Cheating in Swallowing Starry Sky

It could have been a good book. The first point is to talk nonsense with the system, and the system will actively throw all kinds of rubbish! This is from ten years ago, bro! There are still a few people who like to watch this! The second point is to basically copy various resources! Not much new stuff! New authors can understand! But I really can't stand it when you use all kinds of poisons! The third point is that as a fan fiction, our general framework should adhere to the original work, but many things you write are deviated from the original work, including many basic settings, so it is recommended that the author carefully proofread it based on the original! You can have a second agency, but you can create a second setting in places where the original work is relatively vague, because it is written by a fan, and that is the audience! Maybe it's because I'm not a novice enough and I got poisoned to death! I hope I can write better and better as I write this! Goodbye

Are Luo Feng, Hong, Lei Shen and Wei Wen your fathers? Give me everything? Why not give them the system😁

What about the system? Didn't you say earlier that the rules could be improved? Since the Chaos City Lord can't discover the system, why not use it?

This must be improved

The system should not be intelligent, it should not be intelligent, it should not be intelligent! Let me say important things three times. If the system is intelligent, why does it need to train the protagonist? It has supreme power in itself

Don't bring Wei Wen, just bring Luo Feng. The protagonist is not his father, so why should you help him? Just push him to immortality in the future and let him live forever in the protagonist's small universe. Even though Luo Feng and Wei Wen are so strong, they didn't help him much in the original work. They just gave him a resource to reduce the number of Wei Wen's appearances in the book. He was just a sidekick in Devouring Stars. No one liked to watch him.

Is it necessary to hand over such an important secret method as the Thousand Body Secret Code for free? Could it be that the protagonist's brain is broken and he has forgotten how some masters of the universe went back on their word and robbed the earth? To be honest, even the total wealth of the human race is greater than the Thousand Body Secret Code. For example, if Giant Ax cultivates the Thousand Body Secret Code, it would be equivalent to humans suddenly having a thousand strongest people in the universe. Isn't it better to take off on the spot and dominate the cosmic sea?

Ever since he left the base city for the first time on the Ziyun Shuttle, he has been forcibly suppressing his intelligence! Since you can fly out, why the hell can't you fly back? In order to post this comment, I had to spend money to buy a chapter!

The writing is okay, but the main character is a little awkward and doesn't feel like he's being swallowed up at all. Also, Wei Wen appears too much and was persuaded to quit by Wei Wen.

I haven't read the book yet, but I didn't plan to read it when I saw in the comments section that it mentioned the apprentice-level field of external expansion, let alone what the author himself said about the external field of spiritual power. It's not scary to make mistakes in fan fiction, but it's scary not to admit that you're wrong. First, it does not mean that all the protagonists of Devouring fandoms are planet-level and have realms, which is their "secondary design"; on the contrary, apprentice-level realms are their second design. At least the original work never mentioned that there were monsters in the original universe who could have domains at the apprentice level, and this conflicts with the setting of the original work Swallowed Starry Sky. The reasons are as follows: Part 3 Chapter 26 Li Yao's Death mentioned that "in the universe, the reason why planet-level warriors are defined as 'real warriors' is because only when they reach the planet level, warriors have their truly special methods." The reason why Li Yao was able to break free and escape was precisely because he broke through to the planetary level on the spot and awakened his special ability of light; Looking at Chapter 30 of Chapter 3 Entering the planetary level, Luo Feng broke through the planetary level first because of his mental power, but did not unlock his special ability "Vajra Body" until it was mentioned in Chapter 7 of Chapter 4 of Chapter 4: Luo Feng's special ability "Because Depending on your physique and soul, the cosmic energy absorbed by your body is actually different, and the converted genetic energy is of course different! "Gene energy is divided into eight attributes: metal, wood, water, fire, earth, thunder, wind, and light." Tomato also explained in this chapter through Babata! The reason why Luo Feng's mental power breaks through the planetary level without awakening his special ability is that "gene energy is the most suitable for transforming the body. The extent of his transformation of the body is much exaggerated compared with the transformation of mental power." At the same time, this chapter also describes in detail the earth-shaking changes in the Dantian when the warrior breaks through the planetary level. The miniature planet in the Dantian breaks through the planetary level. It was impossible to have it before, so according to the logic and setting of the original work, when breaking through the planetary level, each person is given attributes and a special ability. If a field can be formed in the future, there will definitely be a field with the same attributes. Of course, geniuses can also minor in other fields, and then they can understand a hint of the law through the field and step into the threshold of the law. (The death of Li Yao in Chapter 26 of Chapter 3 and the mention of Hong's special ability of light and the field of light he cultivated in Chapter 40 of Chapter 7 also make this logic self-consistent.) Therefore, when a warrior breaks through to the planetary level, the mini-planet and special abilities are the foundation and precursor of the field. An apprentice level has no miniature planets in his dantian, no special abilities, and he doesn't even know his own attributes. What field is being released? Subscribe to one chapter just to talk about this issue. I like to devour this book very much. I have basically read it as long as the fandom is not poisonous. I hope the author will work hard in the future.

