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Invincible stories are difficult to write. I have seen several eunuchs. The reason for eunuchs is that they are too invincible and not interesting. They are not invincible and do not fit the setting of invincible. Generally, invincible stories are about shopkeepers who live a long life because they are invincible but can stay out of the fight and will not lose their fighting power. Buying things can promote the plot. Writing about Superman is the fastest way to collapse. One is having past life memories and not wanting to adapt like Superman since childhood. (When an ordinary person becomes a Superman, he will generally become two types. (One is to have no desires and desires. Things that were previously dreamed of are now readily available, and they will have no desires and desires and just get them easily anyway. The second is to miss the motherland or let go of oneself in Dragon Ball 18). There are also invincible time travel and changing the plot in other worlds. I read several books elsewhere. The world is forcibly weakened because of the law. It's okay to read a few semi-invincible books. It's not that strong but you can deal with it freely. You can also learn knowledge to strengthen yourself through time travel, but there are some problems after reading a few books. The learning is too complicated. (In the beginning, the warrior must learn spells, and the spells must learn tactics. The warrior must be fast, accurate, ruthless and easy to write. The chestnut warrior holds a terrifying giant sword in both hands and rushes in front of the demon at super speed, slashing at the devil's fortress with fast and terrifying slashes. Harm everywhere, use the most brutal attack to chop the demon into pieces in the moment when the demon does not react, and this is just the normal daily routine of the warrior. In this terrifying place, the warrior is on the verge of countless life and death. What the warrior has obtained is a simple, fast and effective killing method to survive, and this place is a paradise for killing. Every creature killed will make the warrior's body stronger) (Mage, Lizi Mage uses magic to open three shields, and uses the Mage to give himself several buffs while the enemy is shielding. Buff, the first two shields have been shattered under the enemy's terrifying attack. The magician uses magic to teleport 50 meters away, uses the earth magician to turn a large area of ​​swamp in front of him to slow down, and releases entanglement magic to control the enemy, briefly controlling the enemy.

The author's Superman has no biological stance, and he relies entirely on hypnotizing himself to control his power. The silver Superman's expressiveness is only that of Superman in the movie. It feels like he is just writing randomly, so he quickly went to the factory to screw in the screws.

If you don't change this part of Phoenix Force, the author will definitely go crazy. I read the comment section and said that the rest of it is very good. I wonder if you are the master who makes people tolerate this poisonous weed. I look at your wonderful performance in the rest. It's really annoying to the author. It's so annoying to write such a good subject.

To be honest, I almost thought I was reading a fantasy novel. I have gained enlightenment, and there is no reason for the Tao. Is there any real me? Also, the dialogue between the characters has a Taoist flavor.

A third-rate cool novel disguised as a superhero.

A very rubbish starting point article, very typical. I can tell at a glance that this thing is just for making money.

The author doesn't know what you are thinking. What kind of great way do you think Superman is? I don't know how to watch Xianxia when watching this?

Has the author looked at the new Infinity Edge and Justice League incarnations? Alas, the collapse of combat power is too serious. I thought the future state was the end. Unexpectedly, in order to promote the great darkness, all the villains who have appeared before have been directly reduced to the multi-level.

Superman has a biological force field and several levels of strength. It's so rubbish.

Classic white text, don't take it too seriously or you won't be able to read it.

A novice writer wearing the skin of Marvel and DC slightly changed the set characters and threw it into the fantasy zone without any sense of inconsistency.

When writing Silver Superman, I don't know the strength of Silver Superman. When writing about Superman, I don't know the biological standpoint😓

Superman can't control his powers? Are you kidding? The super brain is the same as a biological bag. It only grows strength but not brains?

Run quickly, remember to bring your brain with you

You can announce that it has been sent. The previous fantasy is indeed bad. It can be saved by deleting 80% of it, but using hypnosis to solve the problem will completely destroy the book. Please think about it, if you use hypnosis to solve everything, are these characters still them? Doctor Strange? Spider-Man? It's just a robot that acts according to your instructions, a devastating plot. Finally, Ni Mei is poisonous, vomiting

Superman is strong without logic. This is true for Shirogane. What does he need to grow? There is also a Chinese-style shyness written with a black man. Send

Bullshit about an Egyptian god! ! The awesome results introduced earlier 🙂

What did you write? Time travels to No Homecoming for a while, and then Aquaman appears in it? After a while, they went on a killing spree, killing Spider-Man, then the Hulk, and then the Avengers. ? ?

