A Ye Fan from the Start

Good guy, Ye Fan wrote "Tomb of the Gods", it turns out his pen name is Chen Dong, right?

I don't want those plots of time-travel martial arts novels, it's boring!

What I wrote before is quite good. Don't write about time travel. It will make readers confused and nonsensical. It's not too late to change it now, otherwise this book will be GG.

So scary

No eunuchs! No eunuchs! No eunuchs!

It's good to be old and sexy, but it feels a bit inconsistent in Lingxu Cave, similar to the feeling of immoral people who want to be morally kidnapped. Also, there is nothing about martial arts in terms of time travel. The main reason is that the protagonist cannot abandon the original and pursue the inferior. If you use other worlds as a place to vent and relax, it would be good to devour others to increase your own heritage. However, you cannot write too much. Kung Fu can be used to broaden your horizons, but you cannot focus on it. We must put the method of covering the sky first

No wonder they say, don't ask why the update was added. It seems that the original manuscript was just thrown up and ran away.

Can the protagonist have more hair, like the fairy wind and crane bones? These few hairs are not immersive.

How should I put it, I feel like Ye Fan's character is a bit OOC, weird?

I just like reading this kind of novel. Don't ask me why. Don't tell me how fast the car is. The key is Cao Cao's ambition😎😎😎😎