This Star's Style Is Wrong

When I read Chapter 20, I felt like I was wrong. The author knows music well and his music selection is quite good. If the follow-up does not subdue or counter-intelligence, it is a good book and worth reading.

I don't know how to write emotional scenes and teach you a method. Allowing the heroine to appear once every ten or so pictures is enough. It may be a simple hint that they have an intersection. After seven or eight appearances like this, about one or two hundred pictures, they can directly break the window paper and become a couple. It takes a lot of effort to write about daily emotions in a whole page. If you can't write well, at least you can't grasp it now, and it will look very embarrassing. Even the authors of light novels who specialize in writing so-called daily dog ​​food articles basically have the same plot and description in every novel, just changing the names of the characters. Let's just write about the slap in the face honestly, the relationship is really awkward

I feel that the author's way of handling the relationship between the male and female protagonists is pretty good and in line with the current love situation of contemporary young people. In fact, I think the male protagonist is definitely not an oily guy, and can even be considered a relatively refreshing one. I have talked to a really oily man, and it is definitely not a good memory, so I don't know what the comment section is talking about, and I am confused. As for the harem, it really depends on the male protagonist. Mainly, I don't understand what kind of man can control several mature women at the same time without falling over.

I can't understand it since I joined the singer program, especially Qilixiang and Nian Shao Youwei. The two new songs are good songs, but they are not the first time they are popular. They need to be listened to several times before they feel good. Why did they win first place on the first performance? It would be impossible to win a singing competition show like this without showing off your skills and rely purely on emotion.

I have read more than 100 chapters so far, and I feel that the plot is basically copied from "This Star Wants to Retire". Fang Xing's experience is not much different from Luo Mo's. The audition - not agreeing to form a group - winning the championship - participating in another show - winning again, but the songs copied are different. The same characters include Fang Xing's younger brother Lu Ming, who is just like Tong Shu in "This Star Wants to Retire", and director Tong Fei, who is just like Run's sister Ning Dan. If you have read both books, you can read them for yourself.

Why do you keep writing about the male lead who is a popular celebrity filming a movie and is always disliked and then gets slapped in the face when it is aired? How many times have you written this plot?

Let's talk about the plot first: ① I hope the company the protagonist finally signs with is not Chaoyin Culture. I have wanted to suppress the protagonist several times. It would feel a bit disgusting if he signed the contract. And I hope that the economic contract signed by the protagonist will be free in the early stage, and in the later stage when there is a certain amount of capital to set up an independent studio, after all, it is backed by earth resources ② The heroine has not appeared yet, I thought Shen Xiyin would be the heroine, let alone the diva heroine, which is quite embarrassing. Many urban entertainments like the diva heroine, but according to the real-life diva Faye Wong and Zhang Huimei, those who are exhausted can only be regarded as little divas. And you can't become a diva quickly. A real diva heroine always gives me the impression that a rich woman is raising a young girl ③ Actually, I really don't want the protagonist to debut in a group. After all, if they can finally form a group, there will definitely be capital to promote the traffic. It's quite annoying to be tied to this kind of mess. Don't be afraid if you form a group. If you take the postgraduate entrance examination and serve in the army, you can negotiate to terminate the contract without paying liquidated damages. If you really want to form a group, you can apply to be a graduate student who is a judge of the program. By the way, you can also make friends and build connections through this line. Finally, I hope the author will write well. By the way, I recommend a few personal collections of entertainment articles for the author's reference. ④The most important point is that I hope that the protagonist will not be the kind of omniscient and omnipotent, and will not write novels and transport cartoons at the same time. At most, it would be good to add a screenwriter identity to the protagonist and make a "Secret that cannot be told" Positive teaching materials: The male and female protagonists of "My Wife is a Big Star" are too sweet "Global Superstar Begins as a Trainee" is unfinished but still has flaws, and the content of the fan circle tearing up and comparing is worthy of reference "This Star Comes from the Earth" portrays the original owner of the body very well, this book may not be used The author of "Life Is Hot for You" himself seems to be interested in Ba He has a lot of research in music and opera, and is very good at character creation Negative teaching material: "Full-time Jacket Master" is a brainless transfer, just feel good, it is a very novice pretense to slap in the face, entertainment and fun, it is also very watery, the content is usually lyrics/ Original plot/original text of the work + NetEase Cloud review/drama review/book review "This Star Pretends to Be X All Day" was originally read based on the name. To be honest, this book exchanged names with "This Star Comes from Earth", and the title and content are basically the same. I would like to give up. The soul of the heroine, the Queen, is fused with the soul of the cat that the hero had raised in his previous life. The relationship between human and cat is not over, and Furui Kong is embarrassing to me. The protagonist is omniscient and omnipotent, and he makes music, makes movies and cartoons😅 The last two books are popular because of one important thing. He has written many works and has accumulated a certain number of loyal readers. For example, in the second book, Golden Alliance is the author's wife

I am accompanying the childbirth in the hospital and can only support myself by saving my manuscript. Please don't scold me in the comment section. I work very hard to write it well.

