Tianyan Midfield

After reading dozens of chapters, let me share my thoughts first. First, the protagonist himself is a genius, and he also has a particularly awesome trick, but the author failed to express this "coolness". Playing in a second-tier team, he almost knelt at the feet of the opponent's god-like goalkeeper. Second, the progression of the plot is unreasonable. After just one warm-up match for military training, he was regarded as an idol by the whole city! ! ! The protagonist of Bayern Munich immediately watched your video and set up targeted defenses! ! ! Then the whole country will know about you! ! ! This rise to fame was too sudden. Third, the character description is too embarrassing. A female reporter got drunk in a bar and was almost carried away. Then you went to save the beauty, and the female reporter chatted with you soberly. After that, you still found a piano to sing in the bar, and the Germans in the audience cheered for a song "Friends Don't Cry" that they didn't understand! ! ! This is not an embarrassment of one or two chapters. The whole text is full of second thoughts. In the final analysis, the author has too little experience and his writing style is too poor.

You don't need youth training, but they arrange Bundesliga training for you? Do you think I am your third-stringer in Ba Shadow?

Just these few chapters, how can this work? Doesn't this make the neighbors look down on us? Come on, one hundred chapters, one chapter for each of you here.

What can I say, why I put this book at the bottom of the box? It's not because of the national football team. The national football team can bear to read it. It's mainly because of the celebrities and singing! How disgusting! Are all women dead? Just play football and sing whatever song you want! Nausea! It really takes up a lot of bookshelves! Hold

This writing style, I would believe it if you say it's your first time writing.

I don't want to watch the national football team. The national football team only deserves to be destroyed

Why do you want to rent? Can't you just leave? You have to pay Barcelona a transfer fee after playing. In 2014, you paid at least 50 million euros. Why should you give it? In the first chapter, you can withdraw unconditionally and go on your own. I don't understand.

Barcelona is missing Xavi now. They need a brain like Xavi to pass and control the ball.

The author is really speechless when he writes about body fat percentage in Chapter 6. Please don't make such remarks without common sense and mislead others.

The protagonist should not return to Barcelona. You gave up on the protagonist at that time, but now you let the protagonist go back. A good horse will never turn back.

The national football team kicked me, I couldn't stand it

Teenage diva, are you serious? It's not capital-operated yet

Is there a writer who has a deep understanding of football like the author of Green Reed? He always writes cool articles that make me want to vomit. Let's get some good stuff!

With such a good talent, why do you want to cheat? Today's authors wouldn't be able to write novels without a system

He is an old author, and his writing is somewhat unsatisfactory.

I don't even know what I'm writing about now. Is it football or a fantasy city?

The creative writing is pretty good and I like it, but there are some saucy words that are really unnecessary. Maybe my understanding of humor is different, which makes it quite uncomfortable to watch.

When I see the national football team being blown away, I have no choice but to give up.

Celebrity sister? Hahaha so funny

I just want to say, what on earth did you write?

The protagonist is 18 and his sister is 16-17, the singing diva emmmmm

Awesome, the protagonist passed on his superpower to Real Madrid's Silva

The main character has a crazy brain and acts like an idiot. He has bad reviews and bad reviews.

When I saw the protagonist join the national football team, I didn't want to continue reading, for fear of making myself sick.

If you write about the country, you are doomed to be a group of people who only know how to take money and eat sea cucumbers. You can stop scolding, but you can't beautify it.

If you really want to save the national football team, you should not be playing football but write about how you became the president of the Football Association step by step.

Do Hong Kong and Macau qualify for the World Cup alone? If so, is there any author who can write a cool football article from this perspective?

The first timeline is unclear and uncomfortable to watch.

Chapter 14 I completely understood what this book was about

It's hard to imagine that a football novel is full of negative reviews. I opened it with a doubtful attitude. The negative reviews are not without reason.