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There is a bug in this book, that is, scoring a goal increases attributes, but not scoring decreases attributes. So here's the point. Why does the Pig's Knuckle, which can be trained into the Shilipo Sword God directly in the novice area, have to go to the full-level map to fight the boss? It is known that beating monsters in the novice area will upgrade you to several levels. If you beat the boss, you may not be able to level up, and you may even lose the level... Tsk, tsk, tsk, I can't figure out any reason to fight the boss╮(╯^╰)╭
This system is disgusting! As long as you are punished for not scoring a goal and your strength drops, do you still need to train? Now I can understand it with the system, but I can't understand it with such punishment! I was really looking forward to the old author's football articles! Well! This is getting more and more unbearable the more I write about it.
When I read football novels, I especially hate the beginning of the fallen genius. I don't want to read it every time I see it. In this way, even if the protagonist starts to grow step by step, it is not very satisfying, because the starting point at the beginning is too high, just like a bankrupt boss starting from setting up a stall, and others will not think how powerful he is when they look at him, unless he returns to the original starting point, then everyone will be amazed. Otherwise, the process of his struggle will be seen by others as just a struggle, and all the praise will be condescending, "It's amazing that he is still working hard and not giving up after this has happened." So I don't feel good. When reading football novels, I like the ordinary and normal start. It is neither the fall of a genius, nor the sudden golden finger of a loser, but the protagonist has no bloody story at the beginning. He joins a certain team because of his talent, is trained, and then grows stronger step by step, stands on a higher stage, and receives applause. Because I think the most important thing in a football novel is that the game is well-written, just like upgrading the game. The protagonist only needs to upgrade step by step and defeat more and more powerful opponents to win, which is enough fun. There is no need to add some bloody elements, such as how a fallen genius returns to the top, or how a loser who has been a loser for many years suddenly gets a golden finger and turns into a genius. I think these are all redundant. To compare it to a fantasy novel, it is like Tomato. The protagonist starts with talent, and then starts to grow, become stronger and upgrade. Other superfluous settings, I think, are all literary and stupid. Basketball novels nowadays seem to be basically like this. The protagonist is given a strong talent at the beginning, and then starts playing in the school, and then joins the NBA. I think this is good. I don't understand why football articles add so many boring bloody settings.
Don't care what others say, the author just writes according to his own ideas! No one is watching anyway 🤭
What's going on all day long... It's been bad since the beginning of the reversal of the madness... The more I write, the more I go by. I have always said that I think you are better than Lin Hai Tingtao, especially the mad lion. No matter what era you watch, you will never find it cliché or poisonous. Alas
It seems that many readers are like me. I can't understand the protagonist's brain circuit. With such a system, why not find a league where it is easy to farm and start from a low-level league. You can't get out of the mountain without brushing your whole body into a three-dimensional explosion. As long as I have enough attributes, even being injured can't clear me out. I even thought of the title of the book for you "This player is obviously super strong but is a loser at the low level"
It's really boring to see the main character go through another episode in the middle. I originally thought I'd find a way to watch it, but the author used it for a long time to vent his emotions. If he's not happy, he'll have to restart the main character. That's it, that's it.
Why don't you introduce the system seriously? , What does this mean to you now? The system of other great authors is slowly being rolled out and it is not so perfunctory.
Yes, yes, that's right, scoring a goal plus physical strength plus steals, not scoring a goal but buckling the shooting accuracy and arc. Didn't you notice? Since the beginning of the plot, there have been only a few times where there were no goals, and each time it was the arc and shooting accuracy. If I remember correctly, it was two separate times. Are you treating readers as if they were being killed? Ah? Look at your word count, look at your monthly collection, cut it out, don't torture yourself and everyone else. The problem with plug-ins is not big. The biggest problem with this book is that you are artificially controlling the probability of adding points, and you are controlling it in the direction that readers hate the most.
I won't waste my time writing about the national football team.
Is this author a poisonous person? The systems he has written in the last few books are all disgusting to death. I can't find the feeling of the crazy lion at all. It's not like it was written by one person. And with such a poisonous system, I can write several books in a row.
I just don't understand it. There is this system where you can't participate in the game and points will be deducted if you score a goal. How could Pig's Foot not think about joining a wealthy family? Most wealthy families fight on three fronts, and sometimes on four fronts. The main players will definitely take turns. Play at least half the games less. No amount of points will be enough to deduct points. This is not about joining a small team that doesn't have enough key players. Never take a day off.
Other authors write better and better as they write more, but yours becomes worse and worse as they write.
Looking at the author's name, I'm a little disappointed to be honest. People tend to get better and better as they write, especially those who write in a single genre. Not only have they not improved, they have also regressed! ! Did you regress without changing the subject matter?
These old guys who write about football are letting themselves go so much. It's 2022 and they are still writing about the national football team. It's not disgusting enough, right? I can't understand the transfer. The Champions League winner is going to Rome. I'm sorry. You don't need to write a novel to get better as you write, but at least don't force feed it 💩 Okay
After being injured once, you change the way you play. The author's idea of training the protagonist is correct, but your approach of directly killing the protagonist at once is really not liked by readers. If the author wants readers to continue reading, he still has to accept the readers' ideas.
After reading Chapter 7, there is another time traveler who will test the poison for everyone.
Does the author want to tire the protagonist to death with this kind of kick? Not allowed to rest? The machine also needs to take a break. Points will be deducted when it takes a break. Is that interesting? I won't introduce the plug-in data either.
It is indeed difficult to write about football, but the quality of your book is simply insulting to people's intelligence. In fact, most people are not that disgusted with the last book about cheating and drawing characters. They just feel that they have already written a book and it lacks freshness. You can still make money by writing seriously, but you are just a eunuch! ! Let's not mention this, the starting point is the national football team. Why
If your system hadn't been so vicious, you wouldn't have been so far behind by that book. Your writing style is no worse than his. What's worse is that after writing for so long, you still don't know how to cater to readers. The system is to make readers happy, not to mess with their mentality.
I have written so many football articles, but I have not made any progress at all.
Can the author write another coaching article? The pace doesn't need to be too fast.
Does any boss know the news?
Brother, can you open a new book? Even if you open a small account, tell me!
Brother, you can't write about playing football, but you can write about directing football.
March is almost over, and it won't stop.
What this plug-in says is really disgusting.
In fact, the books written by the author are all good! Why are there so many people?
What does the author have to do with Tiantian Buxiu?
To be honest, you would only play with the national football team if you do this kind of thing.