Wake up and Become a Magical Girl

I understood from the introduction. It was a man who saved a magical girl, and then he turned into a magical girl. Since it wasn't a transformation, then maybe the cross-dressing guy didn't run away.

Judging from the data, it is indeed ridiculously low. I signed the contract and wrote more than 130,000 words in a month, and my collection is only in double digits, which is about the same as me (crossed out) I have read ten chapters so far, and I feel it is okay, but some parts feel a little trivial and can be streamlined. The audience for the theme of magical girls is indeed a little small, and it has not been recommended. It is difficult for more people to see it. Most of the people who read it are not biased towards the second dimension (sad) Maybe it is a bit selfish to say this. Can you please ask the teacher not to cut the book easily if there is no reason why you must do it, such as writing a book to make a living? I am looking forward to the following plots. Before the protagonist's story is completed and before he realizes his dream, he will not be cut into pieces by the scissors from reality. Even if the fate is destined to be forgotten.

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Although the writing and plot are indeed not good, I signed the contract at least and gave it a reward

I don't quite understand. . . 😐😐

I forgot to add a comment I would like to state in advance that I am just a reader, and the so-called opinions and suggestions I put forward may not necessarily be feasible, but are just one-sided ideas. For professional opinions, I should go to the editor in charge, such as Kaguya. The writing style is actually quite good, and there is no big problem with fighting as the core selling point. However, as far as my personal opinion is concerned, the protagonist relies on emergency response rather than previous accumulation. From the performance point of view, it will give people the impression that everyone else is stupid. Only the protagonist succeeds in what an ordinary person can do with a little use of his brain. And from a long-term perspective, he relies on adaptability to win every time. The subsequent battles are very dependent on imagination, and some unexpected moves are necessary to make people truly feel the protagonist's strength. The synopsis of the plot is quite attractive. As for the content of the first volume, the details are inappropriate. A lot of text is devoted to the battle. The characters suddenly change significantly before and after the battle. There is no sufficient foreshadowing. The loser at the beginning turns into a hero who saves the world without any basis. It is very dramatic and forced to sensationalize. Although the performance may be more like hydrology, it may be more daily life, write more about the characters' daily behaviors, and explain some backgrounds in advance. When the subsequent changes are made, the perception will be better.