Pirates: the First Partner Is Tom Cat

After reading it... It feels a bit hard to finish it. The first part was very comfortable, until the protagonist and the red-haired man started fighting. From there, the rhythm of the plot was very uncomfortable, and then to the plot of Tiger Talisman, until the end. It can be said that after 90% of the novel, the overall perception of the novel went down several steps. After reading a few chapters, I skipped the last ten or so chapters of the final battle. I really can't just book it next time. I really held my nose and swallowed the last 10%.

Who can refuse an "all-round assistant + butler"? He is an elf who loves service. His superpower allows him to move among many guests with ease. His two special skills It's not interesting Let me tell you something before this. Each person can only use one Devil Fruit, and the elf can only wear one prop By analogy Skill 1: Trick, you can use it to exchange for the Devil Fruit carried by the other party. Skill 2: Magic Space: The ability to disable the effect of carrying objects means that the great swordsman's sword cannot be used nor the sniper's gun. In order to prevent him from being too invincible, you can add a limited space range to him when writing. The last thing: I saw a comment saying that I could mention some interesting characters, so this "comment" appeared. So, my personal suggestions are for reference only (don't spray if you don't like it)

With more and more characters joining the different world timeline and achieving the goal, would it be better if the crew members left midway and then changed crew members or changed world travel? Anyway, the plot of One Piece is almost over.

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. Take it slow and work slowly. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction. Sometimes there are areas where they are not good at plot description, such as the fighting process and psychological activities. You can focus on it and think twice. You can also refer to the plot descriptions of some well-written similar novels to continuously enrich yourself. Third, some parts of the plot of the original story can be abbreviated, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work can roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to enrich the description of daily life, psychology, body movements, psychological expressions, the enemy and the enemy and other multi-angle story plots. The original story plot can also be appropriately modified or extended. But you must also be careful, because most readers of fan fiction sometimes don't go too far into the plot that the author has worked hard to create. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but it can't be done in one go. Fifth, except for the protagonist and supporting characters, the author's fictional characters should not exceed his or her control over the plot. If there are too many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. It is recommended to think twice before acting. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to control them within your own overall story concept. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand the abuse and stick to the principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, try not to wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works, except for comic novels. You can also learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing. Do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to change the plot. It is recommended that a slow start is the best pace. Don't be afraid of boring and low income. This will be of great benefit to your writing skills and future income. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and deliver packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect. 15. Try to explain the unfamiliar terms, geography, etc. That appear in the novel.

Dear author, can you give me a role? Light and Flame in Xenoblade Chronicles 2, characters? 🤝🤝🤝

Based on the staffing of the Straw Hats, let's estimate who the next partner will be. First is Captain Luffy. The corresponding one is the protagonist Zhang Tatsuya. Chopper, he is positioned as a pet and ship doctor, so his corresponding roles should be Tom, Wendy and Xia Lulu. Zoro is positioned as the swordsman on the ship, so the corresponding ones should be Arturia and Rui Mengmeng. Sanji is the chef, so his counterpart is Tom. In other words, there will be a full-time chef. I personally recommend Liu Pleiades. Nami is a navigator. The corresponding ones are Shark Pepper and Wendy Usopp is a sniper. There are currently none on board. If Kuang San were to come, her abilities would probably be a bit unbelievable. Robin probably corresponds to Jackie Chan. Franky is a boatman. Then Shark Chili and Tom Tom can probably handle it too. Brooke is a musician. Probably will return. In terms of art, Ye Yan estimated that it could be put in here. This is probably also a greeting point.

This book will never fail and will accompany you until you grow old.

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Let the author figure it out

Tom🙂

Originally, Tom Cat was very amazing, but then the harem started again, which somehow hurt Zhongyong.

I noticed that both Tom and My King are on the cover, so who are the three remaining female characters on the cover? Can anyone recognize it? 🤭

If you have favorite characters, you can mention them here. Names and origins, introductions such as abilities, characters, pictures, etc. Are better... After all, I have not watched all the anime, and I may need to make up for it. The key point is that several characters have been decided in the outline in the early stage and should not be easily changed. If what you mentioned is not exactly what I think, then even if I appear, I will be very late. I hope you will understand.

