The Magic Doctor

Let me talk about some of my insights: In terms of characterization, this genre is not suitable for portraying such a protagonist, who is incompetent but full of good intentions. It is best to be a rational, decisive, bottom-line, and principled protagonist who can have compassion for the weak from the strong, but cannot be the kind of person who will never fight back without endangering his own safety. Judging from the article, the eight-year-old Xiangwan is more like the protagonist. The protagonist in the front is like an ordinary person who has been infected with cheats, and does not show the protagonist's extraordinary qualities. However, after formal training, he has changed a lot and is much better. In terms of plot, the protagonist has been in the hospital for two years, but his growth has been extremely limited. It feels like his ability to accept things has increased, but his ability to handle things is not that good. The part about the medical clinic was well written, but after coming out of the medical clinic, I encountered a female ghost, stepped into a Taoist trap, and had to take the initiative to jump into the next trap again, so I started practicing cultivation at a critical moment. Overall, the plot is a bit draggy, with too many things arranged to help the protagonist grow, but in fact no growth is seen 😢. The part in the middle where the little beggar is treated for free is really unnecessary and highlights the kindness of the protagonist too much. You can practice in the Taoist temple part, and the medical center part can be used to continue to improve and strengthen the worldview. Otherwise, chapter 41 is where we really start to embark on the path of spiritual practice, which is a bit slow. After reading Chapter 14, you can jump directly to Chapter 38, which will not affect you at all. The chapters in the middle can be summarized as: small things on the way. In this way, you can enter the plot faster, and at the same time avoid some shortcomings of the protagonist, and the viewing experience will be much better. You can read the latter part and then read the middle part. In general, the writing is okay, you can go and read it, skip the chapters in the middle, and avoid some shortcomings, then it is a good work.

Your description is not in detail. As a person who has lived in Renhetang for more than two years, do you still feel disgusted after seeing these? Don't you think you made a big mistake?

Only by deceiving the teacher and destroying the ancestors can one achieve the great road 😊

Chapter 82: Death from poison. Is this female detective a kind of love brain? One second she is fighting to death, the next second her heart breaks, Stockholm syndrome? Only the protagonist can cure the scar on his face. After waiting for so many years, just waiting for the protagonist to fill the gap? Don't you need to measure your combat effectiveness before arresting someone? Didn't you see someone challenge a golden monk to one another? There is also Liang Jingru in the weird world? At first, I thought he was an upright person, but he softened under the threat. He still wanted to lose face. Do you want to build a memorial arch? So, singles shouldn't write emotional dramas, you don't have the ability, you know.

I have lived in this world for two years, but my mentality is still like that of a child. Several supporting characters in the book look more like the protagonist.

Except that the pace is too slow and the practice is only started in chapter 40, I feel that as a dark and strange book, this book is not evil enough. In fact, I think the master of the protagonist can be the protagonist. His treatment methods and medical skills are the most suitable for the title of the book. Otherwise, medicine only knows how to use poison. The key is what kind of poison. What kind of poisoning method can it detoxify? After all, there are many medical methods in the world, and the imperial court is not just for food. Without these, it will quickly become an upgrade and fall into a cliché. At present, the protagonist is drifting with the crowd and there seems to be no villain. The main plot has not yet appeared, but I don't like to be the eagle dog of the imperial court.

Overall it's okay, but the author likes to feed readers flies, which is not poisonous but disgusting.

How did I see the shadow of Li Huowang?

It gave me the impression that it was an imitation of a weird fairy. Unfortunately, as a protagonist, most of the book friends were scolding me. I skipped chapters to read it. The previous chapters were really disgusting. Chapter 40 only really entered the main line. Resurrecting the whole life is because I feel that the method is disgusting. If you don't learn this, you don't need it. It's pretentious. If this doesn't work, then you don't need it. Read the first ten chapters to kill decisively and then get rid of a batch. If it weren't for this kind of writing, there would be so few of them now. A book that can make people jump to read is really, you know?

The last sentence of the introduction made me laugh, and I felt like a middle-aged girl. 😆

The subject matter is quite good, but the protagonist's brain is really touching and his character is too bad.

The creative writing is very good, but it's too ink-y.

The protagonist must always have a bottom line and persevere. Now when you see what you want, you grab it. If you can't grab it, you'll resort to bad guys to grab it. Isn't he just an ordinary villain? What else to watch?

It's a poison, let me try the poison first!

Why are works with similar starting points all the same, with techniques and plot settings all following a routine, giving people the impression that they came out of a training class? This one was thought to be fairy grass at first, however. . . . .

The protagonist looks like a white lotus, he is such a good person!

It looks okay at the beginning, but why are the results so bad?

It's very beautiful, why are there so few people?

Why hasn't the author published it yet? It's over 300,000 words

It's pretty good, but no one is watching it

The writing is okay, I can read it, it should be considered above the level of food and grass.

Isn't the author on the shelves yet? There are more than 150 chapters

Maybe love starts out because of dependence, but if you really love it, it will definitely turn into dependence. Just when they were missing each other, Xiaowu suddenly came to him like a spring breeze. She smiled so beautifully that he couldn't help but want to grab her, but when he waved his arm, it was empty. This was a dream after all, a sweet dream!

I was so sick after reading Chapter 16 that I couldn't stand it anymore. The main character is just trash.

This is quite difficult. Once you have written some characters and portrayed them, you have to give them an ending. If you don't want to write a dead story, just give it some opportunities. If you don't want anything, just let the protagonist wander all the way. Not many people want to see this kind of writing. You let the protagonist retain warmth, but it's not written enough.