like a life and death feud. I can't understand the idea at all... After reading two chapters, I felt like I was going to die from poison. I slipped away.

Write less emotional dramas, preferably without a female protagonist, just write Gu Duoer to death, pretend to be cool and slap her in the face, you can also form a force 😏 If the author sees it, please reply

Come on, the author, have you started releasing more updates? Still strongly recommend no heroine!

Come on, come on, come on! Three votes have been cast

Is it okay for the author to have no female protagonist?

First, three recommendation votes have been cast

Nice refreshing article.

The emotional scene is better, it feels very simple

This Gu Duo'er has become one of the few poisonous points in this book. At worst, he will kill all the Gu family members and take his cheap father to live in seclusion somewhere.