Author, you can check in your browser how thoroughly Batman has dissected Superman Ultraman has been dissected

This is too bad. He can't even control his own strength. Isn't he an iron fw? If you really want to show that the protagonist is getting stronger every day, and the strength soared very much, then don't use "first gear, second gear, and third gear". It's like what Pangu opened the world and shouted was not "Nine Heavens Mysterious Ax" or "Open Sky Ax" or other more domineering names, but "Tornado" It is recommended to change the names that have been compared with each other such as "Three Axes" and "Thunder Axes". I don't know about DC. Marvel has some Sub-Heavenly Father, Skyfather, Latitude Lord, Universe, Super Father, Multiverse Level, etc. It sounds like it is better than First Gear, Two Gears, Three Gears and Four Gears.

Who was the protagonist before he traveled through time? I think this book is ridiculous. I'm not surprised that the protagonist turns into a native of the motherland. Bai Ying Dachao is so unconventional. The protagonist, you told me to use Buddhist mind control. Haha😒. If you set the protagonist to be a time traveler, don't be too out of the ordinary, okay? Is there such a person? Absolute Buddhism does not exist, and a person without desires is a dead person. I can't relate to it. You wrote him as an ideal character, but you also designed it to be a time travel through reality. It's so contradictory. There is a big disconnect. If you don't handle it well in the first chapter, if you think carefully about how to reasonably shape the origin and character of the protagonist in the first chapter, then the book will definitely do better than it does now.

Md, I voted for the monthly ticket as a recommendation vote (눈_눈), can I get a refund (ﾉಥBenefitಥ)

Silver Superman can break free with enough power to hold the entire universe, nearly kill the Anti-Monitor who casually destroys thousands of universes, bear the weight of thousands of planets, pull the entire galaxy with life: too fast to break infinity itself (would I say breaking infinity requires being stronger/faster than infinity) and nearly destroys everything flying across the multiverse into heaven, the ghost has to come out to stop him even in the end The voice of God even came out to say a few words. Moreover, the Superman of the Silver Age (complete version + PIS + CIS) was not afraid of magic (can be absorbed), not afraid of kryptonite (so delicious!), Not afraid of the red sun (what the hell, it will go out when you blow on it). It was a universe-level existence, not to mention that Superman himself said that he could create any new ability to defeat the enemy if he wanted to (that is, if there is an enemy, For example, a non-material entity like the God of Death, no matter how strong your superman is, you can't hit it, right? But if it's Silver Superman, he can create a new power to hurt non-material entities. I don't know the principle, but that's what it means anyway) Silver Superman is not exactly a solar panel at times. It is really determined that the source of his power is the sun. It should be in the Bronze Age, which is better in the Silver Age. As it has never been said before, the gravity of Superman's planet in the Silver Age is greater than that of the earth. After arriving on the earth and being "activated" by the earth's sun, he will have super powers (the density of his body is close to infinite, and Superman himself even shakes his muscles to infinity). This is different from later versions There are many people with super powers who manipulate molecules, and many of them are pinched like toothpicks by SBP. In the era of Tees, the Big Bang of the universe was not injured (currently Superman can do it too, the only impact is that his hair is messed up), he played on the moon, listened to the sounds of the entire universe, blew away the sun, easily flew out of the black hole, brought out hundreds of planets and "closed" the black hole, the silver Superman tore open the dimensional channel with his bare hands and almost changed reality, squirted and destroyed the solar system, and shouted more than 100 trillion decibels, I promise. SMP (SMP is Bronze Superman, and Silver Superman's power is much greater than Bronze Superman), Silver Supergirl almost killed Anti-Monitor - It doesn't matter if you don't know Anti-Monitor, just remember its power. It absorbed the entire mass and energy of thousands of universes, but it was still almost killed by Supergirl, while Silver Supergirl and The strength of the Silver Superman is equal. It is worth mentioning that this battle is carried out in the anti-matter universe, and in the anti-matter universe, Superman and their powers are all reduced and will be injured (if this battle is elsewhere, it is still unclear who will win), and this feat tells us that the Superman of the Silver Age can lift the entire weight of the entire universe with just one finger, which is too easy Well, Superman's own power is at least the sum of the entire mass of thousands of universes. The last feat was accomplished by Silver Superman himself. In order to catch up with Supergirl, he broke through time and space and almost destroyed the multiverse and even rushed into heaven. Superman's flying speed is enough to produce this destructive power. He just wants to catch up with his cousin and fly by the way, which is enough to produce this destructive power. What if Superman uses full hostility?

The author is thoughtful and does not blindly brag about superheroes. He sees it very clearly. I never thought that Batman was a capitalist.

