Traveling to the Beast World, I Got the Cannon Fodder Script

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[Lightning Protection/Spoiler⚠️] The writing is okay, which is actually very good for a new writer, but I personally think there is a problem with the plot arrangement. . The transition seemed too abrupt. In the first few chapters, we were still talking about the tribe next door coming to kidnap the females. In the blink of an eye, the two continents were about to start a war. The male protagonist came to save the amnesiac female protagonist. In the blink of an eye, both of them lost their memory. . There are basically no emotional dramas. The heroine's perspective is at least explained a little. I didn't feel that there was any foreshadowing of the hero's liking. I thought it was a cold personality. Then when I saw my future self, I immediately changed my gender. I was so intimate that I called the heroine by her nickname. Only two-thirds of the full text was written before I finally got a little inner portrayal, and then it was gone. . No more. . It's a bit perfunctory, not to mention that there is a time-traveling green tea bitch who has disgraced the 21st century. He sleeps with wild men everywhere and can use the system to make the heroine lose her memory. I would really appreciate it. It just happened that one of these wild men liked the heroine's scene before. She couldn't tell the male protagonist apart for a while. If you think you have low blood pressure, you might as well pursue it. It's quite interesting.