Douluo Life Simulator

I wouldn't even watch it if there wasn't a snake lady as the heroine🙈🙈🙈

Let me ask a few questions. 1. The protagonist is going to the Wuhun Palace, so he must be exposed. Moreover, in the original work, it was because his father beat the Pope to death with a sledgehammer that he could not be revealed. 2. The three female protagonists are Hu Liena, Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing. The plot is definitely different from normal imagination, it is unexpected and reasonable. 3. Some people may not understand some of the memes. It is a matter of age group. Just skip and read. 4. If you find real bugs, you can forget about settings and the like. After all, I wrote the book, and I'm not here to crowdfund ideas. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's hearts. If you like to read it, leave more comments, add it to your favorites, recommend it, vote for it, and vote for it. 5. Pursuing reading. Pursuing reading is very important for new authors. Thanks to your efforts, I am also motivated to code (keyboard caught fire)

If Zao Wou-Ki were the heroine, I would book this book

As for the IQ of the protagonist, the whole text is so embarrassing that it makes me pick my feet. When the author is reviewing the novel, please bring the protagonist into the reading and don't read it from a God's perspective.

I wouldn't even watch the heroine if she wasn't Village Chief Jack🙈🙈

I finally know why no one has read this book. There are other time travelers among the protagonists. With this setting, whoever reads it will be stupid X

What do you want to do with two weapons? One is used against others and the other is used against yourself? ? ? ? Also a sword and a gun. . . Armor, weapons. . Arms. Why don't you assist? What are the two weapons for? . . Fighting with swords and guns? ? ? ?

Does the heroine have a small dance? If there is, don't watch it

I didn't want to read Chapter 2 anymore. Soul-breaking gun, the soul-breaking gun of the Po clan? Is this thing born with a soul ring? Author, let's not be too outrageous in our second setting. Even if this is a fanfic, you can magically change the plot. But at least don't mess with the basic world settings. I looked through the original novel, but I couldn't find the setting that the soul-breaking gun is born with a soul ring. If the soul-breaking gun is really so awesome, then the original owner's first spirit is not an angel, but this gun. After all, he was born with one soul ring, so by the time he becomes a titled Douluo, wouldn't he have ten soul rings? Why can't this family go to heaven if they are so awesome? Could it be a subsidiary sect of Haotian Sect in the original work?

It's okay if you don't accept Bibi Dong and her daughter, but give them a good result and don't let them fall into a love trap.

Now that he is a disciple of Wuhun Palace, can't he start an organization on his own?

I'm afraid my life will be lost if my twin martial souls are exposed like this.

I can't keep up with the author's thinking at all. When I saw that I was going to discuss giving Yutian Hengxiangcao, I immediately became poisonous.

What can I say, after more than 100 chapters, I only have 8 fans 😰

Does the heroine have Bibi Dong? Or Qian Renxue

No, I was thinking, you don't want the inheritance of the Rakshasa God, but you also want to give others the inheritance of the Shura God, so aren't you afraid of killing yourself? You must know that the gods in the upper world have no bottom line, and it is not strange to do anything. If you do not want the inheritance of the Rakshasa God, you will offend the Rakshasa God. The Rakshasa God will trip you up. The Shura God can tell Tang Ritian who killed his son, causing Tang Ritian to come directly to the protagonist. How to play this protagonist? At worst, if you kill Tang Ritian, the Shura God and the Rakshasa God will resurrect Tang Ritian at the same time. Don't tell me that it can't be done. Tang San can be resurrected in the original work, and even Poseidon can interfere with the inheritance of the angel god. What's more, the protagonist, Xiami, has not yet become a god, so what are you doing? Don't tell me that you want to become a god on your own. There is a high probability that you will die before you start your career, at the hands of the Rakshasa God Shura God.

Start revising some previous chapters today. If you have any bugs or doubts, you can report them. If it doesn't involve modifying settings, I will modify them as appropriate. But don't mention some ideological issues, such as those who think dual martial souls are unnecessary. I will delete them and leave only valuable comments. In addition, I am a newbie and this is my first book. When writing fan fiction, I also want to stand on the shoulders of giants so that I can practice writing. There is no need to criticize me. If you don't like it, just ignore it. I will just read it while scolding.

What the hell is wrong with the writing?