You don't want to change the plot to save Otohime, do you? To be honest, I personally don't think highly of this character. Some things can only be obtained through struggle. There will be bloodshed and sacrifices in the process, but it is better than placing hope on the world government. Looking at the comics, Otohime is still promoting "love" internally in an environment where humans are catching fishmen and mermaids are slaves, trying to resolve the hatred of fishmen towards humans (it can only be said that this is very Japanese). Mermaids and fish people, obviously you can build an anti-fishing team to rescue your compatriots, you can form a deep-sea chamber of commerce on land to expand your influence, you can train and control the sea kings so that you have the trump card to cause small-scale maritime disasters at any time, and you can find more uninhabited islands or special environments on the sea to build fish-man settlements to avoid being attacked by a group of people. Bo Chi, you can form a Devil Fruit deep-sea exploration team (you can bury them without eating or selling them), you can try to unite other non-human intelligent species... In this world where the ocean occupies the vast majority of the area, you can live in the ocean and land at the same time. You have a lot to do, but to live like this can be summed up in one word: outrageous!

The author should at least create a more popular character. This kind of daily summoning novel relies more on the popularity of the characters than other types of summoning novels. What you are watching is the interaction of several familiar characters. Like the first Tom Cat, it can be said to be a childhood memory for everyone, and the author's writing is also very vivid. The second Artoria is also a popular character in the second dimension. Although Rui Meng Meng and Shark Robot are less popular than the above two, many people know about them. A character from "Ace Censor" suddenly appeared. The character's popularity plummeted to a whole new level. Not to mention watching it, I have never heard of this anime. Suddenly, the daily plot behind it felt boring.

This is the picture of Tom, I think he is more handsome.

Author, you can also see that many of the people who came into the trap are for Tom. The latest ones you summoned are two female characters, and the cover shows one Tom and four female characters. It feels very similar to the beginning of the One Piece harem two years ago. In fact, everyone coming for Tom mainly hopes to see the protagonist summon a bunch of weird people to have all kinds of fun in the pirate world. From the author's post, he said that he has been collecting prop suggestions. I guess the summoned characters have already been decided? I still hope it can be carefully considered. The Pirates harem story was written two years ago, not to mention that none of the female characters in this book are from the pirate world. If you want to write a harem, you will be dead. In fact, I think it would be good to have both men and women who have fun, and also have a team with a fighting spirit like the stupid king. Of course, the author also has his own ideas. Let me make a suggestion here. I am looking forward to this book, but if it is written as a harem story that goes against the general trend, then I and many people may not be able to stand it.

Tree warning

I started reading this book because of Tom. At that time, King Da Mao had not been summoned. I thought there was no problem with the second one, King Da Mao. After all, it was necessary to protect his combat power. But the third one was really incomprehensible to me. It was very baffling. Let's not talk about whether I have heard of this character. Even if it is a female character in Chinese comics, isn't Sister Baoer good? It's unique and well-known, and it's definitely higher than that cute one!

It's not like there are all women in the back, right? I already know Tom Cat, and there are a few unpopular female characters, so I don't think I need to watch them.

Tom, Bugs Bunny, Garfield, Spongebob, just stack the buffs of funny characters, after all...

Originally, Tom looked fine, but he started summoning the harem again... Why bother?

Waiting and watching the fourth character, the third character is indeed niche enough, but also very cliché. The author said that the previous characters have been written and there is no need to change, so I can only wait patiently. But I really hope we won't do this again in the future. I almost vomited when I read the article about summoning a beautiful girl through another world on another website. The author didn't dare to write it at the beginning. If he calls like this again in the future, I might as well go back and read the article about Lian Visitor, who wrote more tricks than this.

Tom, the phantom beast cat form. Abilities: Immortality, return of life (can return to his body after being crushed into paper by a road roller), mechanical master (any household appliances can be transformed into combat weapons in his hands at any time), natural moon walking (can walk on the ground in the air without looking down)

Are there any interesting props you can mention here... The scope is limited to the world of characters that have already appeared.

The next new book can completely tell the story of Tatsuya returning to the pirate world after receiving Artoria, taking Perona and the others with him to travel to other people's worlds. The new book can be written as Zhu Tianwen. While traveling, he helps Uncle Long Wendy and others to deal with the enemies in their respective worlds. After clearing a world, he takes his returning companions to help those who have not yet returned. Interspersed with daily plots in the style of this book.

Long has actually told the truth

It's good to read, but strictly speaking, this book is a dud.

The final battle was a bit sloppy, I think it was too weak, the King was useless (the power should be adjustable), 😰 and the Knight of God who had lived for hundreds of years couldn't defeat a mere young pirate, 😰 and various PC series seemed to have disappeared No one appeared, 😰, and it felt like Im was forcibly depraved, as if a person who had lived for 900 years had no trump card, which was a bit empty 😰 (living for so long was in vain). 🙂🙂🙂. It's passable as a half-baked version of One Piece.