Quickly Wear: She Defeated All the Big Guys

The parts that should be written in detail are brushed off in one stroke, and there is too much ink about daily life. The whole story has no climax, is long-winded, tasteless, and is a pity to discard.

This is a fixed CP. There is still no fixed CP.

The first story only has about 70 chapters, and the second story has 209 chapters. Oh my god, it's too long.

It's not good-looking 😅, don't waste your time, I'll have a heart attack anyway.

There is nothing rigorous about it, and the rhythm is not right. It is so messed up that it has more than 100 W words. It is nonsense. There are too many unimportant places written. I just skipped and read to know what happened. Do you know what the main plot is? The task to be done in the first world is that I don't know anything. I don't know the specific character of the heroine. The heroine in the original world is somehow involved in the spiritual spring of space. There is no feeling of competition at all. Is it suppressed in all aspects? Where is the fun? What impact do the characters depicted have on colluding to establish a climax? What kind of crappy writings and nonsense writings have I really accepted?

I really like the way the heroine controls the system and turns it over to the country. It's great. I like it! I will continue to pursue it, so please keep updating~

The second story has too many typos. If it was copied from another novel, it would be okay. Erya, Sanya, you can't even figure it out yourself, how can you not make people suspicious, there are so many typos that people will doubt your cultural level.

My wife is too nagging and she can live forever. If there is no key point to solve in one sentence, I can write 5 chapters.

It's master-disciple love again, goodbye.

It looked good from the beginning, but since I saw the gods falling in love, I really lost my appetite. It's written like an ordinary person, especially Master, who was so hands-on at the beginning, which is really disgusting.

In fact, the first story could be longer. Just turn it in. I didn't watch the follow-up. Look at how the country has developed. With so many high technologies, it would take at least one world to dominate. Get off the planet. Just skip the next few decades. I want to see the scene where technology dominated in the 1980s. Ha ha. Skynet is out.

The second story is too low, domestic violence

I feel like I talk too much about the truth and it becomes a sermon.

I feel that the first two stories did not grasp the rhythm well, and both had the defect of too much foreshadowing and not enough excitement. I'm not too interested in the third story so I won't comment until I finish it. Now I'm looking forward to the fourth story. I didn't expect that the heroine has such a big background! He is the disciple of the leader! Come on, author!

It's been three years and it's still being updated 😄, awesome

Oh my God, this story has more than 300 chapters. I have been insisting on it. I have had the urge to abandon the article many times. This story is too long and I really can't stand it. It's almost over. It's too long and I feel very boring.

It's ugly and long, with occasional highlights. I wish the author could simplify it more.

There are no natural disasters 11 in Chapter 718 and 19 natural disasters in Chapter 726.

What? I took the thing away, and there was no reward. The weapon was a famous painting that I exchanged with all my pocket money.