The author really doesn't want to change the previous exchange price. The third-level top-notch weapons are cheaper than the spirit of grass and trees. I understand that you want to suppress the protagonist's strength, but the planet-level nutritional cabin is at the same level as the wooden crystal, and the star-level is only twice as much. Author, tell me what you think, can a wooden crystal be promoted to a small level? I directly upgraded my nutritional meal to level nine. I really don't understand. .

Some book friends have always said that the protagonist cannot release the realm until he reaches the planetary level. I am more curious about where they come from. First, the original work makes it very clear that the realm is just a realm of martial arts. In the third chapter of the 50,000-year-old corpse, Chapter 18, 50,000 Years, you can see this passage: "He is a warrior! He must focus entirely on martial arts. Now, according to some things in the universe that "Hong" himself understands, although he is a "sixth planetary level", his realm in martial arts is already extremely high, and many star-level experts have not been able to have their own domain." You can understand what it means by yourself. Everyone has received nine years of compulsory education, and I don't need to say more. Second, the original work never explicitly stated that the planet-level gene energy must be released before the domain can be released. The following is an excerpt from the original text, Chapter 24 of Chapter 4, Nirvana of Life Realm: "There was a faint flash of lightning in the entire training room, which made Hong look a little shocked. The white-robed bald "Thunder God" who was sitting cross-legged in silence had a calm expression, but little sparks of lightning gradually appeared around his body. In just a moment, the entire training room turned into a thunder and lightning field, and electric snakes circulated." There is another sentence from the God of Thunder at the end: "The highest realm of 'Unity of Heaven and Man' in ancient Indian yoga legends, and the perfect realm of 'Unity of Human and Flesh' in Chinese Neijiaquan. Beyond them, one can step into the realm of the realm." Nowhere can it be stated that one must reach the planetary level in order to release the realm. Third, the only difference between the planetary level and the apprentice level is that one can release genetic energy and the other cannot. If you think that the existence of the field depends on its own energy supply, then why do you have to release the original gene energy? Isn't it possible to use mental power? Fourth, I will post a fragment of the original text first, selected from Chapter 29 of Chapter 4, Nirvana of Life. Luo Feng's responsibility: "As for those who are strong in the field, once they try their best, it will be very scary! Because they have been able to truly combine the genetic energy, physical strength, mental power, and consciousness, triggering the resonance of the universe." These are Babata's original words. We can clearly see that releasing the field does not require the release of the genetic energy, but only needs to have the genetic energy and perfectly combine it with strength, spirit, and consciousness. The real source of power in the field relies on the resonance with the universe. Fifth, I will post the original text first, selected from Part 7 Rising in the Universe Chapter 8 Domain, law: "Luo Feng's soul can clearly feel this strange energy. This is after breaking through to the cosmic level just now, with the help of the secret pattern of that day, the mind, the original force, the will, and the body naturally reached an extremely beautiful state of harmony. The forces even merged. The fused golden energy can actually deal with There is a control effect in the surrounding space. " This is the description of Luo Feng's golden-horned beast clone when it broke through the cosmic-level natural understanding field. It can be seen that it does not say that the original gene energy must be released, that is, the planet-level to release the field. The original text only said that the perfect combination of the four forces produced a golden energy, and this golden energy has a control effect. It can be seen here that Tomato is a supplement to the realm above, adding a golden energy. That is to say, as long as the mind, the original force, the will, and the body can naturally reach an extremely beautiful and harmonious state, and then the four forces are fused to produce golden energy, there will be a realm. It has nothing to do with whether the planetary level can release the original energy of genes. Finally, in conclusion, anyone can release the field as long as they meet the following two conditions: 1. There are four powers in the body: mind, force, will, and body; 2. The ability to achieve the perfect combination of the four powers. Now let's see if apprentice-level Lin Feng is satisfied. First of all, he is a living person, and he must have both will and physical strength. Second, he is a spiritual master and a martial artist. He has both telepathy and genetic abilities. The first condition is met. And Lin Feng's realm is high enough to perfectly combine these four powers, so why can't he release the field at the apprentice level? Finally, I'm very happy when someone gives me advice, but when you criticize me, can you please stop scolding me? If you really can't, bring the original text with you, and don't use fan fiction to criticize me, okay? I was almost exhausted last night looking for this information. I had been losing a lot of hair in the past two days, but I stayed up late last night. Well. In fact, every fanfic will have its own secondary setting. How can I write a fanfic without a secondary setting? But you can't use the secondary setting of other fans to say that what I wrote is not in line with the original work, right? Finally, if you find anything wrong with what I said, please come to me with the original text. I will humbly accept it and pin it for you. But forget about those based on feelings. This is my last time. Thinking about the plot every day has exhausted me. I really don't have the energy to find information and reply one by one. Please forgive me. My mind is dizzy, so let's leave it at that. As I said before, you can ask questions if you have any, but they must be well-founded. I won't reply to those who criticize me based on my feelings, but I won't block them either. Those who curse when they come up will be directly blocked and their comments will be deleted. That's all. I have to catch up on some sleep.