I have a question, can the current Spring Festival Gala really improve national popularity? I feel like after 10 years, less and less people watch it. Who watches the Spring Festival Gala now?

I don't want to read it from Skylark. The emotional scenes are just like twists and turns. The focus of this book is singing, not the awkward emotional scenes. And even if your emotional scenes are awkward, you still have to create a brainless villain. I can only say that the effect is full, so I'm going to quit.

The author, Jay Chou, has too many songs, and his music cannot reach the point of killing other worlds.

This book is great I think the better points are the character and character of the protagonist, the character of the boss, the character of the rival company, the reaction of netizens, the reaction of music critics, and the reaction and image of Li Caiwei and her daughter in the company But can the author try to write less about the female protagonist? Don't be indifferent, it feels the same as Paper Man The heroine's character is also quite boring. When the protagonist wants to compensate her for the guitar, she doesn't react at all. The best way to write a normal emotional drama is probably to focus on the heroine's demeanor, language and image description in this paragraph. This can establish the heroine's character, but the author did not backhand write about the heroine's family. Please, I am not interested in this heroine. Do you think I will be interested in her family? If you have to write, you can make the heroine clear and mature. The description of family members is usually just to fill in the heroine's character and make the heroine favorable. If this part is not written well, it is better not to write it. The image of silly and sweet is not popular in novels, and if it is not written well, it can easily become the image of a childish high school girl. Reactions from netizens or fans, as well as descriptions of supporting characters that overlap are highlights In the later stage, it is recommended not to be overly literary, some poems, articles, try not to copy these because they are not cool and appear pretentious. If you want to make the protagonist plump, you can write about calligraphy, painting, carving, handicrafts and the like. If you publish a work-career and daily life-netizens are tired of this model, you can write about letting the protagonist be a variety show director. There is a lot of material Finally, it is recommended that the author writes less female protagonists.

I don't understand that you have to face the same capital all the time. How about changing your opponent? If you are right too many times, it will be meaningless. Moreover, you have to find someone to compare with in every TV series. Have you never watched the battle of the gods before? Every time I compete with a family named Chen, and the capital is not for money laundering, I can definitely make a qualified idol drama at a high price. Why would I give up my advantage to fight with you? I am speechless.

A top student majoring in music, with a golden vocal range, and the world's dazzling entertainment resources, has fought with a bunch of talent show scum for more than 100 chapters. Isn't this just Jack Ma and a millionaire in a business war, and you were beaten back and forth!

The author doesn't understand the songs at all. There are lovers in the world and The Hard Ones are not supported by TV series, and the martial arts flavor is not strong. Songs like Nocturne are not explosive when sung live, they need to be listened to quietly to enjoy. Why does Mao like to sing high notes in competitions now? Because of the strong on-site performance. Author, in entertainment writing, sometimes the choice of works is more important than the plot. Without the sense of immersion, the essence of entertainment writing will be lost.

I don't understand that just taking any work here and making it a god in a parallel world is too underestimated the level of the parallel world.

From the end of the entertainment article, it's all the shock and slap in the face that Shuiyu used to do. . The key is that the writing is not as good as water fish.

Qidian Anti-Theft is so awesome now, it almost made me quit my novel addiction.

Generally, the songs written for talent shows belong to the program team, right? If that's the case, the opening nocturne is such a waste.

No,,, martial arts theme, isn't it funny to choose Lovers in the World? Without the Legend of Condor Heroes, who can say this is a martial arts song?,, Author, are you serious?

Is it my misunderstanding? I feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very weak. The emotions the male protagonist gives to the female protagonist are like charity. Am I the only one who feels this way?

Why is it this kind of scenario again, being provoked and then slapped in the face?

I just want to ask how long has it been since the male and female protagonists teamed up with Butterfly Lovers? I want to see this one with a male and female protagonist playing piano and violin😀

As a mature author, shouldn't there be an Easter egg chapter? Do you have to ask someone to rush you?

This 2 billion project is too embarrassing to watch. Where is the logic?

Traffic stars are just bad at business and not mentally ill, so why should they get into trouble?

This is the first time I watched Huayu Wenxuan. All the songs I like 😁. The songs I watched before were all songs from my parents' era.

Holy shit, after I finished my subscription, I found out that it's free tomorrow

I want to ask you guys, are there many scenes of the heroine in the back? I have read the title, and the content has skipped a lot at the beginning, but I can still see it, and it only takes two or three pages. I am really not interested. Whoever likes it will eat it. I am here to watch entertainment, not romance.

After reading eight or nine hundred thousand words, I feel that it is tasteless and a pity to discard. 1. It's not cool enough 2. The complaints from fans and netizens and the villain's trouble-making image are a bit monotonous. It always feels like it was written to make up the word count 3. The emotional writing is a bit awkward and pretentious. Of course, it may also be because I prefer a more mature heroine and don't like this little girl type.