A very good book, a superman who does not rely on violence is very distinctive

I will write an outline of my own design here. Use it at will, because my heart is a bit cracked after reading the book Let's write the main character first Name: Lorraine Race: Human Gender: Male Age: 18+? Eye color: brown Skin color: wheat Characteristics: kind, gentle, clear love and hate Likes: family, delicious food, high technology, magic Dislikes: tobacco and alcohol, people who are insatiable, gods, gambling Titles: "Dora Friends", "Traveler Killer", "Bat Disciple", "The Last Thousand Sons", "Heroes who never call themselves heroes", "Overwatch" Story: He was obviously a top student but was bullied; after finally getting rid of his extremely controlling father, he went to his mother in the capital, and eventually went to Harvard to study under her arrangement. During his study abroad career, he met a good friend from his hometown, who took him into the only serious gaming club. Having never been exposed to these "distracting" things, he began to find a common language and became one with them. During a hotel dinner, he and his friends from the game club were attacked by a World Eater Astartes who claimed to be a returned "traveler". After a blue halo flashed, his companions disappeared without a trace, and the evil giant in front of them began to slaughter civilians in the hotel. He took advantage of the giant's surprise and activated the melta bomb on his back. With a loud noise, both parties were buried in the ruins of the hotel. Even though he later recovered and was discharged from the hospital, he was still restricted from leaving the country and fell into endless scrutiny and detention. However, he always kept a secret, which was a blue square crystal only the size of a thumb. For some unknown reason, he endured severe pain and took it off the devil's corpse and hung it around his neck. Many days later, the crystal gave off the same blue halo as before under the long-lost direct sunlight, and brought him to a huge transparent oval computer room. This computer room was filled with countless galaxies. No one knew what happened after he walked into the machine. Only rumors seemed that after he left with a group of people, great changes would happen. Name: Wu Ruixiang Race: Human Gender: Female Age: 17+? Eye color: brown Skin color: wheat Characteristics: kind, gentle, helpful, naturally stupid Likes: Sleeping and sleeping Dislikes: tobacco and alcohol, people who love to show off, Title: "Feng Shui Master" Story: A naturally stupid and talented woman born in a scholarly family of history, deeply myopic, and... He went to the other side of the ocean to study, and also to make more friends and join the game club. As a result, he was unlucky to time travel and became a palace Feng Shui master with the same name and surname in the Qing Dynasty. He obtained the Five Elements Bagua Compass Shield and could use the power of Feng Shui to summon the holy beasts from all directions to fight. He was the first time traveler found by Lorraine. Later, he followed Lorraine to adventure in the multiverse and finally returned to his hometown. Name: Liu Yonglong Race: Human Gender: Male Age: 18 Eye Color: Brown Skin Color: Wheat Character: Straightforward Likes: Women Dislikes: Self-righteous guys Title: "Evil Emperor" Story: Born in a family of entrepreneurs from a certain group in the south, he was forced to leave his hometown because he got into trouble. After spending a lot of money to settle down, he joined a game club in order to show off. He traveled to a place exactly like his hometown but with a zombie crisis and obtained the "Doomsday City" system. He knew that his happy day had come, so he built a huge "Sin City" while saving points to upgrade the system; he All the female survivors collected were used as harems, and the castrated men worked as coolies for the "Unsullied" army, including children; because of the systematic protection, they were invincible, and were eventually discovered by Lorraine and Wu Ruixiang who had traveled through time, and they were defeated and killed together. Name: James Danzig Race: Human Gender: Male Age: 18+127 Eye Color: Brown————Red Skin Color: Black Characteristics: Kind, protective Likes: Battle brothers, friends Dislikes: heretics, aliens, Traitor Titles: "Son of the Fire Dragon", "Master of Forging" Story: After countless involutions, finally relying on the zzzq trend, a black orphan from a coastal city entered this coveted college. In order to maintain his academic status, he had to work a few more jobs. Fortunately, his friends in the game club helped him, which made him feel a lot more relaxed. He traveled to the Warhammer 40K universe and was favored by the Salamanders Chapter, becoming a battle brother. As the Chapter traveled around, he only received countless smiles in return, but he was already very satisfied. When Lorraine came to ask him to go home, he refused because he could not leave the other brothers behind. Name: Jack Hoffman Race: Human Gender: Male Age: 18+? Eye color: golden Skin color: white Character traits: cunning Likes: reading, practicing Cassila and Barton Dislikes: self-righteous guys Title: "The Killer" Story : Little Jack, who was born into a police family, has shown a strong interest in weapons and criminal investigation since he was a child, and even more so when he grew up. He joined the game club purely because the shooting club was