Author, you have too many minor flaws in your writing. The time before was a mess. I had 3,200 kilograms of mental power when I awakened in July. A month later, I only gained 100 kilograms on August 1st. Are you NC? Didn't you say that the protagonist is very diligent? Why do I feel that the protagonist doesn't know how to practice?

I feel like what I read is the original work, and it was published under a different name.

Please stop talking to the system, I feel the system is a bit cheap.

Yo, yo, how many comments have been deleted! I am more accepting of the others, but since there is a system, do you dare to write a more interesting article? There is also a system, but you are still thinking about Huyan's point of comparing money? You can buy whatever you want and sell it for more, right? Can you write novels with some intelligence?

Points can be calculated based on the brute force ratio between the opponent and the protagonist to avoid points depreciation in the middle and later stages. For example, if the protagonist is a first-level apprentice, he will get one point for killing a low-level beast soldier, no points for killing an ordinary animal, and four points for killing a high-level beast soldier.

How did you get out of the realm when you were at the apprentice level before you even reached the planet level? I was puzzled

The author has some parts of his own plot. Earlier, it was said that Hong and Thunder God entered the sea of ​​​​illusion, Hong was accepted as a disciple by the giant axe, and Thunder God was accepted as a disciple by the Lord of Darkness. Later, when he became the domain lord, Hong was accepted by Darkness as a disciple, and Thunder God was accepted by Bingfeng as a disciple. Another example is that the system can increase its gene multiplier by adding points. It said that it would not practice the Secret Book of Nine Tribulations, but later it would practice Nine Tribulations. The writing is inconsistent in many places. Is the outline not set properly? So that you forget what you wrote before?

The setting is too unreasonable. The points for killing monsters at the apprentice level can be maxed out. 1000 Points can be used to level up. The strongest person in the universe can be given away with just one click.

Change the name, add a system, and send it out

Where is the dignity of the strong? As a real combat leader, Hong will not ask the protagonist to do things for trivial matters. The protagonist, who had planet-level combat power, joined the Extreme Martial Arts School and surpassed Hong when the Extreme Martial Arts School could not provide any help. He also treated Hong with respect and docility, which was very poisonous and extremely poisonous.

Beautifully written and friendly to a childhood friend, isn't it? Now that you are strong and capable, isn't it normal to help him? Don't be a heartless and unscrupulous person. In short, it is easy to read this book in your spare time.

More refinement! Author Jun