Travel Notes on Hong Kong

It's well written, but the main character is a scumbag

The plot of the story about a scumbag stallion is too fast. It should be finished in less than 300 chapters unless European, American, Japanese and Korean films are added.

Seeing the defeat in Chapter 16, a novice who is not even half-assed and knows that there is a ghost, goes to the ghost den to save people, the holy mother who makes fun of her life?

The protagonist has endless encounters with ghosts! The timeline is less than March. Anyway, I can see that he hasn't built a foundation for 100 days yet. With such a frequency of ghost encounters, I'm afraid all the people in Xiangjiang will die.

After reading dozens of chapters, there is nothing interesting. I still think that when writing books about movies and TV shows, one should expand and delve deeper into the original plot. It is difficult to write a story that is written by oneself so that people will continue to read it. After all, everyone has seen the original plot and has a certain yearning for it. It is more attractive to dig deeper into the things inside, even if it is cut off. For example, the author just mentioned the gold in The Golden Taoist casually and then disappeared. It has no sense of substitution. It just borrows the names of film and television actors and mentions it in one stroke, which is not interesting.

This book is probably a hit as soon as it is released. There are a lot of overlapping world plots, and I don't know the choices and arrangements. Although I used a lot of Hong Kong films, I couldn't write a single exciting plot. They were all rubbish plots of daily life. As a result, the whole book was in disarray. I couldn't find what the main story line was. I might as well select a few stories to make a smooth story.

The harem stallion is written by the author. It only needs to be good-looking, but the character must not be bad.

It's okay to have a harem, and it's okay to be a little scumbag, but you can't be such a disgusting scumbag, you're so scumbag that it's so disgusting. The three views are too wrong.

To be honest, I think the author's writing is pretty good. Some people may say he is a stallion, some may say he is a scumbag, but I feel that the author's plot of cultivating Taoism and catching ghosts is still acceptable. And to be honest, if you really have the opportunity to be like the protagonist, your bottom line may be more flexible than his.

How can the law be revised if he is so promiscuous? Is it an evil practice?

Calling others a scumbag number 2 is actually much better than you, except for driving piles everywhere and not having anything of your own.

Chapter 23, the author had better revise it. I asked Xiaohua to take medicine, you can't completely conquer me, and then start a harem, you are not a scumbag at all. Results Chapter 23: Where is Hao Kelian? She seriously wants to marry you. You said you wanted to have fun for a few more years and said she could go too. This is really poisonous

You can write it! The first order is supported on the shelves, don't be too eunuch, this kind of Hong Kong variety show is easy to eunuch, there are too many

Author, have you never seen a woman?

The book is quite good, but it contains too many dramas and writes relatively little about each drama. Moreover, the author is not mature at all and does not even include pictures! The strength of the protagonist is also unclear. I personally suggest that the author divide the strength of the monk into one point, so that it looks simpler and clearer. Many of those ghost movies in Hong Kong are relatively old. Without pictures, there is really no sense of immersion, and I can't remember the general plot!

Not many ghosts were killed, but a lot of women were killed.

Well, this book is quite well written. It needs writing but not style, and it needs story but not story.

It's well written. It would be great if this chapter or the comment section could put some pictures of the original characters in it. After all, some of them have forgotten what they look like after not reading it for a long time. Then don't write about Yue Zong, every one of them falls apart. Among the predecessors, the one that beats Taoist Shi Jian the best even fell to Yue Zong.

It's just two words that I like to use so much. It should be a studio article!

Although I really don't want to offend the author, I still have some things to say. It's not well written. Someone in the villa was caught by a ghost and couldn't find a way to solve it, so he ran away to fall in love. Brother, you are a Taoist.

Dear author, it would be better to change the title of this book to something like "The Beginning of the Hong Kong Comprehensive Series Starts with Wu Ma"

Come on, author, I will keep reading.

Yes

Will the apprenticeship process be too fast and smooth?

Yes, I have voted. When will it be updated?

It's beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, come on, author

Yes, pay attention to the rhythm, don't go too fast

It feels like the pace is a bit fast, and other story lines can also be written, not necessarily ghosts.