full, but he did find fun here. Although he is 18 years old, he still has a small mustache. He traveled to 1900, a world where everyone was a "cat", and saved his first pot of gold by working in a weapons store to invest in "Moonlight Wine". However, everything was not always smooth sailing. The wine shop declined rapidly after the death of his friend and partner Atlas. In order to take revenge, he He put on a trench coat and embarked on an endless journey... When Lorraine found him, he was putting a pistol on a "Judas" head Name: Thalia Law Race: Human Gender: Female Age: 13 Eye Color: Blue Skin color: white Characteristics: kind, gentle, stubborn Likes: family, anchovy pizza, mud baths, red, my own waist-length blond hair Dislikes: liars Titles: "Earth Girl", "Hufflepuff" "Princess", "Hero who never calls himself a hero", "Overwatch Reserve" Story: Originally named Terra Markov, she is a little princess from the Eastern European country of Markovia in the main universe of DCTAS. Her body has been modified and she has the super power to control the earth's magnetic field and thus control earth and stone. A lunatic time traveler came to the TAS universe. He frantically captured superheroes and regressed their lives so that they could be brainwashed and controlled. Unfortunately, the plan was interrupted by Lorraine. The lunatic made a desperate move and blew himself up and the TAS universe with the detonated system. Terra's petri dish was one of the few things Lorraine saved. Tyra was only 7 years old when she left the petri dish. She was unfamiliar with everything and was constantly tormented by bad memories of the past. In order to take good care of her, Lorraine created a special environment and even took her to study at Hufflepuff House in the Harry Potter universe. With his help, Terra plucked up the courage and decided to start a new life. She changed her name to Thalia. It is said that it was the name of a hero who also used earth and stone. Perhaps no one knows that this little princess has always been yearning for Lorraine... Name: Xia Lott Luo Race: Human Gender: Female Age: 13 Eye color: pink Skin color: white Characteristics: dark, kind Likes: desserts, magic, jewelry, twin ponytails Hateful things West: Contender Titles: "Witch of Ravenclaw", "Righteous Thief" Story: One of the experimental subjects who was also stuffed into the petri dish, with no identity information, only a codename "Jinx" The skin is whiter than that of Caucasians, with pink shoulder-length hair, and And it seems that this is the case. When she was released, she was wearing a black lady's skirt with black and pink circle stripes, and her pink hair was tied into two pink buns separated left and right like a clown. She seemed to remember her past but didn't mention it at all. She seemed to intentionally want to get a haircut? She has the ability to release a pink magic beam, which can, but is not limited to, manipulate objects, cut hard objects, and make objects disappear or appear. Later, she used this ability to rob several black-hearted factories of their ill-gotten gains and then spread them to the slums. This gave Lorraine, who had been taking care of her, a big headache. Charlotte has always known that Thalia likes Lorraine and has been secretly competing with her. Name: Corny Law Race: Tamaran Gender: Female Age: 9 Eye color: bright purple Skin color: brown sugar Characteristics: tsundere, queen, gentleness Likes: Lorraine, sister, little pranks Dislikes: sister, chili pepper, mustard Titles: "Black Fire", "The Best Sister in the World", " "The Brave of Gryffindor" Story: The DNA replica of the villain "Blackfire" in the main TAS universe. It has a strong physique and the ability to emit purple light called "Starlight". It was picked up and raised by Lorraine in an abandoned smuggling ship during an interstellar exploration. It is a sharp-tongued person who often teases Corrie on the surface but actually takes good care of her sister. She knows that Charlotte and Thalia have always liked Lorraine and are secretly competing with each other. Name: Cory Lowe Race: Tamaran Gender: Female Age: 9 Eye color: sapphire green Skin color: coffee sugar color Characteristics: Innocence, kindness, helpfulness Likes: Lorraine, sister, little pranks, delicious food, cute toys Dislikes: None Titles: "Starfire", " "Gryffindor's Emerald" Story: The DNA replica of the superhero "Starfire" in the main TAS universe. It has a strong physique and the ability to emit green light called "Starlight". It was picked up by Lorraine in an abandoned smuggling ship during an interstellar exploration and raised. It is innocent and kind, and full of curiosity about everything. She knows that her sister, Charlotte and Thalia have always liked Lorraine, and they are also secretly competing with her. That's roughly it. You can judge the plot through the character settings You can use it as you like. If you really want to write it down, please give it a try

The most difficult thing to grasp in transhumanism is to be neither too strong nor too weak. I hope the author can grasp this point well

I suggest you follow the author and follow your own ideas. Don't be swayed by your ideas and make things look different. Anyway, the logic of American comic series is not very good.

Imagine the tattoo on Ace's back to look like a phoenix. Doesn't it look like the protagonist's Phoenix power?

What I wrote later is much better than what I wrote before.