Knight of the Apocalypse in Reincarnation Paradise

I feel like the author is putting the cart before the horse. The real attraction of Samsara Paradise is the character of Zhanmei Su. Su Xiaoyyds, the character of the protagonist in your book is a hundred and eighty thousand times worse than that of Su Xiao. Naturally, there will be no success.

You give me cute pinches, compliments, and compliments! Go find some copywriters to praise me, huh huh huh!

After watching it, I felt very uncomfortable. I always felt that the protagonist's IQ was not very high. (Angry

In Chapter 40, he was persuaded to quit, maliciously lowering Su Xiao's image, and became a disgusting and brainless villain, forcibly creating conflicts and destroying the character. I personally think that the author used the reincarnation paradise to attract the author, and at least he must have the most basic respect.

I don't know what to think, but Chapters 42 to 43 completely distorted Su Xiao's image.

I have read more than 40 chapters, and my current experience is: the second setting is quite reasonable, and the protagonist is pretty good, at least in Apocalypse, there is nothing wrong with it, but why do you want to describe Su Xiao like that? . . The character of the original work does not have the behaviors and psychological thoughts of those ancient villains, such as being angry, being angry and frightened by how the protagonist behaves (it seems that the author did not mean it, but writing this way has the feeling of stepping on the original work, which is very disappointing to readers). Then the combat description (especially combat wisdom) aspect. . First look at the difference in attributes, and then look at the difference in the weapons used. To put it simply, with a sword in one hand and a shield in the other, the protagonist can't last more than a few seconds (of course it may be related to the electric shock device, but to be honest, the opponent's physique is just like that, and it is not specially made, and since they can fight each other, the result of your battle is "forcible", I don't know, just knock them down), and even from the existing description, Su Xiao wants to do something to the mother and daughter, he can't stop him, or he will die first if he tries to stop her. Furthermore, the improvement of combat power is a bit poor. How can specialization-level abilities be so easy to obtain? Count the protagonist's combat experience and training time, and then compare it to easily figure out the problem. To be honest, the biggest attraction of reincarnation is that every ounce of power has weight, and the weight is all gained with blood, giving people a very condensed and pure feeling (a sharp edge that has been forged thousands of times). Fans don't have to be like this, after all, this kind of writing has reached a very high level, and it's good to show different charms (Unbreakable Wall/Knight of Light/Persistence Sand Sculpture, etc.), But don't be "floating" and don't favor "cool writing", otherwise it will be a real pity.

Write for write, learn from others with virtue, you are stepping on Su Xiao's head and jumping up, but you can't jump high.

What's the use of the protagonist's talent? ? ?

The protagonist's character is too middle-aged, and there are too many jokes. That's not to say you can't have lighthearted humor, but too much is bad. Of course, there's nothing wrong with it now that you've just entered. But I hope to see the protagonist's personality slowly change. Not to mention being as cold as Su Xiao, at least not like it is now, which always feels weird and ridiculous. The most important thing is that the overall style is too different from the monograph. After all, you are a fanfic, and if you write like this, you will lose a lot of readers!

Author, you are not writing a group portrait. Why are you writing so many supporting characters?

There is no internal flavor at all. Why does the protagonist look like a girl to me? The more I look at it, the more it looks like

Author, do you think this type of novel is suitable for making fun of the protagonist?

Does anyone know of any reincarnation fanfics where the protagonist is a violator? I think this subject might be interesting?

At first I thought the Knights of the Apocalypse were the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse in the Book of Revelation, but it turned out that you were a top-notch knight who went to the Apocalypse Paradise (not a mockery, just an accident). At first I felt that following the spirit of chivalry in such a place where one could lose one's life was too awkward, but every time I thought of it being the Apocalypse Paradise. The shameful thing in World War, I felt it was acceptable in Miner's Paradise, and then I endured it until Return. It has two very good attributes. I continued to tolerate it, and then I saw Su Xiao in Return. I was quite surprised. The main character of the fanfic and the protagonist of the original work fought with a real man, and then he fed me a piece of shit. . . Hiss~hoo, Su Xiao's character design has collapsed. If you want to make fun of it, please respect the original character design. Is Su Xiao the kind of person who will beep with you while fighting to the death, and then make jokes? Those are the characters of the three brothers of the national football team and Baha, okay? Author, you are a quantum speed reader and Red King. After reading the reincarnation, you came to write it. You are really like this 👍

After reading dozens of chapters, I suggest that you find someone more popular in the next world. After all, what can I say? It's better to write things that are not rushed, but also to gain popularity.

​ ​ ​ Open a complementary building that is suitable for Apocalypse Paradise. You can open some small tricks but it must not be too strong. It is best to talk about skills, personality, equipment, etc., And use it directly after setting it. Please hurry up and become a part of me!

I hope I can reach the level of the vest next door in the future.

Author, I suggest you take a good look at the title. Knights of the Apocalypse, Knights of the Apocalypse. I thought you were one of the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse. I didn't expect you to become a knight in Apocalypse. Shocked me for 100 years! 😓

There seems to be a problem with the setting. The real world is the recruitment ground for reincarnation paradise, and Apocalypse has its own

Has the author made a copy? No update for so long.